The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Sin

"Good God, that doesn't look like they dragged her, it looks like they knifed her. Damnit! I trusted you to take care of her Colton!"

"She left for work." he said.

I looked down at Blake her face was completely white.


Blake

"Sin, leave him alone."

My stomach hurt like a.... well, it really hurt.


Sin

"Your shirt is ripped to hell." Then I looked at her neck, there were bite marks. I smelled Colton on her neck. "You fed off of her?! I'm going to kill you Colton!!!!" I shouted.
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*i'll wait till you lot get back to the club to post*
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Colton:

"That was HER idea!" Colton hissed. "I took care of her until she didn't let me anymore. Icouldn't follow her in the sun!"

"I"ll deal with you later." Sin hissed.

Even if I have to get to you through Selen. Sin hissed in his head.

"Touch Selen and I'll kill you!!!" He hissed clenching his fist.
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Sin

"I'd like to see you try! Since I'm already dead, remember that kid. I'm older than you. Don't touch Blake EVER again."

"You know I did what you asked!" Colton yelled, I didn't flinch

we were the same height.

I growled. "Don't you dare say you did what I asked, look at her." When he didn't I yelled. "I SAID LOOK AT HER!!!"


Blake

Somehow I found enough strength to get up on my knees.

"Would you two stop it?! Sin he was taking care of me, I wanted to leave, it's not his fault." I clutched my stomach.

"Look, Blake Since you like taking sides with him, you can stay here with him." Sin growled, he wasn't thinking straight, he slammed the door and left.

**Sin is now back at the bar**
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Sin entered the room as I awoke.

"Have a nice sleep beautiful" he smiled as he sat down on the bed next to me,

"Yes very good thanks" I grinned,

I placed my two finger on his collar,

"Blood?" I asked puzzled,

"Oh My nose bled" He said as he rolled his eyes.

As I still held his collar in my fingers I pulled him done and kissed him on his blood tasting lips.
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Sin

I kissed her as long as I pleased, I knew what I had to do. I pulled away.

"Becca, we can't. I'm sorry." I pulled away and put my face in my hands. "Your human I could hurt you. I'm sorry." I shook my head.
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Colton:

Colton leaned against the wall gritting his teeth.

"YOu won't hurt me." She said pain filling her voice.

"You don't know that." He replied.

"YEs, I do."
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Sabrina

She stared at the girl, enjoying the fear plain on her face.
"Hello," Sabrina purred.
"Hey..." the girl stammered.
"Why are you so scared? Is it my fangs?" She opened her mouth and let her teeth glitter against the lights that danced around the room. The girl turned an off-white but before a scream could sputter out of her lips, Sabrina closed her mouth and smiled.
"I just want a drink."
"What?"
"You know, a Bloody Mary. The other girl didn't make it right. She forgot to add the blood."
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Sia

Sia started to back up into the bar.

"Whats the matter?" the girl asked, the enjoyment plain on her face. "All I want is a drink," Her fangs glistened.

Sia backed up into some stacked glass bottles filled with all sorts of alcoholic drinks. The bottles fell off the shelf and showered onto Sia and the girl, shattering and slicing into Sia's skin while the drink rained down.

The girl stood above her, eyeing the blood trickling off Sia's face. Her pupils widened.
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Sabrina

Sabrina stared at the luscious scarlet feast raining down this girl's face. Her stomach twisted and curled, tying in knots. Hunger filled her eyes and with unimaginable speed she jumped at the girl.
"This blood will suffice." she hissed, clutching the girl's throat.

Nick

He had tried to calm his nerves down, but the buzz wasn't yet gone. Then, the sound of something crashing made him turn out of the backroom and head for the bar again. Sia was on the ground and Sabrina was just about to feed on the blood that was dripping down her face. Sin had caught wind of what was going on and attacked Sabrina.
"I think he's time for you to leave." he said, angrily.
"But the party was just getting started," she replied, slapping Sin across the face. Sin fell back and then he looked up, anger burning in his golden brown eyes.
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Selen:

Selen ran over to Sia and quickly pulled her away cleaning the blood off her face and glaring at anyone that dared get near them. Nick walked over.

"I don't know if Sin can hold her off." He muttered.

"We just have to get the smell of the blood gone, it will help." She replied as she took the rags outside and lit them on fire then coming back and making sure the bleeding had stopped.
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Sia


She watched everything in a daze. Why had she even walked into the night club?

Selen and Nick were cleaning her face with rags, which stung like mad. Sia could see Sabrina, in the far back of the club being held back by Sin, but it seemed pointless. Sabrina's eyes were filled with hate and hunger.

Just then, the door to the bar opened, and in walked


*Opening for someone else*
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Blake

"Why do you believe there is so much good in me?" he looked like he was in pain.

"Why do you keep saving me?" I asked.

He was quiet.

"That's what I thought." I said and stood up.
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Colton:

Colton looked at her. "I"m not going to talk while I fix that up." He said. "That way I don't have to breath."

"Ok." She replied. He stopped breathing and walked over to her with some stuff working on sewing the wounds up.
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Blake

She felt helpless, she felt restless. But she layed there until he would say he was finished. She closed her eyes and rested her hands on top of her ribs, there were only minor scratches. She tried to relax, she tried not to think about everything and give herself a complete headache.

**sorry all I've got :? **
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