Forgotten Truths

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(Forgotten Truths)

The world of Algen has had many ages, both dark and light. Currently the world is fragile. Alliances are stretched thin and chaos is beginning to rise. The kingdom of Galian is falling. There king, Ragnos, has fallen upon some spell. He is slowly going mad and so are his people. Elven clerics call it a disease falling down upon man, but many think different.

Ancient scripts tell of a darkness that was able to control the weak minded and the Death God Telu rising to power. It also tells of a few finding an ancient artifact from the gods of Truth and Mercy. It is said to have the power to repel the spell. It is unknown what the artifact was or if the story is even true, but many are beginning to believe so.

Galian is about to start a war that not many wish for. Not all are effected, but those weak are long lost. Balior is said to be their first target. What will happen to those caught in the middle.
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Races

Humans- self explanatory.

Elves- Wood Elves(Niro) Wilder elves(Yurim)

Dwarfs- Mountain and hill dwarfs.

Fairies- Regular size, but can shrink.
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Kingdoms

Galian- Northern most country. Ruled by Ragnos and is ready for war. (Human)

Ilian- Neibors to Galian and weak. ruled by the naive Prince Hugon, it may follow Galians example. (Human)

Eltar- Rivals power with Gilian and is to the south of it. Ruled by the Council of the Seven Stars. (Human)

Niro- Neighbor and ally of Eltar. The land is mostly forest. Ruled by Lord Faldar. (Elf)

Yurim- An archipelago of the coast of Niro. They are neutral and wish to avoid war at all costs. Ruled by a council of elders. (Elf)

Taldar- Located in the mountains to the south. the dwarfs of Taldar keep to themselves and hide from the world. Lead by The king of the Throne.(Dwarf)

Bergar- Eastern hills A lot of trade comes through here. Lead by clan representatives.(Dwarf)

*The fairies live any where they choose without a structured government anymore.
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Rules

-No God-modding

-No killing another's character without there or my consent.

-Stay in character and don't go to far out of plot.

-Love is allowed, but I won't allow it to control the story.

-No more than two characters.

-To help with the story i may post through the eyes of country leaders as time and events occur.
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Character Sheet

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Age-

Race-

Appearance-

Country-

Personality-

History-

Weapons/Magic- (Only mages can use magic and they are usually physically weak.)

Other-
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I know it seems like I'm controlling it, but besides the basic out line everything else is up in the air. I want this to last so I hope you enjoy. :D

Balior is located on the western coast jus south of Gailian.
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name- Azrayel
age- 17
gender- male
race- wilder elf/fairy

appearance- http://grandmasterfunk.deviantart.com/a ... y-70696693

country- Yurim

personality- Ray is reckless and hot headed, he'll follow his heart before his head. Smart but rarely thinks before he acts. Due to his past Ray is largely mistrustful of people but he would do anything to save a friend. The kind of guy you don't want as your enemy. Relentless in the pursuit of his goals (More as the story progresses)

history- Ray's father was a fairy and his mother an elf, as a result Ray never really fit in. His father dissapeared before he was born. He was born with a tattoo like birthmark on his back that look like his wings, when he concentrates the wings manifest. Ray is cursed in a way, his magical abilities come from a rune of power, (it looks like a glowing symbol on the back of his hand) the rune grants him almost limitless power, but at a great price. Whenever he uses it, it takes away a little bit of his life force, shortening his life span. Ray lives with the knowledge that any day could be his last and that he likely won't live past his twenty-fifth birthday.

weapons/magic- Uses a pair of scimitars (twin sword style), he's considered a prodigy as a knife fighter and at aerial combat. He uses element abilities, mainly wind, fire, thunder, water, can't use earth at all.

other- Up for love.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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Name- Peyton Thorin

Age- Sixteen

Race- Wood Elf

Appearance- Peyton has straight black hair with small braids, decorated in beads and feathers here and there and sharp emerald eyes with sapphire specks. She has a slim build but is very tough and masculine.

Country- Niro but she travels constantly

Personality- Peyton is an extreme tomboy. Instead of doing household chores and helping her mother she's always off with her guy friends, constantly sword fighting to get better. She never wears dresses unless her step-father makes her. Her mother is ashamed at her behaviour and always states that she will never be married off. Peyton is outgoing and fun-loving. She loves to rebel all the time.

