Reborn The New Sire

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*ok sorry if i mess your carefully laid plans to drag this storybook back from the brink but im just gonna try to keep going with my part (can i just ask, where's Tobi atm? Am i talking to him with Bellow and Siren or is he with Alex somewhere else? I'm gonna go with that he's with Bellow and that Alex is in his room :s)*

Shakain (Vampire Hunter)

So the short one was another vamp (another one I couldn't touch - great) and the other two were Nekos (but I could have worked that out even without this conversation).
The male Neko, called Ballow, explained about their meeting and subsequent finding of the castle and then wittered about how empty the place was and whether I knew what was going on in the war at the moment. But I was only semi-aware of this, I was much more interested in the small vamp, who Ballow introduced as Tobi Uzaki. It wasn't just that he seemed to be trying to hide behind Ballow without making it look obvious, it was more the way he looked at the Neko - it was like they were...together. I mean I'm all for cross-breeding (heck, most hybrids are more fun to hunt than vampires themselves...and there I go again thinking about hunting vamps when I know full well I can't here...I need to do something about that...) but this seemed just too strange to me.
Anyway, the one useful fact I gleaned from this monologue was that the Nekos were here to hinder the fighting not help it. That will need to be changed I thought.

"Interesting" I replied when Ballow was finished, "Sounds like you've had more fun than me. I don't know where everyone's gone or what's happening with the war - I hoped you might - but I would guess the two are connected. Perhaps this fine young lady can help you" With the last sentence said I pointed to the human who thought she was concealed in shadow, "Care to join us dear?"
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Danie James:

She felt the heat rise on the back of her neck as all of them looked her way. She should have known a vampire hunter would be able to sense her. "Um..." She stepped into the little bit of light that emanated from one of the open doors. "I could tell you but I'm not allowed to. Maria has asked me not to. She knows I know too much." She mumbled the last bit under her breath but she knew all four of them would be able to hear it. Sighing she slumped against the wall. She had no idea what she was really doing here in the first place. They couldn't change her and since she knew so much of Jared and all the other's secrets she could not leave. She was a prisoner at her own freedom to be a matter of speaking.

"What? ...Why is a human here?" The vampire, Tobi asked.

"This is Danie James. She is... shall we say special," The hunter said.

Danie nodded and sighed again. "I guess you could say that..."
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Myfriendsavamp have you read this...

Alex was confused.

"RAven..... your Raven" he said,

"yes but quick seva's coming"

"Oh my god" said alex as he held his chest.

" Alex whats wrong?"she shouted,

he held his chest as he began to change form. Then he had flash back, his first bite, the burning, Selena, melissa all the girls he had ever loved.

The old jared was back but he felt pain. he fainted on the floor.

Wheres Alex now? Raven thought
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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*>.<* sorry. Here you go*

Raven:

She sighed. Jared wouldn't be fully himself untill Seva got here which...

Genima Strker burst through the door, water dripping from her face. "It's raining and uh... Seva is near unconciousness..." Raven helped Genima get Seva to Alex's body.

Seva:

Everything was leaning.. and she felt funny. "Seva. The ceramony?" She heard Raven ask with a light voice. A soft voice. She nodded and they set her to the ground. She movd over Alex's limp figure. He was out like a light. SHe kissed him on the forhead, then the lips just lightly, one side of his neck and then she bit down on the other side of his neck.

With a gasp Jared was awaken and he felt the blood that was slightly being taken form him. If he was to kill her... He looked at the hand that help a tight grip on his arm. The ring.. it was gone! He looked up at Raven and she mouthed kill her. She sadly closed his eyes for a minute and finaly bite down on her neck.

Seva cried out, makeing it echo through all the halls and rooms as she felt that last bit of life leave her making her fall limp.

Raven:

"She's gone," Was all that escaped her lips.

Genima Striker:

She bowed her head before picking up the body and pulling out the door. A few nekos, a vampire hunter and a human crwoded around the door as she came out. Others looked out their doors, through small cracks. This was Seva's burial ceramony. SHe was probable already reborn by now.

*New Seva's profile*

Name: Jamie Dane

Age: 19 almost 20

Gender: female

Appearance: http://anry.deviantart.com/art/Devastation-2528968

Personality: Very childish nowadays. She loves to kill vampires though. * :wink: *Just another twist to add to the pureblood in her that had to hide. Now she doesn't.*

History: She never had parents and she grew up in an orphanage. She knows only the life of the silence. (she was always in her own world. She aslo already knew about the vampires.)

Other: ?
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Jared(vampire)

he lay there, looking into the sky. And remembred something she didnt. Jordan.... There son. Raven was here but she wasnt with him. He felt wierd like he just wanted to hold her forever.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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*ok what is going on?*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Name: Mikael Eisenstein (born Mikael Alexander Stern)

Age: 200 (Appearance of an 18 year old)

Race: Vampire

Clan: Skyre (Last survivor)

Appearance: Tall with a stern face. Medium length spiked punk hair. Characteristic top hat black shirt rolled up to the elbows with a flowing black jacket and heavy military boots.

History: The unfortunate final survivor of vampire genocide in Los Angeles. He was born in the 18th century in central London. Immigrated to America and fought in both world wars.

