The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Colton:

Colton wanted to promise her the world, promise her anythin gand everything. He just held her close kissing her.

"Um, sorry to interupt, but visitiing hours are over." The nurse said wlaking in.


"Oh, right, thanks." He said leading Blake out of hte hospital. "I'm sure Nick will be just fine."
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Nick

Tubes were sticking down his nose and his throat. He felt horrible but stronger than the pain was his fear for Sabrina's safety. She was pulsing through his veins now. She was like his second life. All that had happened to her in the past, he knew now that they could hear each other's minds. Her life played in his head like a movie. His eyes slowly closed and he emerged into dreamland.
I was born in New Orleans over two hundred years ago. My mother was a free slave and she made a living off of prostituting herself. She was beautiful. Her hair was a long ebony black and her skin was creamy caramel. I loved her more than life itself but I worried about her. There were rumors amongst the Creoles that scared me. Blood-thirsty Gods were lurking around luring beautiful women into their wake. I tried to stop her from doing what she did but she only told me I was too young and naive to understand. So one cold dark night we were running to another home with a man who she thought we'd be safe with. Then, out of nowhere a man with ivory skin appeared before us. He was beautiful, unlike any man I've saw before. His eyes were a deep liquid gold and his lips were crimson, blood filled. My mom prayed and begged him not to take our souls and he complied only for one thing in return. He asked for me. He wanted to make me his bride because I was beautiful and he coveted all that was beautiful. When she refused, he killed her and took me off to some far away place. He made me do things that I didn't want to do, like drink blood. Then, the taste revolted me and I felt like a monster.
"This will be your survival and your strength once I make you immortal." he said. For a while I did not know his name, but soon he told me but I knew that I did not want to be with him for eternity. Though he wasn't cruel to me, I could never forgive himself for killing my mother.

"Why do you care for that whore? She could have a chance but she wasn't smart enough...but you...you are destined for this life. I can smell it in your veins."
"No, I am not." I managed, and then I tried to escape and he brought me back, sorrow in his eyes.
Finally, I understood that the only way that I was going to escape was if I became like him. So I seduced him until he agreed to make me a Goddess. When the night fell, the pain of turning surged through me and then I was apart of him. His thoughts and feelings were mine. At first I wanted to stay with him, I needed him but I found the strength to leave and he did not follow. He couldn't, I was too fast for him. Ever since then, I've been roaming the Earth not feeling like I belonged anywhere knowing that deep down I could exist with him. I am evil because it keeps the pain from hurting. I am bad because for once I have the upper hand. I can not kill you because you remind me of my creator. His name was Nikolas, and you're sweet like him but there's a darkness deep in your soul that resembles his. Nick, I am afraid that I love you and I am sorry that I have brought you into this world.
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Blake

We were standing side by side when we were leaving the hospital, and guess what? It was raining.

"Greeeeat." I rolled my eyes.

"Don't worry, Selen's house in't far."


Sin

I was at the club tending drinks, when was anyone going to show up?
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Im really lost, I read my last post and the reply but i dont no what to put now?
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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Selen:

Selen rolled her neck as she walked around her apartment. She didn't have to work tonight. She rubbed her eyes as she laid on the couch and turned the tv on. She didn't know what to do. She aws bored. She heard the door open and she looked up as Blake and Colt walked in.

"Hey." She yawned.

"You need to sleep." Colt said. She could hear the vampires outside. She had made it back right before the rain started.

"I'm fine, I wish this rain would stop. I could go do something." She sighed.

"YOur not going anywhere." he replied walking over and picking her up carrying her to her room.

"I don't want to sleep." She yawned. He laid her on the bed and shut the door. She drifted to sleep quickly her dreams filled with Nick and Sabrina. She liked Nick, she knew that. But Sabrina was standing in her way. She had Nick under her spell. Selen whimpered and rolled over. Life was not fair.


Colton:

Colton walked back into the room to find Blake looking in the cabnits and empty bottle of whiskey on the counter.

"What are you doing?" He demanded.

"Riding you of this temptation." She rpelied.

"Blake, whiskey is what keeps me from killing someone. Your tempting me to kill by throwing out th ewhiskey. When it rains is even harder." He replied in a low ton.
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Blake

"Too bad." I had to get up on the counter top on my knees to reach the top top top shelf.

"Honeslty, sweetheart." he wrapped his arms around my waist and carefully brought me down.

"If you weren't already dead I'd complain and nag you how Whiskey could kill you!" I said when he pinned my hips to the counter and kissed me.

He pulled away smiling. "You already do that, remember?"

I rolled my eyes. "That's not the point."
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Rebbecca

I walked up to the bar. Sin was there.

"Im sorry about earlier" She said to him, "I shouldn't off done that"
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Colt:

"Yes it is, because it won't hurt me." He replied with a smile as he kissed her again.

"It's not good, what if you get drunk!" She demanded.

"I won't, cause I don't let myself. Plus, whiskey doesn't affect me." He smiled

"IT's not good for you!" She hissed.

"It's not bad for me." He smiled.
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Blake

"What are you trying to say?" I crossed my arms and smirked.

"Well, I'm not TRYING to say anything. I'm SAYING that it doesn't kill me." His arms were wrapped around my waist.

I raised an eyebrow.

"What?" he laughed.

"Oh, nothing." I said turning my face to the other side when he tried to kiss me again. Then laughed.


Sin

"Well, you should be." Sin joked. "No, I'm totally kidding, it's fine."

"No it's not." Becca said.

"Really, it's ok." Sin nodded. "What would you like to drink?
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Colton:

"Your a tease." He said pulling back and grabbing a bottle she hadn't found popping the top of it.

"Give me that!" She growled grabbing for it. He put it up in the air so she couldn't reach it.

"No." He smiled as he took a shot hten held it up again.

"I'll get it!" She growled

"No you wont." He smiled.
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Blake

"Colton! Give me the damn bottle!" I made a jump for it, my fingernails barely touched the bottom.

He laughed. "Now don't you wish you were tall?"

I glared. I jumped again, making a sound as I did. I made a pouty face. "Give me that bottle"
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"Vodka and coke please" She sighed "Heres the money"

She held the money out on her hand but sin placed his hand over and closed her money in her palm.

"On the house Rebbecca" he grinned,

He started to breath heavy and then placed his hand over his mouth and walked behind the bar.

"Sin?" I asked as I ran behind the bar after him.
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Colton:

"Such a pouty face." He laughed kissing her fast before she could stop him. "your not getting it." She made another jump for it missing and she growled.

"Why won't you just give it?" She demanded.

"Cause I don't want to put y'all in danger." He replied.

"you wouldn't." She hissed.

"You never know."
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Blake

I rolled my eyes again. "No you won't."

"You don't know that sweetheart." he smiled.

"Of course I do." I knew one way to get the bottle from him and I took it. I put both hands on his face and pulled him into me so I could kiss him. He did exactly what I thought he would he put both of his arms around my waist, he dropped the bottle and it crashed to the floor the glass exploding and sending golden water crashing around the hardwood. I smiled.

"Problem solved." I laughed.
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Colton:

Colton hissed and then laughed kissing her. "I still have more." he replied.

"Which you aren't going to get." Then she smiled. "YOu can't drink it if you want to kiss me. I don't want to taste it when I kiss you!" She smiled triuphently.

"You drive a hard bargin. I can't fight that one." He laughed.
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