History- Peyton wasn't always the tomboy. When she was four her real father was killed in battle. Only two months later her mother re-married to Count Thorin. Peyton never got over it and soon slipped into becoming a tomboy, always rebeling and such.

Weapons/Magic- A long sword with prongs off the blue and green hilt. It has a sapphire inside and emerald inset right in the middle of it. Two daggers and a bow and arrow.

Other- Up for love possibly...
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Name- Serena

Age- 21

Race- Fairy

Appearance- She has red curly hair and amber colored eyes. She is slim and fit. Has golden wings that tend to catch the light just right.

Country- Niro

Personality- She is a free and independent spirit. She tends to be a bit shy, but doesn't like to take orders from others. she loves the freedom she has and tends to move around a lot. she loves flying simply because she feels free.

History- Her parents used to be the heirs of their kingdom, but they were killed with the distruction of the fairy government. She was left alone to find some place to live without family.

Weapons/Magic- She has two twin swords that she loves but she can also weild a bow. She always has at least a knife on her. she has an excptional talent with herbs and can tell how to mix them for healing, potions, and poisons.

Other- Up for love.




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Name: Caius

Age: 23

Race: Human

Gender: Male

Appearance-
Build: Incredibly slim, scrawny and lanky. He has very little muscle whatsoever.
Height: 6'
Weight: 110
Eye Color: Pale blue, with a hint of green around the iris'
Hair: Dark brown, worn just below his ears. Normally messy and shaggy.
Skin Tone: Naturally tanned skin.
Clothing: Normally wears darker clothing with black boots and a small bag he never lets out of his site. Will occasionally wear a hat/hood and a cape.
Other: A small pale scar on the jawbone just under his chin. More scars across the back oh his hands and on his fingers. Depending on how he feels when he wakes up, Caius will wrap a piece of cloth around his left middle finger to declare what his mood is. If his mood is in the extremes (extremely happy, sad, excited, depressed, etc.) he will tie a piece of cloth around a bit of his hair as well.

Country: Galian

Personality: He is quite, quite mad. His mood swings often, though never stays the same for more than two days. It normally switches at least twice a day. So his personality can never be declared as any set-and-stone thing except for insane. He can speak normally, and he can control himself to some point, but upon meeting him, it is easy to tell that there's something mentally wrong with him.

History: Caius grew up with his parents in a small town in the kingdom of Galian. His mother could easily be said to be equally as insane as her son, or vice versa, but no one was ever sure because his mother died when he was four. His father brought him up as best he could, often letting Caius run crazily through the streets of his town. Most people complained to his father daily about his behavior, more than one claiming that Caius had a mental illness of some sort. His father would hear none of it and began keeping Caius locked up in the house to prevent any more trouble. Then, after Caius had turned eleven and showed no signs of improving, a mage passed through the town. His father took Caius to the man and begged him to take his son as his apprentice. The mage agreed reluctantly and trained Caius until he was eighteen. In that time, not only did Caius show amazing skills in the art of sorcery, he also managed to learn to control himself, speak normally, and act more...normal. He now works as a part-time war-wizard, and a part-time adviser to his King. Though his time spent around Ragnos, who is slowly going mad himself, has not had positive effects on Caius, who in turn in starting to return to his old insanity.

Weapons/Magic: Caius uses sorcery, which branches off from magic in itself. Sorcery mainly focuses on Dark and offensive magicks, as well as a few defensive. For example, Caius can inflict and infect a wound. But he cannot heal it since that would require Light magic. He can concoct deadly poisons, but not love charms. He can hurl fireballs at an enemy, but he cannot cause a volley of arrows to turn to flowers. Though every spell he casts costs him some amount of energy. The harder/stronger/more complex the spell is, the more energy it requires. He can also use elemental magic, but not in the way most others would. He mixes elemental with Dark so that it isn't just pure element he's using. Along with his magic, Caius carries around a small silver dagger as a last defense, though the chances of him using it are very slim.

Other: As stated above, he wraps a piece of cloth around his finger depending on his mood, and occasionally his hair. He carries his cloth and all of his other personal belongings in a small bag he keeps with him at all times. He is also incredibly weak physically.

