Young Writers Society

Eunice sat watching the beautiful Zire at work, he was deffently vampire materal. He was also very handsome and his black hair was now messed up in his face. his friend Edward had cooled down and was sondered by girls. Zire sat near me.

"why aint you there trying to get the 'one and only' Edward"he said to me in a surpised voice,

She looked back at him and pulled his coller up and towards her, "because i like you". She toke him behind one of the selves. She pushed her soft lips against his and they shared a passionate moment. They couldnt let go of each other, or Eunice wouldnt like go of Zire.'im not gonna let this one go' she thinks to her self.he kisses her neck. then she thinks well prefect time. She pulls her big fangs out of her

*It's fine. I'm molding and shaping as I go.* *and remember don't go past the point you went to. Nate'll destroy the storybook if it gets too um... how do I say it? Adult?

Genima:

She never knew she had a heart. She was a vampire for gosh sakes. She felt something painful rip at where she guessed her old heart rotted and she pulled back from Jason. Something compelled her to kiss him again though.

So easily she'd fallen for a human and so easily she found her heart. She hadn't meant to do either. It was her job to turn vampires and she wanted to turn Jason but she wanted him all to herself. She pulled away from Jason again. "Um... Can I tell you something?" He nodded sincerely. "Promise not to laugh?" She asked. He nodded again, suspicion creeping into his eyes. "I'm a-" It was so hard to say... "I'm a vampire." Her throat closed after saying those words. His mouth fell open.

Is she for real? She could believe she was actually telling him. Usually she just bit them and that was that. She'd taken them to be interview and she wouldn't see them again. This time was different though. She wanted to see Jason again. Opening her mouth she let the last rays of the sun glint on her pearly fangs. She closed her mouth. "Wow." Was all that came from Jason's mouth. "That's hot." He blushed after he realized what he'd said.

"I'm a vampire," She said once more.

"If you're so sure prove it to me," He said teasingly. He kissed her again, this time on the neck. Her instinct to cringe didn't work but her instinct of vampire entered her. Her eyes turned red once more and she kissed him back, the same spot he'd kissed her.

This time she felt him tense as he fangs brushed his neck and a shiver ran up his back. "You sure?" She asked.

"Like a said. Prove it." With one last look at him she kissed him once more time on the neck before sinking her fangs into him. She didn't comprehend the taste. She didn't want to comprehend the taste. If she did he would die. She counted the seconds. It seemed like a million hours to her before she could stop and she let her fangs slip free of his skin.

"Does that prove it?" She asked as the heady aroma came to her nose for the first time. It smelled good but not enough to make her want to eat him. Smiling he nodded. His eyes only showed a big of the redness they would if he was a complete vampire. She didn't want him to be Sired but she didn't want him to die as a human either.

Zire


I knew from the moment i saw her that she was a vampire, like i said i was an expert on the paranormal. But she was beautiful and she was a vampire, so who could resist. Being turned was certainly something no one could ever forget. The sensation of the bite and the way a vampires saliva entered your body was, unimaginable, it was like nothing I'd been through in my life. And then came the pain a few minutes after the sensation, nothing you could not bare, but it still hurt. She clutched onto me still kissing or biting my neck pulling me closer as i struggled in pain, but she was much stronger. And then after several minutes she let go and i felt my body changing. And then Edwards and Christina and some others came to where we were.
"What are you two doing?" asked Edward and the saw the red mark on my blood stained neck and her mouth stained with blood.
"Vampires" whispered Christina.



*Now what?*

Okay so how DO they become a vampire. You drink our blood then... are we vampire? How long does it take to turn into one? Is it like Twilight where it takes a couple days? Is it painful? Do some vampires have "gifts"? What happens if a vampire chooses not to follow his sire? Just some info on the whole vampire thing would be helpful...

Ballow


Ballow watched the man and the women walk out with a sigh. He had tried to save her. It wouldn't be his fault if she was raped or something as equally bad.

He turned his attention to the person who had just walked in. Wow. That was only coherent thing in his mind as he stared mouth slightly agape at the other guy roughly about his age when his looks struck Ballow's mind.

Ballow's eyes followed the guy's gaze as he noticed that he was looking at a book. He closed his mouth and swallowed slightly before approaching the guy.

"You into vamps?" he asked as casually as he could; which wasn't very as he was extremely nervous and he had no idea what he was doing.

The guy looked at him slightly shocked, but recovered with a clear of the throat and a cough, "Uhh, well I was just wondering if they were real or not."

Ballow frowned, "Don't you believe in them?"

He shrugged, "You speak of them like they're fairies or something."

