Young Writers Society

Tami:

God, this guy is hot. I hope Edward doesn't see him... then I'll fear for his life. Over-protective brother..., I thought to myself. I couldn't help myself from staring at this unbelievably gorgeous creature. His eyes were just so entrancing, I could get lost in them.

"Yes, I would love to go for a walk." I looked over to find the nearest employee to tell them I'm on my break. I whispered to Christina and I was out the door being escorted by... well, I should probably ask for a name.
"So, what's your name? Do you live around here? Do you come here often?" Oh no. I started rambling.
"My name is Jacob. I don't live close by and I don't come by here often." He said all this with a smile. My heart melted.

Jacob:

I chuckled at this frail human. She was pretty, yes. I found myself thinking what she'd look like as an immortal.

"Do you like fantasy?" I repeated.

"Why?" she asked.

I shrugged. "You never know..." I led her through a dark passage way. I was going to at least have some of her blood, if I didn'r change her.

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* haha Ballow is mine well hes bi!! Hes been claimed by Kriss, sowwy*

Kriss walks into the bookstore, His good looks turns heads around in the room. "Why do I always get women chasing me" thought the confused teen who thought he was bi-sexual. A young man not much age difference stood near him.

"wow hes cute" Kriss thought about Ballow.

He saw a book near the counter called "Vampyr Leige". He picked the book up, he always wondered if this was true to life or was it just fanstasy.

Quarrline:

I ran through the house yelling for Lucie, my puppy. I screamed her name more than a dozen times, but no little "woof" came. I finally gave up and went to sit in a chair that used to be there. Apparently, it wasn't there anymore and I fel flat on my butt. I jumped up hesitantly. I heard a crackled laugh from Genie. It made me chuckle also.

"Quarrline, darling, don't fret so bad. Lucie is at the veternarian. She hurt her paw last night when you mother stepped on her," she said. Anger filled me up to my neck. I turned to my parents hallway and stomped down it. I banged on the door constantly. I threw it open. No one was there.

"Go figure," I said with an aggrivated laugh. I felt Genie's hand on my shoulder.

"It's all right, darling. Why don't you call some friends, go for a walk, something that will occupy you," Genie said. Her eyes drooped lower than any tired elder that I have ever known. I nodded and went to grab my sweater. I walked outside and took a huge whiff of the crisped air that surrounded me. A smile tugged at my lips. I stuffed my hands in my pockets and walked to the wood line. I turned and took one last glance at the huge house that I lived in before letting the dark swallow me.

We strolled down the alleyway together, hands together. He leaned in and whispered in my ear.
"You don't mind if I say you ask too many questions. You should relax a bit." He shuddered and withdrew. Why did he do that?, I wondered. Do I smell or something? I wanted to change the subject.
"So, do you have something in mind on this stroll through the alleyways?" I was trying to flirt with him, but I was pathetic. Ugh. Why couldn't I be more like Edward. Uh-oh. I hope he doesn't wonder where I am...
"Yes, actually, I do." His black eyes started to dance and it frightened me a bit, but as he neared me, I realized what he wanted to do. I had never had a boyfriend before, let alone kissed anyone. I puckered my lips to this total stranger and my heart accelerated. It was embarrassing, but was worth it when his lips touched my neck.
"What do you think I'm doing with my little sister?"

*Bite them all if you want to. I want to make sure Edward is 17 forever. *

Jacob:

I hissed. stupid human interfearing! The girl seemed upset. I hissed. "Look, I was just aout to make your sexy little sister a vampire, if she'd like. so unless you'd like to be one too, get out!" I hissed.

He was shocked, they both were.

"My lady, would you like to be a vampire?"

I'm sorry I haven't posted! Can someone update me??? Thanks!

I was dumb-struck. What was he talking about? Is he insane? That was enough to almost send me screaming to my brother... almost. Hmmm... Was I crazy?

"Yes." I answered confidently. My brother gaped at me, then at Jacob.

"What have you done to my sister?", Edward commanded. Oh, Edward...

"That's all I needed to know." Jacob glided towards me with grace that only angels could possess. I was breathless as he took my hand and started to tow me towards the end of the alleyway. Edward tried to stop him, but it was too late.

Edward:

That's the last I saw of my sister as she was whisked of into the darkness of the alleyway and disappeared.

Jacob:

**He can bite Edward too...**

I smiled and lowered my mouth to her gorgeous neck. I sucked some of the blood out of her. 0.25L to be exact.

I looked at her with a small smirk. "You taste good. Like sugger."

*just remember they have to be interviewed by Eunice and go though an embraceing, if a character has been biten and are havin there interview say it in the dt*

A few minutes later

Zire

"Oy, Edwards what are you doing here?" I asked walking towards him "And where the hell in Tami?"
"I... she.." Edwards stammered as if he'd seen a ghost.
"Hey whats wrong, you look like you've seen a ghost" I said
Suddenly Edward collapsed leaving me there looking at him completely surprised as the Edward had never been known to collapse which meant what ever had happened was serious. I sniffed the air and instantly found out what had happened. It was too paranormal to be real but if the air in the place was like it was suffocating you it meant that a vampire had meant to feed here.
"Come on Edward" I said pulling him onto my back "Yesh, your heavy"

Back in the Bookstore

"Guys a little help here?" I asked coming inside.
Instantly the girls were on me trying to help Edward, get him off my back.
"Hey take it easy" i said putting him on the floor.
"What happened?" A boy asked looking at Edward intently as if he loved him.
"Vampires" I muttered under my breath and instantly the whole shop including the people who hadn't taken any notice to Edward looked at me.
"And how o you know that?" asked someone.
"Trust me, when it comes to the paranormal and unnatural, I'm your guy" I said sighing.