**Let me know if I need to change anything.
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*is Caius up for love by any chance*

Name-Seren

Age-18

Race-human mage

Appearance- down below

Country- Galian

Personality- She is a very passoinate fighter and will do what she can to help save people

History- she loves life and studies fairies and elves

Weapons/Magic- magic staff, a atham which she always keeps on her but no human blood is aloud on it to keep it pure, if anyone made it have blood on it there would be a fight. She also has a samira that she keeps on here back,it is craved Provehito in altum which is roughly transmitted from latin to mean go forth.

Other- up for love
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Name- Yakov

Age- 21

Race- Human

Appearance- http://rive6.deviantart.com/art/Knight-38841400

Country- Eltar

Personality- He honors the code of the knights and uses it as his moral code. He doesnt follow them to the letter though, more like guide lines. He is a gentlemen calm. He enjoys a good joke.

History- Yakov is the Son of a lesser noble. He entered the knight hood at a young age and when he turned 17 he became the personal guard to one of the council members. His name is Wilheart and the two of them have become good friends.

Weapons/Magic- The sword in the picture. It is a relict of the past and has been passed down from generation to generation.

Other- He enjoys laughing and star gazing. Wilheart is 29. Wilheart will be npc of sorts in the story.
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Name- Allen

Age- 31

Race- Human

Appearance- http://ronindude.deviantart.com/art/Mercenary-15005619

Country- Used to belong to Ilian.

Personality- One who is easily disappointed and tempered. He only sees things in the long run and never looks at what is is happening at the moment. A friendly guy, just has a chip off his shoulder.

History- He used to be a general of the Ilian ground forces. He had risen to the highest ranking official in the military and began reporting directly to the king. He witnessed the slow decline of the empire and begged the king to look towards the future. The King listened at it seemed like things could turn around, but shortly afterward he was assassinated. His son Hugon took the throne, but refused to listen to Allen. He took the side of Ragnos. Two years later Allen was charged with the murder of the former king and he fled. It's been three years sense.

Weapons- A claymore he wears on his back.

Other- Anyone can bring him in because he travels and could be any where.

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I'm leaving for three days, Fri-Sun, so we will start either Sunday night or Monday morning. People can join up until then.
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Sorry Serenity, Caius was claimed by Bella already. She's going to post her profile later on. If, for some reason, she ends up not joining, I don't want to involve Caius in any relationships. And even with Bella's character, it's not going to get very serious.

*Shrugs* Sorry again.
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Name Leslia (Lez - L - eye - uh)

Age 21

Race Elf

Gender Female

Country: None. Travels.

History: Leslia was only six when her father died in a hunting accident. That incident affected her mother deeply, causing her to lose part of her sanity and leave Leslia virtually parent-less. She took care of her mother as best she could until her mother died when she was sixteen. Grief-striken, Leslia banished herself from her elven home and has taken to traveling, learning of the world and it's ways, trying to help people with their own pains, hoping it will bring her temporary relief from hers.

Personality: Leslia has a strong fear of loss, which causes her to stray away from becoming too attached to people. She is kind to most, but seems closed away from strangers, unless she seeked them out in order to help them. Even then, they know very little of her, even as she learns all about them.

If she were to open up to someone, she would be very bright and cheery, hopefully more of the time.

Weapons/Magic Leslia carrise a staff, which she uses occasionally to help her direct her magic. She is extremely talented with magiic, which would normally cause a lack of physical strength, Knowing this, Leslia works out daily in order to keep her strength to at least a normal level. This lends to her ability to weild daggers, of which she carries approximately eight.

Appearance: Leslia is tall and slender, with pale skin and hazel eyes. Her hair is long and brown. She owns few gowns, so she often dresses in teh same thing, and is rarely seen without her cloak, which holds magical properties and changes colors as she wishes it to.

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Other: Love interest with Caius
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Name- Nyes

Age- 20

Race- Fairy

Appearance- Brown hair, dark blue eyes, the tallest he ever gets is 5'3", small build, his wings are transparent with blue tint.

Country- He currently resides in Niro.

Personality- Curios, loves to pull pranks on unsuspecting travelers, friendly, cheerful, energetic, impatient, Confident, Inquisitive.

History- Grew up with parents, but he left them to go out into the world.

Weapons/Magic- No weapons as of now, but he knows how to use the bow well.

Other- Wears a necklace with a crystal on the end. Nyes can look through the crystal and see anywhere that he chooses.
Admiration: Our polite recognition of another's resemblance to ourselves.

