Young Writers Society

Okay so how DO they become a vampire. They get bitten then have to go though an embracing(interviews are no longer needed.)

You drink our blood then... are we vampire? No you have to have an embraceing.

How long does it take to turn into one? A soon as the embracing is fineshed.

Is it like Twilight where it takes a couple days? No, you get bitten go though the embracing then your a vampire, but you will have to be trained by your sire.

Is it painful? Yes.

Do some vampires have "gifts"? Yes they are fast, can shape shift into a animal and can read peoples minds.

What happens if a vampire chooses not to follow his sire? he will be destroyed as he needs to feed of his sire once in a while.


Eunice

"Well I'll take you to my chamber" She said as she whispered in his ear.

When they got to the main chamber, Eunice grabs a spike of the table.

"Eunice?" Asks Firestalker,

"I'm sorry" she says as she spikes the sharp object into his heart realseing his soul.

"Now I own your soul" Said Eunice.

Yay I got my much needed info!

Also if they have to feed off of their sire how does a Vampire Liege ever get formed? Or new Vampire clans in that matter. And do the Elders also have to feed?

Jason Burn

It felt... good. How else could he describe the fascinating feeling that filled every cell in his body. As Genima's fangs bore into his neck and begun to such the very life from his body, Jason felt a shiver of pleasure pass through him. He enjoyed it, he enjoyed this feeling. It was so pleasurable and so intoxicating at the same time as she drank his smooth blood.

Then all of a sudden she stopped. Pulling back she gave him a timid smile as he let out a breath he realized he had been holding. "Wow," he gasped, as a grin lit up his face. "that was..."

"Intoxicating?" Genima whispered as she pulled him close and kissed him again on the lips. They were so soft, so tender as the two of them locked together again. A bit of blood that was still on her lips passed into his mouth, and for some reason it only seemed to highten the emotions both of them were feeling.

As they slowly pulled back from one another again Jason couldn't help but smile. "wow..." he whispered, it was all he could say.

"I know," Genima grinned as she slowly stood to her feet.

"Hey where are you going?" Jason asked, disappointment filling his face as she stood up.

"You mean where are we going," she replied as she yanked him up to his feet. "There are some people you have to meet." She hesitated for a moment, biting her lip as if pondering some big mystery. "Jason... I need to explain something to you. If you come with me, and decide to stay with me you will be embracing a new life. I am a vampire. My life is lived as a vampire. If you come with me, if you choose to be a vampire to you will have to throw away your old life."

A slight frown passed over Jason's face, "This is a lot to take in," he whispered, "And I'm not even sure if I truly understand."

Genima let out a light laugh, the once that seemed to always bring a smile to Jason's face. "It is a lot to take in. We Vampires are different then you humans, we are unique and timeless. And... I don't know how to say this but there is something in me that is drawn to you, that wants you."

Jason couldn't help but smile with a big boyish grin. "I know what you mean," he replied. "There is something about you Genima, something intoxicating, I feel like you are a flame, and I am but a moth drawn to your light." Reaching down he grabbed her arms and gently pulled her close to him, "It's weird, I only met you today, but I want to be with you, for as long as I can. No matter where that takes me," he paused and grin as he leaned down until their foreheads were touching. "No matter where that takes us."

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A little cheesy, and it is going SUPER fast and all but what the heck, it works!

*The elders have to feed of there sire which is... Eunice and if your wondering how Eunice gets fed, i'll tell you, She drinks out of the cask, which elders put there spear blood in.*

*Okay I am going to have to drop out of this also. I don't think that I will stay motivated as much as y'all. Sorry...I really am*

So... are we done with this? I've been waiting for someone to write but nothing has happened...

>.< Sorry Ha. I have major writer's block on this story...

Can someone bring me in??

People haven't been online, its really annoying because i thought this storybook had potential

I did and it does, point is that we didn't have a plot to keep this going, remember, i already told that before?

okay, before I start talking about everything I'd like to say hi! I'll be taking over Eunice and I'll try my best to keep up with everyone.
Okay, down to business. With the plot lets keep it simple. I know that there is no set plot, but lets try to come up with one. And please, everyone try to be original with how the vampire (for lack of a better word) seduces the humans. And give some other details than just the humans feeding the vampires, and being turned. Okay, I'm done now.

Ballow


Ballow flinched slightly . . . this guys was bi? (He doesn't think that he swings that way, yet . . . so it's like a self discovery thing.)

He bit his lower lip, "So, ummm, you come here often?"

