The Critique... Click?

Greyhound

It needs some help.

Thanks,

-Kylan

Kylan's coming up. The rest are done.

something kind of scavenger


It's short(ish) and for a contest, so it needs lots of harsh help, please.

I have a story that desperately needs to be torn to shreds...

Golden

Spiritual fantasy, in case it matters...

TL G-Wooster's done. Sorry this is taking so long. I'm lazy.

hey this is a poem and i hope that's ok this poem needs to be FINISHED and i really need a good critiquer for me to finally say that

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it's called "Beaten by Love"

thank you so much

I wrote a stream of consciousness piece the other day and thought you might be interested.

Here's a link: That's OK.

-Kylan

Icaruss selling his soul, so cheaply? I'm so disillusioned, man.

XD

I wrote something the other day. I was half-delirious at the time, honestly, it was 2am but I wasn't going to leave *another* short story unfinished so I rushed to end it and thus sleep. It's a sad day when I have to actually proposition people for critiques, haha, but its happening more and more often.

Anywhoodles,

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Tell me whatcha think.

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