Dopeler Effect: The tendency of stupid ideas to seem smarter when they come at you rapidly.

Confidence: the feeling a person has before he fully understands the situation.

Shin: A device for finding furniture in the dark.




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Name- Selen

Age- 18, almost 19

Race- Fairy

Appearance- Her

Country- Wonderer, she doesn't stick around long.

Personality- She is quite. But when she gets rilled she has the temper of an angry dwarf. She tends to be the sweet one though so when her temper does blow it is surprising cause she tends to be soft spoken and caring.

History- She was abandoned when she was little and was taken in by a human family. They were mysteriously killed and someone started coming after her so she just started moving around not staying anywhere for very long.

Weapons: Bow and arrow

Dagger

Other- Anyone can bring her in, and if you want to have a relationship with her just pm me.
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~Yakov

Yakov paced along the hall. He waited for the councils decision on action for the war with Galian. Though it wasn't definite, tensions were high. He only hoped Wilheart could convince them to do something. After an hour past Yakov lost his patience and was about to kick the door down when Wilheart appeared. "What did they say?"

"To watch undercover. You and I are to move to Balior. Its a key port if the Galian wish to start a war. We are to see there actions from there."

"Son of a- that's not good enough!"

"Calm down Yakov. It was the best I could do. The council doesn't want to risk anything. Go pack, we leave first thing tomorrow."
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~Allen

Allen sat beneath a tree as he looked over his maps. "There's no mistaking it, if the wish to fight the Yurim navy they'll need a port along the Caren coast. Balior seems like a likely position." Before he could say anything else he saw someone coming down the road. He stood up to get a better look. He saw it was an elf.


She looked up at him and seemed slightly startled, but she quickly regained her composer. "can I help you?"

"Not really, simply getting ready to be on my way. I'm Allen, you?"

"Not that it matters, but I'm Leslia."

"I'm on my way to Balior. If we happen to be heading the same way would you like accompany me for a while. The land has become dangerous to travel."

"Strength in numbers eh."

"Precisely."

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Azrayel-

Ray leaned over the deck of the ship, his white-silver hair blowing behind him. The spray lifting into the air, he spotted a dolphin following in the wake of the ship. Twisting he glanced behind him, already the islands of Yurim were gone from sight, it would be at wouldn't be long until the ship made port in Balior.

He pulled himself off the rope ladder and stepped back onto the deck, sailors bustled around on deck and passengers stood around calmly. Most of them had been born on a ship, but now they were all tense. Fighters or at least people who knew how to defend themselves.

Even in the islands, rumours of war had reached people. Now the council had sent a select view to go to the main land. The six men, barely more then boys were to split up once they reached port. Find out what was happening and go home. Ray, with his, unique, abilities, had been a natural choice.

Sighing he shifted the scimitars at his waist and crossed the deck, he glanced back one last time, thinking the words he hadn't been able to say before he left. "I'll come back alive mom. I promise."




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Name- Kabeth

Age- 20

Race- Human

Appearance- http://www.deviantart.com/print/456766/

Country- Niro

Personality- He is possessed by a strong wanderlust, having travelled through all of the countries. But he loves the woods of Niro more than any other place, and returns there after each visit to another nation. He is always willing to meet new people, and tries not to judge anyone until after he's met them.

History- He was born in Eltar, but his family moved to Niro when he was five years old. They lived in the woods there among the elves, and he often played in the woods with the elven children, although he never had a chance to grow attached to any of them until he entered his teenage years, due to his growing faster than them as a human. He began travelling when he turned seventeen, visiting Galian first before journeying in turn to each of the other countries.

Weapons/Magic- He has a bastard sword and a longbow, but he prefers the bow. He learned both archery and swordplay with the elves of Niro.

Other- Up for love.
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Name: Proth Samuel

Age: 24

Race: Human

Appearance: Blonde hair. Muscular stature

Country: Galian

Personality: Stern and serious. He's very loyal to his country

History: Proth Samuel joined the army young. His father is a retired general. He has just been accepted into an elite battalion that will lead the attack on Balior.

Weapons/Magic:He wields a large battlehammer and wears the standard battle armor.
Other: He is a very proficient fighter

EDIT: I've changed my character to fit into the situation
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