Nah, but I've heard about it,and seen commercials so I guess I have a good idea. And I made the girl preppy on purpose; it's always fun to be the really scared, preppy stupid girl;)!
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Jared, Tomo, Matt and Shannon arrive at the hotel all is quite. Also Hannah has arrived in her own car. ''Hey Jared'' she shouted. he stared giving her a wierd grin, he suddenly turns to the hotel and walks off. God the blond bimbos here jared thought to himself. Inside the hotel was empty ''Hey bro theres a note on the desk''He shouted to shannon. He picks up the red enverlope to revile a handwritten letter. Hope you enjoy your stay, Jared and Hannah in room 102, Tomo and Matt in room 104 and Shannon in room 106.
Lets go then and check out these rooms.
Every rose has it's thorn.. Just like every night has it's dawn.
I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!
Tomo slipped the key into the lock. He could feel it curve into every corner of the keyhole. A click sounded when the door opener was turned to the right. Inside darkness became the room. The only light was the shreds that broke through the slits of the gray curtains.
"Now where is that light switch?" Tomo asked himself, feeling along the walls in the darkness.
A pointy thing brushed his hands making him pull back. In the sullen darkness, he could see the oozing hot liquid pouring down his hand. Then, as if forced on by a more powerful source, the lights flickered on. The source of the room's yellow sun was a small chandelier hanging in the center of the ceiling. It was made of rusty sterling silver. Cobwebs embroidered it, giving it an gloomy effect.
Tomo's eyes perused the rest of the room. There was two twin sized beds which were parallel to each other. Pushed against the far wall to the left, was a dresser scratched beyond repair. The room was quite ordinary. Except for its ghostly apparel, there was nothing special about it.
Seeing enough of the dull chamber, Tomo turned to leave. But before he could, the light switched off and a wind resounded through the room. It knocked him out of the doorway, closing the door behind him.
Fear prominent on his face, he ran down the hallway and back down the stairs. He wasn't staying in this place another minute. And if the rest of the group had a sense in them, they wouldn't either.
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.
"Ugh, I never liked hotels much, do you? The always seem so dank and musty to me. Especially this one. I haven't--" she was cut off when Tomo ran up to them, breathless.
"Let's leave, NOW," he said, grabbing Jared's wrist and pulling him towards the door.
"Why?" Jared asked, chuckling and pulling his arm away. "We just got here. You can't expect to hate it right away." he said, shooting Hannah a look.
"Yes we can," Tomo said. He looked absolutely serious about what he said.
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Jared and Hannah were in front of their room, staring at Tomo confusedly when he barreled into them. Tomo knew they wouldn't take him seriously but he had to convince them that they needed to get out of their as fast they arrived.
"God Tom, you look like you seen a ghost," Jared joked, snickering.
"Man, I am seriously not in the mood for any teasing. This place is haunted," Tomo snapped, angrily.
He watched as Jared and Hannah exchanged glances, then took Jared's hand, hoping he'd follow him down the hallway.
"Where are you taking me?" Jared asked, jerking away.
"Dude, I'm trying to prove to you that this place is home to the deceased," Tomo replied, eyes getting big.
Matt and Shannon moved towards them, looking curious. Jared opened his mouth as to speak but he was cut off by a loud boom. Rain pounded against the windows and danced on the rooftops. Darkness poured in through the curtains. No one was going home tonight.
True love, in all it’s celestial charm, and
star-crossed ways, only exist in a writer’s
mind, for humans have not yet learned
how to manifest it.
''Ghosts arnt real and if they were what will they do to us, nothing'' Jared laughed
Hannah held his hand, And looked into his eyes. He had never noticed how beautiful she was.
'' me and hannah are going to are room why dont you just settle in, go on the laptop and check out this place if you want'' Jared pulled hannah up the stairs, Tomo gave then a dirty look.
Every rose has it's thorn.. Just like every night has it's dawn.
I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!
She took shaky breaths as she slowly clambered up the steps. Usually she wouldn't let something like this get to her but with a place as eerie as this and Tomo freaking out, she had to admit that it did make her heart beat faster. By the time they reached the top and found their room, she had basically managed to calm herself enough not to be physically shaking, but she couldn't help but wonder, what had Tomo seen?
"Well, this is our room, I guess," Jared said, gesturing towards the chipped up door on the very end. The number '102' where rusty and the gold paint was almost completely gone. Jared jammed the key into the lock and twisted it but nothing happened.
"Erg! This... darn key... won't... fit!" Jared grunted.
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Jared asked Hannah ''can i use one of your clips''. She handed one of her gold clips and jared bent it and opened the door. The room was dark and the windows where opene. Jared was sure he could hear someone in the shower but he didn't wont to scare hannah. He believed in ghosts, he was just to scared to admit it.
Every rose has it's thorn.. Just like every night has it's dawn.
I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!
She wished that she could just flop on the bed but the bed was so dirty and neglected looking, she didn't dare to do more than gingerly sit on it. Suddenly she realized that someone had been in the shower as she heard the water in the bathroom turn off.
"J-Jared, was that you?" she whispered, scared to know the truth.
"No," he said, trying to hide the fear in his voice.
What ever it was was stepping out of the shower. It ripped a towel off the rack so hard, Hannah and Jared heard it spin. Hannah clapped a hand over her mouth to hide a yelp as she heard it move around the bathroom.
"I'm gonna open the door on three," Jared said trying to calm her down. "One.... Two.... Three!"
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Peyton quickly walked down the street towards her hotel, slipping through the door and locking it behind her. She shuddered underher rain coat and shrugged it off, tossing it to the side. "PJ! They're here!" A little girl's ghostly figure floated into Peyton's veiw.
"Hmm... Okay. Let's go freak them out," she grinned at the ghost girl, who giggled and flew off. Once she was gone Peyton let out a heavy sigh, shaking her head and walking to the maid's closet. She pulled out a thin blanket and wrapped her shivering body in it, trying to warm up.
