Young Writers Society

If you need reviews for your stories, book chapters or even random works I'm your man ... girl. Anyway. I will not check for your grammar or spelling problems (maybe yes ... sometimes). Character development, descriptions, examples of descriptions, suggestions, ideas... anything that involves the actual writing - yes.
I`ll review poetry aswell but this will not become a habit - Not that good at poems.
PM me or reply here and I`ll get the review done asap and believe me you won't be disappointed.

I take no fee! so hurry up!

Atm Working At


Reviews Completed (24 reviews):
- The Broken -- Traitor Colonel -- Chapter One - Sureal
- Chapter Six: Escaping The Cave In The Past and Future - wisemann210
- How I survived high school (Chapter 1,2) - fun4eva
- A Most Dismal Prospect - ankhirke
- Serendipity in Hell - SunshineOrange
- How the Dog Saw it - thunder_dude7
- Looking Glass (Prologue, Chapter 1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kaylyn
- Every Angel Has To Fall - olivia1987uk
- Scavenger (Parts 1.1, 1.2, 1.3) - TL G-Wooster
- Blind - Stori
- Liana Unbroken - Kaylyn
- Poison Love - chapter 1,2 - Night Mistress
- The unbroken bond - Scasha
- Dr./Mr. Vanderguard-Milton - kissthewitch

Luck!
- Akayl

I feel a bit cheeky asking for a review, as you're the third person I've now asked, but no one (beyond the most awesome Blink) seems interested in reading my story without me first asking.

Anyways, yeah, I'd be most indebted to you if you could give me your opinion on Chapter One of the Broken.

Thanks. =)

My pleasure.

Um, I would highly appreciate it if you looked at topic33850.html

It's chapter six of six and It's a fantasy

(you might want to read the first five though )


thank you


---Jon---

Ok i`ll do my best. If i don't finish today i`ll surely finish tomorrow.

Would you mind taking a look at...any of the three chapters of The Zenith Cycle I have up (in the sci fi forum)? In particular, I'd like comments on the first and second chapters, though if you haven't read the first yet then read that first (wtf, I'm not making sense). You can read the prologue if you want, though you don't have to to understand the action in the other chapters.

Anyway, basically, I really want critique on the first and the second chapters.

sure! I`ll get them done.

Hai! Fantasy Fiction of mine. Just written today. Grateful for a review.

Serendipity in Hell

If you need anything reviewing, please just post it on my review thread!

Hii fellow!

well. I wrote this chapter inspired from my real friends and me.

I would really like a review which doesn't consider the spellin and grammar stuff and focuses more on the writing style.

Please please please try and take the time to read it. I would GREATLY appreciate it.

topic36248.html

Hate to do this, but would you mind reading my first chapter, topic36185.html ? I really do need all the opinions I can get of it (which at this point, isn't very many. Le sigh...)

~Annie

Sure i`ll get them done!

hi, i'd like a poem critiqued please

topic36473.html

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I'd really appreciate it! Thanks in advance!

done!

topic36769.html

thanks!