Ballow clucked his tongue, "Maybe they are. We'll probably never know."

He reached an hand out and smiled, "Hey, I'm Ballow. Ballow Worthington."

The guy reached his hand out to shake Ballow's, but in the process we dropped the vampyr book.

Quickly trying to make sure not bookstore attendants noticed he knelt to pick it up. Seeing his chance to win some favour Ballow knelt down at the same time resulting in them hitting heads.

"Ow!" They exclaimed at the same time as they looked at each other and stared into each others eyes. A electric spark ran between them and they were frozen in that moment for what seemed like eternity.

They didn't even notice Jess and Jack sneak up behind them and getting ready to scare the hell out of them.

Jess and Jack pounced on them with a few giggles and Ballow and the guy lost eye contact. They were both covered in the wiggling forms of the two 10 year old twins.

Ballow sighed, rolled Jess of of him, got up and offered at hand to the guy. He smiled and took it then stood.

Ballow pointed to the girl twin, "This is Jess."

She curtsied, and then he pointed at the boy, "And this is Jack."

The guy raised an eyebrow, "Siblings?"

Ballow slapped his knees in laughter and wipe away a tear, "Oh, hell no. I wouldn't be alive if these two were my siblings. No . . . I'm babysitting them."

What... When'd Zire get bitten and by who? Um... Paramore has all the knowledge on this setting of vampire.. so I don't know.

Cristina

"Oh my god! They're real!" Cristina screamed, as she looked at the girl with the blood stained mouth and Zire on the floor with to fang bites.

"Uh..." Edward started to say. The girl with the blood stained mouth look at them with worry.

"Uh no..." The girl started to say. Cristine thought about it for a second: the whole situation. She knew she wouldn't tell anyone. She knew now they were real. She knew she wanted to be one know. Cristina smiled at everyone and started to walk closer to Zire. She bent down to his level and said, "Are you okay?"

"Ahhh!" He screamed them. All of them exchanged a worried look.

"We need to get him out her now." Edward said.

"Hurry." The girl said. She threw Zire onto her back and disappeared from Cristina's eyesight.

"Hope on." Edward said. Cristin did as she was told and then the whole world went to a blur around her.

No you dont just get turned into a vampire you have to have an interview to be acepted into the clan. If you dont follow your sire you will be destroyed.

Eunice
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Eunice pulled Zire's arm as soon she heard someone say vampire.

When they were at Eunice's lair she asked the question.

"do you want to be a vampire" she said as she kissed his neck, were she had bit him.

Kriss
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"Man, babysittings bad. my little sisters a pain in the arse" Said kriss,

"why what does she do?" ballow replys,

Kriss says embrassed "she takes the mick out of the fact that im bi"

Tami:

"Where are you taking me, Jacob?", I asked curiously. I knew I was going insane, because in the back of my head a voice screamed, but I ignored it. I was with an angel sent from Heaven.

"You'll see." I shut up and instead flexed my grip on his neck. He went super-human fast, but for some strange reason, I couldn't care less. I just wanted to be here and no where else. His neck was cold, but that was wonderful against my hot, pounding heart.

He finally came to a stop outside the edge of the woods and let me off. I looked around at the plain landscape and got a little confused. What was this?

"I'm now going to show you where I live.", He said with a grin and I smiled myself.

*of course i want to be a vampire!!!* **what kind of stupid question is that hmm?**

"Do i have a choice?" I said shrugging

"Well then come with me, you need to meet the elders." She said



***That's all i can write as i don't know the ritual of becoming a vampire, Post Paramore***

**ok go into dt we have to do the interview, im making a dt called interview for vampyr chonical

*okay, wow! this took off faster than I thought! Can someone bring me back in, please? My characters BJ. *

Okay, I know they cant be a vampire until they are approved of by their leader. But I was hoping for a few more details then just that, maybe look back at some of the questions I asked. I find it hard to write when I don't know how vampires work in this story. If they are all based off of twilight or what. A little more info would be greatly appreciated. And you keep referring to "DT" and I have no idea what that is...

It's a disscusion thread. And I understand about you not knowing what a DT is because it took me half a year to figure it out myself. Um... I'll go look. (DTs are located under the stoorbook thingy, as a smaller text that you can still click on.)

topic39446.html Look at my last post*

**She has to go through the initiation/approval thing which Paramore approves, Selene. Just saying...**

Jacob:

He smiled and took her hand, leading her gently into the huge mansion where they lived. His leige had set up this place for her clan of vampires.

He gently kissed her head. "Are you scared?" he asked.