*Good enough?*

Jason Burns

Jason thought of himself as a pretty smooth guy most of the time. He had dated his fair share of gorgeous girls, and he had never find one who totally enamored him, or made him feel like a small helpless school boy... until now. The blonde beauty in front of him smiled innocently as she whispered, "trying to catch flies?"

He immediately realized his mouth was hanging open and quickly shut it with a loud snap! The woman in front of him giggled a bit and slowly leaned across the counter until she was just inches from his face. "Tell me... Jason," she asked as her eyes wandered down the name tag snapped onto his apron, "What would you recommend."

Jason almost wasn't able to speak. He didn't know what it was, but there was something about this woman that grabbed him, captivated him in a strange, yet mystical way. Her voice was gentle, yet powerful, sounding like a babbling brook and a powerful waterfall all at the same time. Her hair was a pure blonde that cascaded down her back in golden waves, while her face seemed to have been chiseled out of diamonds. It was flawless in all ways, seeming to belong to a god rather then a mere mortal. And then there was her body! OH GOD! he thought as his eyes wondered down for a brief moment before shooting back up to meet the ladies face. She looked bemused if anything as she watched him.

"Uh... do you like chocolate?" he stuttered. Dammit Jason get a hold of yourself, you've seen lots of beautiful woman before... though she is the most gorgeous out of all...

"Chocolates good," the woman softly purred as she leaned back a bit.

Jason was relieved to have a little more space as he quickly wiped the thin line of sweat on his brow off his for head. "Well... uhhh.... why not try the Mocha, its simple, mostly just chocolate, milk, and espresso."

"Sounds good," the lady whispered, "How much?"

"What!?" Jason asked, suddenly alarmed and confused as he realized his eyes had wandered yet again.

Tossing back her head the lady let out the most pure laugh, it sounded like twinkling bells moving softly in the breeze. "How much for the drink," she asked again.

"Ohhh... uhh..., its on me," Jason stuttered with a weak smile, "Just pick it up down there and..." God I want to ask her out, he thought, But what if she says no! She's turning to go, its now or never.... "Hey!" he suddenly blurted out, "I get off work in like fifteen minutes, would you... uh like to uh..." he swallowed as the words got stuck in his throat. He could barley breathe, as her eyes focused on him he tried again, "Would you, like to catch a bite to eat or something..."

That was hilarious Ha6647 A perfect interpretation of a man in a tight spot. Hahahaha

*I agree. ^.^* Great writing too.*

Genima:

"Sounds like fun," She said with a smile. It was always fun to play with the humans. They would forget what they were saying and.. She smirked. The boy had the funniest thought too. She went to go sit down at an open table, sipping her drink. She'd already forgotten what it was called...

People stared at her for the longest of times but she didn't bother with it. Everyone stared at her. It was a normal thing for her. Something you get used to with how much time she has. "Ready?" Jason asked, pulling on his jacket.

"Yes." She stood and threw away what was left of her drink on the way out the door.

"So... Where do you want to go?" He asked, looking back at her.

"Anywhere. Doesn't have to be special." She was one of those kinds of vampires that didn't care much for fancy stuff. It all just wasted money.

Jason Burns

There she was, just sitting and sipping her coffee, totally oblivious to all the eyes focused on her from around the room. Maybe she was used to it, she had to be, know one looked like that and did not get stared at often. Okay Jason, he muttered to himself as he slipped on his jacket and approached her, Be cool, be calm. She is just a girl. The most gorgeous one you've ever seen in your whole damn life, but still just a girl. "Ready?" he asked as he stopped by her table.

"Yes." She replied as she stood to her feet. Float, or glided might have been a better word, she certainly didn't just stand. Each movement she made was graceful, and almost artistic in its beauty and perfection. She flicked her wrist and sent the coffee cup flying into a nearby garbage can, and all the while Jason just stared. Yea right she's just a girl, he thought, she's more like a blonde goddess!

"So... Where do you want to go?" He asked as he held the door open for her and the two of them slipped out into the cool evening air.

"Anywhere. Doesn't have to be special," she answered as she casually slipped her arm through his and gave it a squeeze.

Jason nearly passed out then and their. He quickly swallowed, trying to form something intelligible to say, but all that came out was something between a whimper and a grunt. His blonde beauty just laughed, her mouth opening to reveal perfect pearly teeth as her bell like laugh filled the air. "Bye the way," she cooed as they continued down the street, "my name is Genima."

Jason didn't answer, she could have said her name was Big Bertha and he wouldn't have cared. "I'm Jason Burns," he finally managed to answer with a weak smile. "And I know the perfect place for us to go."

Less then an hour later both of them were sitting on the ground in River Front Park. They were sitting on top of a blanket, a simple picnic laid out before them as they watched the sun set over the mountains in the distance. It was simple, yet perfect. And it was a spot he had used for a few other girls in the past, but for some reason this felt different. While all the other girls had been nice he could have cared less whether they liked him or not, whether they would want to date him. There was something different about Genima though. He wanted, no he needed her to like him. Something inside - maybe it was hormones but who really knew - was compelling him to do anything it took to win her affection, to just make her laugh or smile one more time.

"Its beautiful," Genima breathed as she snuggled up to him, making his heart beat all the more faster. Then she slowly turned up to him and moved forward. The seconds seemed like eternity as Jason moved down as well, and for a mere moment their lips brushed together. To Jason it felt like fireworks were going off as a rush of heat filled his body. He kissed her again, more passionately this time as one of his hands moved up and brushed back her hair.

She slowly pulled back, a pleasurable smile on her face as she whispered, "My, your pretty good at that."

He blushed, but didn't reply, only moved in once again as their lips joined in passion. He wanted this moment to last forever, it was truly magical. And if he had never believed in love at first site, he did now...

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