The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Sabrina

She could feel the tears in her soul but they didn't rain down her cheeks. Again she had condemned a soul to nothing but hell. A part of her still thirsted for his blood and his warmth and him, but she didn't deserve to covet him, he deserved to be with a human who could love him, instead of who he reminded her of. Sighing, she jumped off of the building and landed on her heals. The sun was high in the sky. She needed to find some place dark to rest.

Nick

Nick jumped out of the dream gasping for breath. When someone else's life was passing before your eyes it took a lot out of you. Looking around he assessed the white walls the floors and the curtain pulled around his bed. His heart monitor was moving slowly yet erratically. The soft beat let him know he was still alive.

*Can Selen come and visit Nick. I think it will be interesting if Nick loves both Selen and Sabrina*
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Blake

I held Colton's hand as they entered the club. Then we saw Sin making out with Becca.

"Oh, my God!" I whispered and ran out yanking Colt with me out the door and we both started laughing. "That is so discusting."
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COlton:

"No different hten me and you." he replied.

'But it's SIN!" She laughed.

"True." He smiled. "And he see's it as you when you kiss me." He smiled kissin gher softly. "Let's leave him to his lover ,we'll go find something to do."


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Blake

I smiled, "oohh, like what?" I grinned.

"We'd find something to do." he laughed against my mouth.

"Oh, really?" I laughed.
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Colton smiled an dkissed her again. "I'm sure there ar etons of things for us to do around here. Just come up iwth one." He replied kissing her again. The taste of her blood lingereed in his throat. He hushed the ovice inside of him leading her around town.

*Tears*
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Blake

"How about we sit on a roof and watch the stars. Let's get up on the clubs roof." She smiled.
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Colton:

COlton led her up to the house and got up on the top of the roof. He pulled her close as they watched the stars.

"It's beautiful." She whispered.

"You are too." He smiled kissing her.

"Thanks." She smiled. "Your not ugly either."

"Thank you." He smiled kissing her neck and then her cheek, and then her lips.
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Blake

I laughed as we shared stories about our life.

"Colton, I think I might actually be crazy, but I love you." I felt myself say.
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Colton:

Colton laughed. "I must be extremly crazy too." He smiled.

"Why?" She laughed.

"I'mm falling in love with a human." He replied. "Which means even if you leave me, I'm going to be in love with you for eternity." he sighed kissing her softly.


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Blake

I leaned against him, "what happens when I die?" I asked him.

I felt him stiffen.
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Colton finally shrugged. "I don't know what I'll do with myself." He didn't want to think about that. HE didn't want to think about not being withe her.

"You'll move on." She said.

"No I won't, I'll probably kill myself." he replied
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Blake

"You can't, don't kill yourself, find someone else. When I die, hopefully a while from now. Just, don't hurt yourself." I held his hand.
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Colton:

Colton shook his head. 'You don't understand." He said softly. "Once I fall in love, I can't do it again."


**Tears***
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Blake

I blinked. "That's not true. Sin can fall in love over and over again." I said truthfully.

"Sin, is older, there are different types of vampires, Blake." he said lacing my fingers through his.

"That's not fair." I said.

"We're talking about fairness?" he laughed.

"It isn't funny, Colton. I get to die and then you have to live here remembering me? Well damn, that just sucks."
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Colton nodded. "That' sjust me." he replied softly. "You got it good."

"But it's not fair to you." She replied.

"It's perfectly fair. I don't have a soul." He replied smiling a little. "Least that is what I'm told. I don't deserve happieness for the rest of my life."


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