The Kill

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*sure you can join, now i'm gonna put in a sceen from the vid but in the vid it was shannon leto and the girl wasn't his friend it was a GHOST*

the bathroom was covered in blood a figre came out of the shower it was hannah. She came over to him in the wrapped towel and kissed him. suddenly hannah s body started to rot away and cut up, her skin was bleeding. He closed his eyes and opened them again. She was hanging from the ceiling. He had to get out of there. he ran out of the shower room, hannah looked as good as she had before. His fell on to the bed. Totally blackness.
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PJ:

Deciding that she'd better make dinner she slipped out of the sheet and walked into the large kitchen, preparing the usual steak, gravy, mashed potatoes, and mushrooms. Peyton's favorite. She laughed as the ghost girl told her what she'd done to the boy upstairs. "Funny, but let's just stop for a while to really freak them out. Gather everyone together and become the staff. Clean their rooms up and then, after dinner, you can scare them out all you want. The girl giggled and flew off again, spiraling through a wall. Peyton quickly finished everything and set the dining room table in the next room. She set out the food and put together a salad, laying it in the middle of the long table. After a while the ghost girl came back down, telling that everything was done. PJ grinned and pulled out a huge gong, grabbing a stick thing. She hit the gong three times, hinding behind it and waiting.




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Hannah

She had screamed as he opened the door and just shut her eyes to whatever was in there. When she opened them Jared was standing before her, his face drained of all color and he was shaking uncontrollably.

"Oh my God! Jared what was in there? What happened?" she gasped.

"T-the thing looked-d like you b-but the bathroom walls w-were really bloody and it kissed me b-before cracking and dieing," he said slowly.

"Is it still in there?" Hannah asked, feeling herself pale.

Jared shrugged and slowly sat down on the bed. Hannah ran over to the bathroom and opened the door, automatically flicking on the lights. It looked... like a normal hotel bathroom. She was about to leave when she heard the bathtub running. It was just filling up with blood. When it wasalmost brimming with blood, Hannah heard a girl call to her.

"Hannah, I'm coming for you," It said, sounding delighted at the very idea. "I know who you are!"

Suddenly, something started thrashing in the tub wildly. It turned out to be a person. Hannah instantly recognized the person to be her older sister Lauren.

"Hannah! HELP ME!!" she screamed, ducking and diving underneath the waves.

"Oh my god, Lauren!" Hannah cried, dashing to her side. She pulled harder but she felt the waves pulling stronger.

The voice was in the bathroom laughed wickedly.

"Hannah, you can't help me anymore! Go! Get out of here and save yourself!!" Lauren cried.

"I can't leave you in there!" Hannah cried, tugging with ever muscle she had. Suddenly, she was thrust into the bloody tub too, but didn't feel Lauren. She was tossed and turned and when she finally came up for air, Lauren was gone, and the tub was filled with water, not blood.

Hannah leaned over and grabbed a towel and got out. Drieing hre face, she went to check herself out in the mirror. Wiping away the steam that clung to the mirror, she saw not herself, but an old woman in her clothes with completely black eyes.

The woman in the mirror beckoned her to come closer, but when she just stood there, the woman's face contorted and flew at her, baring sharp teeth. Hannah ran out screaming.

"Come on, Jared, we are officially leaving," she cried, grabbing a suitcase and throwing in stuff.
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''we cant we have a gig tomorrow,i cant leave the fans.if you have notices where a 'fan band' get it'' He said in a normal voice unlike Jareds. ''someone is just tricking us''
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::Peyton::

It was obvious that nobody heard the gong... due to all the screaming that was going on. Peyton growled and marched up the stairs, banging on room 102's door. "Dinner is ready! Eat it before the hounds do!" She yelled, holding in a laugh as she said the same the the other doors. She sat on the stair railing and waited, picking at her black painted nails, slightly annoyed. Three of the five people came out slowly, fear obvious in their eyes. "About damn time," Peyton glared at room 102. "Get your buddies and we'll all go eat..." She raised an eyebrow as they slowly backed away. "I'm not a ghost!! See!" She punched herself in the leg repeatedly. "Sheesh. Ghost aren't even real..." she rolled her eyes as one of the three knocked on room 102's door.

