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The Unforgiven

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Which Clan are better

The Unforgiven Clan
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The Apocalyptica Clan
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The Unforgiven

The members of the unforgiven clan are outcasts, set aside from the Vampires of the Apocalyptica who feed on the humans and leave them to die. The Unforgiven still feed of humans but yet dont kill them, they only loose a bit of blood yet the vampires of Apocalyptica find this wrong and believe they are stealing there prey.

This is set in modern time.

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Other: (Up for love)???
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This sounds interesting! ^_^ Can you give a little bit more of a description of the whole setting, if you don't mind? :wink:

Name: Kathleen (nickname Katie) Rose

Age: 18 (210)

Gender: Female

Good or bad: Apocalyptica (bad)

Personality: She's very loyal to her friends and thinks the friends that switched to the Unforgiven Clan are traitors. Nobody tick her off, however; it takes quite a bit to make her angry, but once she does, get out of the way! ^_^ She thinks very highly of herself, and can be quite snotty.

Appearance:
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History: She was born a vampire, so she's a pureblood. Even though she's dated a lot of guys, she just can't seem to find "the one". She's been searching desperately for him, and won't give up until she does.

Other: totally up for love! ^_^
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Apocalyptica are bad. Well as I said its set in modern time, the apocalyptica vampire live in a castle and are very powerful and strong and have strong leader yet the unforgiven clan are more light hearted and kind, they love humans and there pure souls.

We need leader of Apocalyptica. I will be leader of the forgiven. Also could the leader of the Apocalyptica possible be a male as both leaders fall in love, thats when the choas starts.
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I call shotgun on being leader of the Apocalyptica!

Name: Vincent Valois

Age: 308

Gender: Male

Good or bad: Apocalyptica (bad)

Personality: Vincent is generally very calm and calculating. He has little respect for the lives of Human or Vampire, though he has been known to value others. He can be unpredictable-he might show mercy towards one of his minions for committing a crime when, the previous day, he sentenced another minion to death for a similar crime. Although some Apocalyptica Vampires respect or even love Vincent, most obey him out of fear-there are few who can match him in combat. He is an acrobatic and fierce swordsman-some claim that he goes faster than the Human eye can see when he has a sword in his hand-and he is also a dangerous gunman, though certainly not the best in the clan.

Appearance: http://www.quizilla.com/user_images/A/A ... lestat.jpg

History: Born to an aristocratic French family, Vincent became a Vampire at a young age, and was driven out of France during his adolescence when it became apparent that he was responsible for a number of gruesome murders in his home city. He travelled around the world, acquainting himself with the ways of different kindred from around the world.
It is not known whether Vincent founded the Apocalyptica or if he joined it and took over as leader. Anyone who might know refuses to tell.

Other: Up for love, is rarely found without his antique rapier and a modern gun (he has access to the entire Apocalyptica arsenal).
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*Just because you want to be with one of my character Face engine :P, also it looks like you have Lestat from interview with the vampire. Good choice*
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Haha, I was merely jumping at the chance for power! But I was fully aware of the requirements for being leader of the Apocalyptica-that's why I've not made him completely and utterly insane!
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Name: Lucinda Jonas

Age: 408

Gender: female

Good or bad: Good Unforgiven Clan

Personality: she is kind and helpful, she loves her clan and her clan loves her. Yet she still has a bad side.

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History: She was chosen by the last leader Herald who believed in feeding off humans, yet his old follows joined the apocalyptica clan. She doesn't remember much before then

Other: She will have a relationship with the leader of Apocalyptica clan
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Your vamp's eyes are brilliant, Ech.
Name: Evie
Age: 220
Gender: Female
Good/Bad: Apocalyptica (bad)
Personality: Unlike Vincent, Evie is completely insane, and Apocalypticans sometimes have to restrain her. She doesn't care about human life or if they find out about vampires, she just wants to drink them. Sometimes she plays with her food, killing them slowly, torturing them, etc. She hates the Unforgiven.
History: She was found by some unnamed character (this can go on unknown or someone can claim to be that character) in Scotland and brought into the clan in the nineteenth century. This character is the one who turned her, just because s/he wanted to (she wasn't injured or anything like that).
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Other: Up for love. I'm thinking about her maybe being obsessed with Vincent, and that would bring MORE conflict with her and Lucinda. But Face, you sign off on this.
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I'm fine with that personally, but I will be faithful to Echelon's idea of Vincent falling in love with Lucinda.
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Of course! I just want Evie to be completely insane.
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brilliant idea :P, we just need some people to join.
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Name: Zire

Age: 216

Gender: Male

Good or bad: Apocalyptica (bad)

Personality: He is calm at almost all times. Does not value any life except his and his friends. cold hearted at times but is kind and warm towards those he loves.

Appearance: http://shirleyfoxcc.deviantart.com/art/vampire-44817754

History: Born to an noble Vampire family, is one of the last purebloods, joined the Apocalyptica after being chased by humans for several murders he did not commit.

Other: Up for love.
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**You seem a little out-numbered by the bad side Ech :P I is here so I is going to helpers you!**

Name: Delilah Crowley (Del)

Age: 210 (Appears to be 18)

Gender: Female

Good or bad: Unforgiven Clan Good

Personality: When she's around her friends, and not busy, she's pretty random and bubbly. However, once she gets around an Apocalyptica she's the exact oppisite. She's very cold to the Apocalyptica and wants nothing more that for them to die.

Appearance: She's here but her eyes are here

History: She was born into a vampire family, so she's a pure blood. Her parents were killed by the Apocalyptica and her two elder brothers joined them.

Other: Up for love with either side... I guess
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*wow we have some sexy people here lol and thanks Chupatoasta*
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everyone wants to be bad

Name:Oliver [Ollie] rich

gender:male

good or mad:good

personality:happy normaly fears death and pain

apperance:green hair, long black coat, green jeans, red vans

history:born in ireland became vampire at 16 has stayed in japan a ireland for most of life until joining unforgiven clan

other:maybe open to join evil team and open for love



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