The pirate in us all

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Sean moned lightly but hurting. She had fallen back asleep. Now smething was plagging her.*Uh-OH!*

Case and Daise-
Case and Dais ran along the street. Dais ran into a girl and fell to the ground. He grabbed her arm and janged her. The girl squeaked.

*there you go Bella*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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**Could I be on the same ship as Jake? Is that oki?**

Bella

I laid myself down on a large pile of nets from one of the many fishing boats that were docked.

It was nearing sunrise, and I hoped to get at least a few hours of sleep before it became too early.

I tipped my hat up over my eyes, keeping my hair tucked into it as I yawned and let myself slip into sleep.
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**Yeah, that would be the Crashing. Crimson Tear's people all disappeared, so you'd be better off with the Crashing.**
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**All right, sweetness**
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*Bella Dais one of the boys just ran into you...*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
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**Oh, oops...disregard the first post then**

Bella

"Let me go!" I squealed, pulling away from this person.

"Who are you?" I straightened out my hat, hoping I still looked rather boyish. No one was supposed to know about my being a girl.

"I'm Eli," I replied, using my usual code name.
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"Yeah and I'm Sean." He joked. His sister gave alight smile.

"Dais! Where have you two gone!?" Nash called form a door.

The girl looked back to him. He blushed alittle. She was to much a girl to him so it didn't mater.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Jake

My fever finally broke. I woke to find it just after dawn.

A great day, despite my lingering pain and the sling holding my right arm stationary. It would be good to get out, get some fresh air, and start regaining my strength.

I rose and began to attempt to slip into my boots, only to fail miserably.

Great. I hate being helpless.
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"Ha!" Sean came to in ajolt. Pain flew up her back as her wet hair flew forward. Her face was damp with sweat.

Jake was up. Great ecovedry but she wasn't doing to well.

The healer leaned over her as she lay back down quickly of the pain.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Jake

I rose and went to Sean's side, taking her hand in mine.

"What's wrong with her?" I asked.

"Mild trauma to the head, compressed organs, bruised bones...She's in bad shape."

I knelt beside her, smoothing her hair out so I could kiss her forhead. "Stay strong, Sean. For me. Please."
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"Try." was all that she could say. It didn't help that she had been battered during that fight and that now she was getting the worst. She hated being weak and not being able to sit up in thew crow's nest, where she belonged.

SHe also belonged with Jake.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Case and Dais-
*Bella!* Ayumigosu!*

The one called Eli gave a light laugh.
That didn't help Dais. He went even more red and Case nudged him.
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**I don't know what to post at all! I have no idea what's going on or anything >.<**
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Then read from your post down that has to do with Sean and your character.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet



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