Other: Previously noted for an uncanny ability to appear and take the credit for everyone else's work. Also gifted to influence people’s thoughts and cloud their minds. Gifted with quick wit and a sharp mind developed through years of learning. He is also able to play an instrument known to man due t his obsession with creating a masterpiece before he dies. believed to be able to draw extra strangth from darkness.

Equipment: Characteristic top hat, 2 HKP USP compact pistols and A Berretta silver pigeon shotgun. he Also carries various memorabilia, most noticeably a pentangle ring.



"Hunter" he smirked " I smell a hunter" He looked up to see a large castle. He sat down centering himself and let his mind scour the grim building. "Yes deffinitely a hunter" Time to die, he thought, and drove himself onward toward the castle.
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Shakain

And so came to pass the dreadful passing of Seva from our world. How posh can I sound eh?...Sorry...So, another had vampire had gone and would inevitabley be reborn and out roaming the world again by now. There had been the usual moments of mourning but now people were returning to the matters at hand. Although Alex...I suppose I should call him Jared now...had seemed especially affected - he probably committed the final act, poor bloke.

After the ceremony we had all really gone our separate ways. Jared had wandered off with Raven, the two Nekos and the vamp had decided to explore the castle some more as the Nekos had never seen it and Tobi hadn't for a very long time and I had been left with this girl Danie who now, rather irritably, seemed to be following me.

I (we?) strode through the castle towards the exit. I had decided to leave for now as I could foresee no decent hunting occurring within these walls. Time to move on again I guessed. I'm sure you can understand that I could barely believe my luck when, not two minutes after leaving the grounds was I faced with a new nemesis. Oh yes, I'll always remember Mikael.
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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"Hunter" i purred "its been a long time"

"Mikael" smirked the hunter. I could see his thoughts whirring in his head. "finally some sport?" oh how ironic. so happy to see the one who would ultimately bring him to his knees.

"So you're consorting with your own kind again then" i laughed pointing at the figure behind him "And what do they call you little one? No matter just stay out of my way" I reached into my satchel and put on my wrought iron gauntlets. "Shall we finish this?" i asked with a flourish.




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Shakain

I sighed. I didn't want to get Danie involved in this but what could I do?
"Stay out of his way" I breathed to her before swinging my automatic crossbow from off my back, under my armpit and up ready to fire. I immediately fired three silver-tipped arrows directly at Mikael's head. As I had expected he easily dodged all three. It was like the whole world slowed down at this point. First avoided the first by leaning his head right without moving any other part of his body, then he ducked down to avoid the second then using his bent legs, propelled himself into a backflip. When his feet were the up-most point of his body he caught the on-coming third arrow and spun it back at me with lightning speed. He was back on his feet and moving towards me by the time I had caught the final arrow in one gloved hand and threaded it back into my crossbow. The old enemies are always the bes...before I could even finish this thought he was upon me, fangs glinting and gnashing as he thrust me to the ground. I smacked Mikael round the side of the head with the butt of my now useless crossbow. With the very few seconds this afforded me I slipped down and out of his grip and was up again before you could say "Oh damn that vampire's about to feed on Danie!" (which conincidentally was the next thing on my mind).
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Mikael

Crunch. His damned bow in my face again. Still this time i would get my revenge. I flipped over him and onto my feet grabbing the feeble human and holding my knife to her throat. "So who do we have here then hunter?"i asked grinning at his fearful expression and worried thoughts. "My name is Danie" replied the human locked in my iron grip. "Well hunter shall i take my rwevenge on this Danie as you did on my family?" a sudden leap in his thoughts made me laugh " oh don't worry that would be too easy, but just for insurance" i leaped up and nailed her to the wall with a knife.

"now hunter i believe you have something that belongs to me"
"What are you talking about?" he snapped
"The sword, damn it, the sword. The sword you stole from my fathers cold dead hands when you blasted his face up the wall" i yelled barely keeping my rage in check.
"I honestly don't know what youre talking about" he replied bemused
"Then die" I roared letting my rage loose and feeling a century and a half of pent up rage break loose. I dropped my head and charged.




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Jez:

He smiled down on the girl that used to be the Seva. The one that had died and been reborn. It was his time ot get a very good one on his side. Get some more help. Brainwash her into thinking she needs to be on his side but whould it work?

Jamie Dane:

She smiled up at the man. "I'll go with you. I want to help." The pale man's mouth fell open. He hadn't expected her to say that so quickly was he?

"Let's get going then shall we." The man already knew she had nothing to take with her but the bag that hung over her shoulder.

Danie James:

She hung there, keeping hold of the knife so the old clothes she wore didn't rip and cause her to fall to the ground. This was an interesting fight but she was lost in how it all came together.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Shakain

What sword? I thought all I took from Bartholomew was a ruby? Unfortunately I didn't have time to elaborate upon this thought as Mikael was bearing down on me and this time I didn't think I'd be able to slip out of his grip before he did something truly gruesome.
I instintly side-stepped and caught hold of Mikael's hair, pulling his head back with a crack which brought him to his knees. I straddled his legs and pulled his face back so that he was looking up at me.
"Tell me about the sword" I grunted at him.
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"



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