The Night Club (Curious Fangs)

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Colton:

"What you don't relieze, Miss Human, is that that bottle keeps my thirst down. It doesn't harm me in any way, it does me good." he hissed. "And if I find another bottle and you drain it, I might drain you!" HE hissed turning to go in search for another bottle.

"No you won't." She laughed. He let his fangs slip out and his face turn mean then turned to face her.

"You sure about that?" he hissed.
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Blake

I nodded. "Positive, Mr.Macho." I joked.

"Damn!" he shouted.

"What? What now?" I asked walking to the kitchen with him.

"There's no more damn whiskey, Blake I'm going to kill you." He growled.

"I bet." I joked. "Look, you can feed off me tonight again. I've been feed off before, not counting yetserday."

"By Sin?" Colton asked.

I shook my head. "By bad vampires, I was in a comma for three weeks."
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Colton:

Colton took a deep breath, big mistake. "That makes me feel better." He hissed. He walked to the window looking outside. The rain had stopped. "Stay here, I'm going to get some more whiskey."

"NO!" She growled.

"You leave and I'll track you back down." He replied.

"You go for whiskey and you won't be able to find me." She growled.

"Hun, your blood is one of a kind, don't test my tracking skills." He growled.
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Blake

"Why are you so help bent on getting whiskey?! What's with you and whiskey." I asked.

"You know damn well." He growled back.

I slammed the door closed and stood infront of it, I put my hands on my hips. "Your not getting any whiskey."
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Colton:

Colton swallowed even though he didn't need to. He clenched his teeth. He used whiskey to quiet his thirst.

Selen, if you hear me, bring home some whiskey. He called to her. He heard a faint reply and then walked to the living room sitting down and looking up at the roof.

'You give up, that easy?" She demanded.

"For now.' he replied.

"That's comforting." She replied sarcastically.
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Blake

"I don't believe you. Well, since it stopped raining I guess I'll be going." I said opening the door. "See ya, thanks for everything."

"Blake?" he asked.

I turned around.

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Colton:

"Where are you going?" he asked.

"Work." She replied.

"Suns out, so you'll be fine. Have fun I guess." he replied. She nodded and then left. Once he heard her leave the building he ran to the sewers and made his way to the closest store, he needed whiskey.
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Karven

Karven stood watching Sabrina. Silly vampire he laughed in his head. Then he looked over at Sin, Sin looked back and gave him an evil grin. A human girl danced near Sin. I could smell her blood from here, it was very pure. Rebbecca i heard someone call her. sabrina walked back near me.

"Whats up with you" She asked as Karven held his hand up to his mouth.

Karven moved his hand "Theres something about that humans blood, Its very pure and strong"

"Next victim then" Sabrina replied

Rebbecca

I looked over at the two people standing in the corner, they kept looking at me. What was there problem. I carried on danceing. Sin also watched me. He licked his lips. I went to sit at the bar and Sin followed me and sat down beside me.
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Blake

As soon as I got outside, my cell phone rang. It was another FBI agent.

"What do we got?" I asked on my cell phone.

"Well, female, vampire, attacked a female last night."

"I'll be right there." I said, "I just need some-" I looked around and I saw two male vampires, and they looked hungry. "Jessie, I'll call you back. I'm a little..... busy." I said closing the phone. The vampires talked in a different language.

"Stay away from me." I said, growling.

"Breakfast." he grinned.

But I thought vampires couldn't feed in the daytime? What the hell?!

I started running, my feet went out from under me. I screamed as both started dragging me. I felt the front of my shirt rip. I felt my stomach become cut. I tried to grab onto the cement.

"Get off of me!!!" I screamed.

One of the vampires turned me over, almsot giving me whiplash. He grabbed my neck and sunk his teeth in.

Sin

"So, do you want another drink?" I asked Becca.

"That would be nice." She smiled.

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"hmm thanks" I said as i started to fall slepp, "Im really tired though"

"I might have somewhere you can sleep" He replied,

"really?"She smiled
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Colton:

Colton was walking through the sewers when he smelled her blood. He set the bottles down and jumped up to the surface hissing when he saw the others. He slammed into the first throwing it back. He stood over Blake's body hissing.

"This is my human." He hissed.

"She has no markings of a vampire." One laughed in the Egyption language.

"I don't mark my humans, leave." Colton hissed. "Or I will kill you!" The looked at Blake then him. He towered over both by a good foot. They turned and left. He quickly ipcked her up and slipped into the sewers grabbing his drinks and then racing to Selen's house to fix her up some. She hadn't lost to much blood. The smell of her blood was killing him though. He stopped breathing and got her to Selen's house and then started to bandage her up before moving away and gulping down some whiskey as he hid the rest of the bottles.
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Blake

I felt tears aactually coming out of my eyes, I knew I needed stitches and I was shaking beyond violently. I couldn't speak, I couldn't think. I couldn't feel anything.

"Blake?" I heard Sin's voice in my mind. "Are you OK?" he asked in my mind again.

"Sin." I said weakly.

"I'll be right there." He whispered through my mind.

Sin

"You can crash here, Becca. I have a room in the back, right now I need to be with Blake, she's my sister." I quickly kissed Becca on the mouth and left.

It didn't take me long to burst through the door, Selen, it was Selen's house it had her scent all over it. I saw Colton drinking from a bottle and then I saw Blake on the floor, bandaged up but shaking bleeding and crying.

"WHAT THE HELL?!" I shouted.
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Colton:

"Some vampires jumped her on the way to her work." He said standing away from her. "YOu've been around her blood longer, you should stich her up and all. I'm not strong enough against her blood." He said taking another swig. It didn't make him drunk, just siddated his thirst.

"Do you have the equipment here?" He saked.

"Bathroom, top shelf." Colton replied.
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I tasted blood on my lips and licked them. "Why did his lips have blood on them?" I asked myself as I walked out to the back of the club. There was a comfy bed and I laid on it. Made myself comfy and feel asleep, knowing someone might come in a wake her up.
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