"Jared... Hannah... I think it's safe to come out and eat." He said quietly. If Peyton wasn't mistaken then the other three were Tomo, Shannon, and Matt. The ghost girl hovered behind Peyton, invisible to the others.

"The hounds are hungry..." she whispered.

"Tell them to hold their tails. I'll give them their food in a second," Peyton replied without realizing that the others were still there.

"Say what?" Another of the guys said aloud.

"Shh! I'm on the phone," Peyton pointed at the ear phone that was conveniently there as 102's door opened slowly.




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Jared looked over a the young emo girl, she looked like one of there fans. Jared didn't no what to do. Sould he stay or should he go.
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::Peyton::

Peyton waved at the guy, Jared, with a smile. "Hey Jared! I'm PJ! Now that we all know each other, let's go eat, cause I'm starving!" She laughed aloud and let go of the railing, falling backwards.

"I think she just commited suicide..." One of them said and Peyton laughed aloud.

"Are you coming or what?" She smiled, peeking around the stair's railing.




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still really unsure what to do here...

Name: Seth
age: 15
apperance: scruffy, brown hair which hangs lank and down to just above his shoulders,
he has scars on his forehead and arms,
he is quite tall for his age
he wears a zippered, black hoodie and dark blue, ripped jeans. a pair of very scruffy vans trainers adorn his size 10 feet.
race: caucasion?
history: one of his worst subjects at school. not sure what has happened in his past (suffers from amnesia) but has come here to try and start again.




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Jared could see a young teenage boy walk though the door, ''Welcome are you coming for tea'' Pj said. He nodded and joined them. Jared felt alone, Hannah was not following him. It looked he was alone with this boy.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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Seth asked the man, in a tone that can barely be called a whisper, what was going on here . Seth's bright blue eyes burnt their way into Jared's iris's as he waited for a reply.




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SHannon wandered into a room and found a few people. "Hey. Am I late?" He asked letting his bagage drop from his hands onto the carpet with a thud.

*Sorry. I have no idea if someones taen my place or not. I ust don't know ewhere I am...*
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Seth broke his gaze and looked round as someone else entered the room. Although he had no idea who it was he already felt nervous about their presence.

"who's that?" he asked in his usual gruff, quiet tone.

*i dont think anyones taken ur place. oh and hi*
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Hannah

Jared insisted on leaving but she was determined to stay here. She sat there on the bed, still shivering slightly at what had happened.

"You know I'm still here Hannah. You can't run forever as long as you stay here!" the voice sang from the bathroom.

Hannah screamed quickly and ran out, being sure to grab the key before slamming the door hard. She ran after the rest of the group, whimpering slightly as she hurried to catch up.

"Oh, I see that you decided to join us after all!" a young emo girl said.
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Seth

a blonde girl who looked as if she'd not just seen a ghost, but seen a ghost murder her whole family one by one ran into the room.
Seth couldn't cope with this anymore, the barrage of new faces made him very nervous and so, as much as he thought the pretty new face might be a good reason to stay, he stormed off down the nearest corridor.
He did not know what would be waiting for him down that corridor.




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*I'm gonna use a diffrent character* Any one can use Shannon I guess but I'm gonna creat a diffrent character to use.*

Name: Maria

Apperance: http://vix4711.deviantart.com/art/Anita ... r-27822597

History: No one knows. FOr all they know she is a ghost with how many times she tends to dissapear. SO you all knicknamed her the ghost.

Um... She plays the drum sometimes. A friend of one of the band members?

Maria:

SHe was looking down at a magazine as she walked down some stinky corador while she walked with her baggage. SHe had gotten in late. Well quite late and she was finally here. Someone ran into her and everythng went flying. "Ay! Watch were you're go-" SHe stoped as she saw the trubled boy with with a confussed face. "-ing." SHe dropped to help him up. "Sorry I tend to read while I walk." She apolagised although everyone knew to look out for her.

"No. I-I'm sorry." He didn't seem to like being around knew faces much. No memory of any of them? Maybe he wasn't much to understand. If he had amnisia she understood. A freind of hers had had amnisia but he had been missing for quite some time now.

*That work out?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet



The roots of education are bitter, but the fruit is sweet.
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