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Eunice

"Zire are you alright" she said once she had fineshed the embracing,

"I surpose I feel ok" He replyed as he nearly falls, and Eunice catches him.

"Zire, you need to feed of me then you have the freedom to do as you wilt" She says as she kisses his neck.
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Just like every night has it's dawn.


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**Oh, sorry guys. I had a HUGE misunderstanding with Echelon, but it's cleared up now. I'll post my info in a little bit.**
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural




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Name: Kairi

Age: 16

Race: White

Job: music store clerk

Gender: female

Apperance: http://static.flickr.com/171/482107679_2525c9e1a0_m.jpg

Other: up for love
Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural




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kriss replyed "I do music in collage, Its the best"

" Why'd I blert out I was bi! he thought as he suddered.

"Wow cool, as you guessed I'm a babysitter" Ballow said in a soft tone of voice,

"Well of course, brilliant job... I love children" Said Kriss
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Ballow

Ballow glanced at him shocked, "You like children?"

Kriss raised an eyebrow, "Don't you?"

Ballow laughed as if Kriss had asked a stupid question and to Ballow it was, "Course not! Sure they're sweet little dumplings when they're happy, but have you seen them on a bad day?"

Jess and Jack ran past swatting Ballow on both sides of his legs then they ran into a corridoor of books.

Ballow squinted at them and they giggled, "Specially when they know you have a impatient personality like myself."

Kriss was staring at him and the twins with an amused smile, "They just want you attemtion, you know?"

Ballow ;et out a sigh, "I suppose you're right, but they are, "he paused to glance at the place the twins were hiding and continued, "little devils."

The squealed and ran away. Kriss laughed, "No matter how much you sya you hate them it looks as if you're still having fun."

Ballow laughed, "Yeah, torturing them is fun."

He glanced at Kriss - the awkwardness of what he had said before was long gone now. Ballow stared at him for a second before asking, "So, uhh, you have anymore siblings?"
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*Hey, guys, I'm out, sorry. It's getting too confusing for me.*
Sorry, I don't have any leeches on my speed dial.
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Zire

"Feed?" I asked "On you?"
"Its an old tradition of Vampires" She answered
"So i have to drink your blood and?" I asked yet another question
"And then i will have to teach you the ways of the vampire, i will be your Sire" She said
I thought for a while, it would not have been very hard drinking blood from someone you've never met, but drinking blood from Eunice was certainly awkward. She held up her hand.
"Drink from my hand, only later will you be able to feed from anyone's neck." She said "You need practice for that"
I took her hand and felt my canines extending and pulling me towards her hand. I picked a location where the blood seemed to flow and bit there, then i drank.




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Okay, can someone bring me in?
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Yeah, can someone bring me in, too?
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Cristina

I watched as Cleo and Edward talked about his sister.

Edward was really handsome, I thought in my head. I watched sadly as Edward let the bookstore. I felt like a part of me left with him too. I didn't know why I felt like that, but I pushed it to the back of my mind and started placing books on their shelfs again.
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Edward

Cleo and I met in the park and searched for my sister with no headway. It was as if she had vanished without a trace.

"Sorry, but I have to go now." Cleo said. It was starting to get dusk and was at twilight. I thanked her for helping me and she left. While I was leaving, I bumped into someone whose Cds flew all over the grass in the park.

"Oh, sorry." The girl squeaked. She had pretty red hair and a small face. I looked down and replied,

"Sorry myself." I leaned down to help her gather her disks. When I had stacked them neatly I handed them to her and our eyes met.

"Thanks.", she said slowly. "My name is Kairi."

"Nice to meet you. My name is Edward.", Kairi smiled and reached out to shake my hand, but she couldn't hold all her CDs withut them falling everywhere again. I leaned down and quickly snatched them all up.

"How 'bout I help you with that?", she stared at me for a few seconds then replied,

"It's okay. I've got it." I handed them to her reluctantly. She seemed quite stubborn.

"So, I guess I'll see you around."

"Sure. I work at the music store if you ever want to drop by."

"I guess that explains your CDs.", I mumbled. She smiled,

"Yeah."

"I work at the book store if you ever want to drop by." I winked at her and started walking off. "See you around."
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(brilliant :D)

Kriss

"well i did have a bother but he dissapered and all his mates said he was turned into a vampire" he laughed "silly kids"

"Maybe he has" Ballow said back, then laughed so Kriss wouldn't think thats what he really thought,

"Yeah maybe if life was a comic book" he giggled like a small child.

Eunice

I could feel the pain riseing through my hand.

"Enough!" I shouted but he didn't stop,

"Please, Zire" I whispered into his ear as I feel to the ground.

He finally let go and stubbled to the floor.

"Im sorry Eunice, I sorry" he said as I breathed heavily trying to regenerate myself.

"Its ok, Your new" She said as she pulled him down to her and kissed him. His blood dripped into her mouth, helping her to survive.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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"See you," Kairi didn't know what to make of the boy she had just met. His eyes seemed to look straight through her, almost as if he knew what she was thinking. His smile was quick and he seemed to have a sophisticated air about him. Even his touch still lingered on her hand. She could feel the blush rising in her cheeks.
She turned and headed for the apartment that she and her older sister shared. 'I wonder if I'll ever see him again.'
Last edited by Theodorable on Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:45 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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The feeling was marvelous, more marvelous than anything i had hear, seen or felt.
"I'm sorry" i repeated
I struggled to get off the ground. She helped me up and sat on a chair closely.
"So what now?" I asked curiously
"Now we..." before she could finish a knock on the door made her jump off her chair "I'll be back" She said walking or more likely running to the next room where the door was.

(god I'm soooooooooo tired)


New character description.

Name-Jack
Age-20
Job-None, Hired Vampire hunter
Race-Human
Gender-Male
Appearance-Black hair, green eyes, tall, strong
Other-Up for love, Is Zire's Brother.


Jack

I walked into the bookstore Zire worked in
"May i help you?" Someone asked
"Yes, I'm looking for my brother, Zire" I said and the girls face turned from happy to scared.
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*im in the mood for romantic vampires now, I watched twilight!!*

Eunice

I opened the door and nobody stood outside, Wierd I thought as I closed the door.

"Who is it?"Zire asked as I walked back in,

"I dont no, no one there" I said

I pulled myself closer to Zire and kissed him on his soft lips.

"Lets go somewhere" I siad as I grabbed his hand and pulled him out the door.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!



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