Young Writers Society


Candles on the Water

300 posts1 ... 16, 17, 18, 19, 20
User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Emily


The Master threw Emily to the ground in a fit of rage. "It looks like we won't be needing your services any longer." He aimed his gun at Emily's head.

Emily, RUN! Chase and Abi screamed in her head, but she was frozen to the spot. She couldn't do anything.

He pulled the trigger and shot. The force of the blow sent Emily flying backwards to the front door, where she laid in a crumpled heap.

**No worries, I am not killing Emily. But everybody thinks she is dead right now**




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 4013
Reviews 201
[s]**I hope everybody's still in Abi's aunt's house.**



Jake

Jake heard the gunshot and before he knew it Abi was shouting at every one.
"No body do anything. I'm going to go down there and see what happens. Please nobody follow me." She said.
"Abi's right," Melpomene said,"Either we loose two or we all die." Jake couldn't believe his ears, but stayed quiet.



Abigayle

Abi, Chase thought, you don't have to do this.
Yes I do, she thought back, it's the only way to help her. Then she made the long walk to the front door.[/s]
Last edited by peanut19 on Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1203
Reviews 228
They are not in Abi's Aunt's house. They left because Emily warned them.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

Attack, IM, or PM me at any time. I will respond. ;)




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 4013
Reviews 201
**Crap sorry. Ignore that other post then**


Abigayle



Because of Emily's warning they all fled. Melpomene set up a makeshift campsite in the middle of the woods 10 miles south of Abi's aunt's house. But Abigayle knew something had happened.
Emily, hey what happened over there? Abi and Chase both thought. But Emily's reply was always the same: silence.
Chase, Abi thought, I want to go find her. What if something happened to her. They could have killed her.
Abi, don't do this. Your fate will be the same if they find you. Chase answered.


Jake

Jake watched Abi from his tent. Her eyes were far away, and from the look on her face she was worried. He could also see Chase twitching in unconsciousness, Ellie hovering over him. Kate was sitting by the table, and he was restless. I'm leaving, he thought, and now I'm serious.
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Nevermind
Last edited by Princess on Sun Feb 15, 2009 8:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 4013
Reviews 201
You people need to make up your minds!!!! Which post is wrong the first or the second?? (No offense to anybody, but really)
~peanut~
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
x
Last edited by Princess on Sun Feb 15, 2009 9:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Emily

Inky blackness surrounded her and pushed her down. It felt like she had a heavy weight pressing down on her. The world was empty space, but strangely enough, she could hear. She heard heavy footsteps walk towards her and stop.

"She's dead. She stopped breathing." That was strange. Then, all was quiet. He had left for good.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1203
Reviews 228
Chase

Emily?

Chase?

Emily looked up in the inky world and saw Chase standing in front of her.

What the-???
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

Attack, IM, or PM me at any time. I will respond. ;)




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Emily

She slowly stood up, but when she lifted up, she left her physical body behind. Weird.

Chase, what's going on?

He shrugged. Suddenly, Emily felt something grasp her arm, but when she looked down, her arm was transparent, and nothing was touching it. But she could definitely feel something trying to lift her up.

Abbie is trying to help you, Chase said.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1203
Reviews 228
**giggle-giggle. Wrong Abbie/Abi. Giggle-giggle**

Chase

Abi was leaning over Emily's body, tears rolling off her face.

Abi, she's okay.
"A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step." ~ Lao-tzu

Attack, IM, or PM me at any time. I will respond. ;)




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 1040
Reviews 9




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Shes not tecnically dead yet. Lol have you been following this whole thing?




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1999
Reviews 106
Emily

Woah.. So.. Wait a minute.. Am I dead? Emily franticially looked around, trying to get her bearings.

Chase shook his head and laughed. Nope. You are as dead as I am.

Emily just stared at him. Duh




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 4013
Reviews 201
Abigayle

Chase what's going on with Emily? I don't know what I just did. Abi was terrified, she wasn't sure what was going on. She could hear Emily's confused thoughts and her conversation with Chase, but it didn't make any sense.
There is a light in you, a Vision in the making with sorrow enough to extinguish the stars. I can help you.
~And The Light Fades


The people down here are our zombies, who should be dead or not exist but do.
~Away From What We Started


P.S Got YWS?



Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.
— Dr. Seuss