Reborn The New Sire

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wait you already posted that?
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***Someone tell me what is going on. I'm completely lost here and would like to come back in but lack the information to know what is going on!***
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*is it ok if i try posting another part? im gonna try to reply to Bellow*

Shakain (Vampire Hunter) (The vamp castle)

Who were this lot...and how had they not heard me yet? Two Nekos and a Vampire; what was this place coming to? Well this was getting as boring as following Alex and his group around - so many vampires but I couldn'tm touch one of them - so I mtook a bold move and introduced myself to them. They looked like I'd done a lot more than said "Welcome", more like i'd physically slapped them each round the face. I decided to continue nevertheless.
"First things first - Who are you and what are you three doing here?"

*Any help?*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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I am dropping out of this story book. It is very difficult to keep up with this storybook when everyone is posting short messages in it. Onya, Ginny, Solange, and Garret are the characters that I had.
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aww bleeding rose :(

Jared/Alex

"Hello Tobi"said Alex as he transformed into Jared. he grinned a synyster grin but slowly turned into Alex again. " Who are you and what are you doing my castle"nsaid Alex.

We have news on Ravenn, Tobi sent Jared/Alex though telpathy
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*Yeah, you have news on Raven. She's in the castle. I was the one who brought her. One of my characters did.*

Seva-Gora:

She stopped in mid hit as something hit her mentaly. It wasn't the mind of a vampire but her old leader comeing back to full force. It was hitting her hard now. She bent over herself and held her head in her hands. "What's wrong girly?" She heard someone ask. She knew that voice. Looking up she didn't see Jez's face before she was flying into one of the trees and she felt the darkness creap into her head.

Jez:

He laughed. Seva did know him. Not from a werewolf though. He was a totaly diffrent 'thing' to say the least. This girl was going to die soon anyways. He let the vampire girl that had her aligence to the werewolves take Seva away from the place. He would not chase her. He would soon get his goal if it were possible.

The boy Jez had resently patted on the head (another leader from a diffrent clan of vampires.) sighed as he exchanged eye contact with the vampire girl that still had her conciouness. He was glad they were not going to whipe out the whole clan of werewolves, vampire tators included.

Genima Striker:

She ran for it, the vampire's leader on her back. Seva needed to get the ceramony done and over with before she died. Raven needed to be reunited with Jared once more. In that turn Jared or the new Alex would have to kill Seva. Genima was well informed about this stuff. She'd heard it as a little girl when she was receiving leasons from someone. She only remembered a few memories from her childhood. Other than that she remembered nothing.

Danie James:

SHe hid in the shadows watching the vampire hunter who hadn't touched any of the vampires once yet convers with the three others. She didn't know what or who they were.

Raven:

She strood down the hall fast, towards Alex's room. "Jared- I mean Alex! Seva is dieing. She needs to do the ceramony quickly if anynoe is to keep this clan in check with a vampire." He was asleep. She sighed walking up to the bed and leaning over his still form. "Alex?" She asked. His eye flutered open and he looked hazily up at her.

"Hi," He said with a smile. Jared.

"Hi. Seva is on her way. ANother vampire is bringing her to us. She's dieing, Alex." His eyes cleared just a bit and he focoused on her harder.

"What do we have to do?"

"Get ready and hope she doesn't die before she finishs the ceramony."
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Alex was confused.

"RAven..... your Raven" he said,

"yes but quick seva's coming"

"Oh my god" said alex as he held his chest.

" Alex whats wrong?"she shouted,

he held his chest as he began to change form. Then he had flash back, his first bite, the burning, Selena, melissa all the girls he had ever loved.

The old jared was back but he felt pain. he fainted on the floor.

Wheres Alex now? Raven thought
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Okay this storybook is not going anywhere. A user just quit right now, and we storybook experts are pretending that nothing going wrong. Is there a DT for this storybook? we need a serious plot like we had in the last story, that's what made it go on and on until Paramore decided to stop it. So any ideas for the plot?
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yes we have a dt. The users are quiting because you and myfriendsavamp went far ahead
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Hey we had to post something didn't we?
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sorry im over emotional to evrything these days.
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No prob, by the way i cant find the sub forum Dt thread, where is it?
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*Is it too late to join this?*


Darkness, a flash fills the night sky. A lone silhoette against the night sky.

Name: Mikael

Age: 200 (Appearance of a 18 year old)

Race: Vampyre

Clan: Skyre (Last survivor)

Apperance: Tall with a stern face. Medium length spiked punk hair.

History: The unfortunate final survivor of a vampire genocide in Los Angeles.

other: Previously noted for an uncanny ability to appear and take the credit for everyone else's work. Also gifted with low level mind influencing.



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