I'm sorry if I'm asking you again for a critique! Anyway here's the link: post385713.html#385713
It's a bit long so I'll totally donate points if you do it and definitley feel free to post more stuff for me to critique of yours in my critique booth! Also, please don't do grammer or line edits. I just want to know if the plot is good.
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