He mentally hit himself on the head. Of course he came her eoften if he looked after his sister - who worked here.

He attempted a smile and looked to him, I'm Ballow, you are?"

He held out a hand. The guy looked slightly shocked for second before holding out his and replying, "Kriss."

Ballow shook his hand, but it unintentionally lingered and he found himself staring at it. Suddenly realising that they were still hokding hands he violently took his back.

Trying to cover his sudden movement he coughed and cleared his throat, "Soo, uh, whats your occupation?"

Could he have posed that question any awkwarder?

*Okay then Teddybear22, you better post as Eunice so i can too.*

Edward:

I ran down the field, scored my goal and the game was over. A million thought were running through my mind. I missed Tami terribly, but what did it all mean? Was it all just a dream?

"Hey, great job man.",a guy on the team came to congratulate me. I really couldn't remember the guy's name.

"You too." I looked at my watch and started running towards the bookstore.


Tami:

I looked around at the ancient room in astonishment. I had no idea such a large home... or palace can belong in the woods. Jacob led me through the hallways and into a corridor where a few people, or vampires, were huddled together and talking in whispers.

"Excuse me, but I have brought a human. Her name is Tami", Jacob introduced me politely and I would have smiled, had it not been for the danger I sensed so strongly at that moment. My legs were ready to bolt for the door. The vampires had black eyes that were stark against there extremely pale reflection.

"Welcome Tami."

*umm.. Teddybear you wont be taking over as eunice, i wanted you to make your own character not taking mine. Firestalker you have been turned you will now have to feed from eunice and then you can do what you want, I have a story plot. Eunice will fall in love with Zire and they will look after the vampire kingdom but as a few vampires turn against them they have no idea what to do, There is a war and the winner takes the kingdom.*

I will post as my character in a hour or so.

Edward:

I dashed toward the bookstore with my filthy team outfit still on. I had taken over Tami's job and I didn't want to be late. The door bell jingled as I entered the quiet and lonely bookstore. Only a few people were working today.

"Hey Edward." I turned around to find Cleo talking up at me. She smiled as I saw her.

"I heard you were taking over for Tami. How is she? Have you found her yet?"

"No, that creep still has her. But it's only been a few days, so I'm sure she'll be back soon." I must have looked grim, because Cleo replied,

"I'm so sorry Edward. I know you cared about your sister." Just then, Christina walked over.

"Hey guys. You know we're still in a bookstore? Shhh!", she snapped at us.

"Sorry Christina.", I whispered. "Just talking about Tami." The red anger in her face disappeared and turned sorrowful. Her nose wrinkled in sadness, which was actually quite cute with all her freckles...

"Oh, I'm sorry Edward. I hope she's okay." She turned on her heel and walked back to whatever she was doing. She almost seemed embarrassed and I felt sorry for her. I then turned to Cleo.

"So, what do you need done today? What are you doing?"

"Oh, I'm just organizing a few shelves and re-doing out Twilight section. There really isn't much to do today. Christina is manning the cash register, but I don't know where Zire went. He's been gone for a few days like Tami..."

"Pretty soon everyone's going to be taken from this bookstore.", I mumbled. I hated that Tami wasn't here to annoy me. I hated that I was giving up my soccer practices after school to come to a lousy bookstore where people went missing.

"Do you remember what happened to Tami, Edward?"

"I don't know, really. It all went by so fast. That creep said he was a... vampire. Then he asked Tami if she wanted to join him and for some reason she agreed. Maybe I was dreaming, but it seemed so real. Then he took Tami and flew off with her. I tried to stop him, but he was too fast..." Cleo looked at me like I was insane. I certainly felt that way hearing what happened from my own lips.

"Ummm, are you sure you didn't hit your head?" She giggled and looked up at me.

"I think you should go home. There's nothing to do today, so you might as well go looking for Tami or something. I think I'll just finish organizing a bit and help you, if that's alright. Your sister needs you." I knew what she said was right, but I couldn't bring myself to look for her. In my "dream" she had said that that is what she wanted. And, truthfully, I had a feeling that there was no way she could be found. I may never see my little sister again.

"I'd like that. I'll meet you in the park when your done. Just call me on my cell." I started backing out of the tiny bookstore. I didn't need to be alone all the time. I wanted someone who really didn't know about this other world, because ignorance is a bliss. Maybe I would save her from Tami's fate, but I may never know for sure. I needed a friend more than anything.

"Will do. I'll see you there soon." Cleo waved as I left.

"Thanks, Cleo." I said as I continued to run, now having somewhere to go.