Need A Review?

deleted2 · 2008-06-23T20:05:22Z

So. Reviews. Any work in need of critiques, my dears? What I'll review: Adventure/Action Fiction Historical Fiction Romance Fiction Other Fiction Science Fiction Yes, basically all fiction except Fanfiction :wink: More than one part? You may post up to three pieces at a time, and then you'll have to wait until I've done those before you can ask me for more. Seems reasonable enough, yes? ^^ I don't mind if you want the first chapters of a longer story reviewed - it's cool with me. In fact, I may even follow up on the story myself if you manage to draw me in enough. I won't, though, start at chapter seven of a story, for I'll be lost in the storyline. So, start me at the very beginning, guys. How I review? Well, I either give overall comments, or nitpicks. I can even shred the piece for you, if you so desire. If you have no specific review requirements, I'll go with the general nitpicks+overall comments format. If there's anything specific (grammar, vocabulary, description, flow, etc) then let me know. So what do I have to do? All you have to do is leave a comment. Please mention the forum it's in, the wordcount, and what type of review/how harsch a review it is that you want. And don't forget to add in the link! Reviews: [s]JFW1415 SunshineOrange thunder_dude7 Anti-Pop[/s] [s]Conrad Rice[/s] [s]TGL-Wooster[/s] [s]BigBadBear[/s] [s]Conrad Rice[/s] [s]BlackCatSachiko[/s] [s]Asxz[/s] [s]KJ[/s] [s]RoseyUnicorn[/s] Ember CaseySaz *Pending - waiting for replies* PenguinAttack To those who I have neglected since November, I'm very sorry. I've sent out PM's to ask if the works are still in need of reviews, and they're at the top of my To-Do list if they say yes. Homework floods shall not keep me from reviewing again, I promise ^^ XxxDo

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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:08 am

deleted2 says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:08 am

School craziness is currently manageable ... so this thread is officially re-opened!

Also, I have a week of holiday right now. Reviewing spree? Sure thing.

*Dusts off the old thread ^^*

Reviews, my dears?

XxxDo

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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:30 am

anti-pop says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:30 am

The Childhood of Mr. O'Connor
Other Fiction
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Just some general comments would be fantastic. Thanks! ^^

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Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:57 am

deleted2 says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 10:57 am

Done, Poppy dearest !

Who's next? :wink:

XxxDo

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Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:24 pm

BigBadBear says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:24 pm

I'd like a review on Llama Boy. I know the title's kinda discouraging... but...

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Would love help on this.

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Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:18 pm

Sachiko says... · Sun Feb 22, 2009 9:18 pm

Hey, Dee! ^^

Just posted chapter one of my nano, like you asked!

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Feel free to get to it when you can! Thank you very, very much!

Sachi

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Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:16 am

asxz says... · Mon Feb 23, 2009 3:16 am

Hi, I think you reviewed my work? Anyway, I have re-done the prologue for my pending story, Action/Adventure fiction, Link here!

THANKS SO MUCH!

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Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:07 am

deleted2 says... · Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:07 am

Done, Teddy ^^

Edit: Done, kitteh dearest!

Asxz, I'm off to review yours now. And yes, I've reviewed for you before... All the chapters of Split Personality that you've posted so far, in fact

so I can tell you what I think of the improvements you made.

XxxDo

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Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:04 pm

Rosendorn says... · Wed Feb 25, 2009 11:04 pm

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I now have something new for you to review!

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Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.

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Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:13 am

deleted2 says... · Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:13 am

Done and done ^^

Now I'm off to review some works requested via PM's, but I think I'll be done soon.

Anyone, want a review?

*prods you*

Xxx

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:57 am

DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:57 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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