The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Colton:

Colton finnally finished and he hurried to the bathroom washing the blood from his hands.

"You can move now." he said looking at her when he walked back out. The smell of her blood was still in the air, but it wasn't as bad.


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Blake

"I can't believe I got my ass kicked by a vampire." I growled. I lifted my shirt up to my ribs to see that it looked like I had been in a fight with a gang or something.

"You better start believing it." He said he looking too.

"Look at the scratches, vampires may have enough strength to drag me anywhere, but they don''t have enough power to make it look like I've been knifed." I said brushing the pads of my fingers against the wounds.

"You were dragged over glass, Sweetheart."
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Colton:

"That would explain alot." She said as she touched the wounds gengerly.

"They'll heal up. Come on, we should probably make sure Sin isn't out to kill anyone." Colton replied.

"What did he say to you about Selen?" Blake asked.

"Nothing." He replied turning to go to the door.
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Blake

I grabbed his arm and slowly turned him around. "Don't worry about it. He won't hurt her. He's just angry."

"Yeah and what happens when I find Selen dead?" he said bitterly.

I grabbed his chin tightly wand turned him to face me. "Sin will never hurt anyone, he won't hurt me and he won't hurt Selen. Trust me, I know him better than you do."
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Colton:

"Anything happens to her and I'll string him up!" HE growled. "I can't let her die, then Trent's family dies."

"He won't do anything." She said.

"You never know with vampires." He growled.

*sorry, short*
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Blake

My hand tightened around his chin. "You don't know Sin the way you think you do. Please, Colton just, trust me." I said asking for trust in the depts of my eyes.


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**It's fine**

Colton:

Colton clenched and unclenched his teeth and then relaxed. "Fine. But still."

"He won't do anything." She said firmly.

"Ok." He looked down at her eyes and the memory of her kiss ht him hard. Hard enough to lose control for a minute and pull her close kissing her.
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Blake

When he kissed me I jumped, not breaking the kiss just a little suprised. I pulled him closer my hands letting go of his chin to pull him forward behind his neck. For a minute I let myself think we could be together then I pulled away.

"Did I hurt you?" he asked.

"No. I hurt myself." she said and stormed out of the house.
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Colton:

Colton watched her go and then was after her quickly. "What do you mean?" He asked. there wasn't pain induced adrinelene in her system.

"Nothing, leave me alone, I have to get to wrok." She growled.

"I'm sorry." He said softly stopping.
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Blake

I turned around. I could tell when a vampire was searching my mind, my emotions and everything else. I could already sense it.

"Look, you didn't hurt me. And your damn robotic senses are NOT correct everytime you search my emotions, I've lived with vampire I know how it all works. And yeah I do like you, and I'm starting to care about you, ALOT. But c'mon lets face it, I kill your kind, I'm human your a vampire, you live, while I die, it's all the same." I couldn't help but say. "And trust me it's really not your fault and yeah of course we can still be friends that make out but we can NEVER have anything solid." I felt bad for saying all of that. I did like him ALOT, but it was the way it had to be.
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***I gotta go. Beon tonight. ***

Colton:

Colton felt like his heart had been stabbed over and over. "Fine. Have fun at work." he said turning and heading towards the bar. He needed whiskey and to check on Selen.


*Sorry it's short*
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Blake

I could feel his emotions too, I felt like I'd killed him and he'd taken a part of me too. But it was true, he could find a pretty vampy chick and they could live happily ever after for all eternity, and then she can live the rest of her life alone and then die, no one come to her funeral and then she can rot in a casket underground. That thought brought tears to her eyes. She felt around on her stomach the pain was there but just a little tingle.
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Sabrina

She hit Sin in the face one more time, sending him skidding across the room and then turned back to her prey. The other humans were trying to help Sia which only made the challenge even more fun. Adrenaline pumping in her veins, she raced toward them only to be confronted by the boy.

Nick

"She doesn't seem to want to hurt me. Selen...get Sia in the back...Now!" he whispered.
"But, she'll hurt you..." Selen protested, her eyebrows furrowing.
"Go!" he said, and then Selen helped Sia to the back. Nick watched them go and then turned to look at Sabrina. Her golden eyes were enraged, but he was right, she wasn't going to hurt him.
"Mmm." she purred, sniffing him.
Nick remained paralyzed as if a snake bit him and the venom was setting in. He could feel his heart beating against his chest and sweat trickling down his face but he wasn't scared...he was awe-struck. She was so beautiful, a Goddess and she was touching him, her arms wrapping around his waist just as they had done before.
"I like you." she whispered.
He nodded, and then tentatively touched her arm. It stung at first but then he began to take in the coolness of her skin. Then, he forced himself to look into her eyes and that proved to be a mistake. He was hers now. His mind and his feelings.
Move aside, Nick. I don't want to hurt you...I just want to feed.
Nick knew that he shouldn't move aside but the hunger and sorrow in her voice pained him for some reason he felt sorry for the creature. Slowly he leaned his head forehead, taking in the scent of her skin. It was sweet and somewhat bitter. Their lips met and all of reality crashed down on him. He could see his future and his pass, it passed before him in darkness and then a bright light. Something warm trickled down the side of his jaw and a faint pain shot through his veins.
I'm sorry
He fell back and then Sabrina walked pass him.
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Sia

Once out of sight of Sabrina and the others, Sia quickly got up and started running back the way they had came.

"What the hell are you doing? You are going to get yourself killed!" Selen cried.

"The only way out is past Sabrina, and we have to get out of here before we get ourselves trapped," but before the words even left Sia's mouth Sabrina came tearing down the hall, face contorted with emotional pain and hunger.

Sia grabbed hold of Selen's arm and rushed to the other end of the hall where a door was located. But upon reaching it, they found it to be locked.

Evil, almost maniacal laughter, came from the end of the hall. Sabrina's fangs were out and glistening and her hair was wildly askew.

Sia and Selen stood there, helpless.
I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.




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Selen:

Selen's heart was pounding even when she tried to stop it.

COLTON! COLTON HELP ME PLEASE! She screamed trying to find him.

Where are you? He demanded. He sounded straied.

The club, PLEASE help!

Whose after you? He asked.

Some girl!

Where is Sin?

I don't know! She yelled abck standing in front of Sia.
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