The Kill

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Seth

"What friend?" Seth asked.
Before Maria could answer they heard the sound of people talking as they came up the stairs. The band members must have finished their farewells and the rest were probably coming back upstairs now.
Seth managed to drag himself upright in time to see Sara, Jared, a blonde girl and an emo girl walking up the stairs.
The second Sara saw them she went pale.
"What happened to you?!" she screamed and ran to give Seth a hug. He could tell from the look on her face that Maria was not impressed with this behaviour.
"I'm fine" Seth reassured her.
"But really," the emo girl stepped forward, "What happened?"
"Um..." Maria looked uncertain what to say and Seth sure as hell didn't know what to say either.
"Oh and I'm PJ by the way" the emo girl explained.
"I'm Hannah" the blonde girl chipped in.
"Right, introductions over," Jared finally spoke, "What happened?"
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Maria:

"I found him in the hall. That's all I know."

*got nothing*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Seth

Everyone turned to Seth.
"It doesn't matter. Just don't go in that room" He indicated the door he had fallen out of minutes before.
"Well now what?" Hannah asked, edging closer to Jared.
"Maybe we should...give in to the darkness" PJ's voice was deathly quiet and her eyes were unfocused and distant.
"Oh my god, what's happened to her?!" Hannah stopped trying to get close to Jared and rushed over to shake PJ, "What's wrong?!"
"Let me deal with this" Maria stepped forward just as PJ started laughing.
"What's so funny?" Jared asked angrily.
"I can't believe you fell for that...You're just so funny to watch when you're scared!" PJ was almost doubled up with laughter.
"Idiot" Maria said under her breath.
"Not funny" Hannah moaned.
Sara finally spoke up "Um...I think we have a real problem here..."

*I've done loads of stuff, I thought I'd let you come up with a monster or something*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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*Monster it is* :D *

Maria:

Everyone turned down the hall. Just out side the door Maria had come from herself there stood a hulking blue thing. Maria watched as its face came into view, its eyes watching for any sign of moment. Maria gave a faint gasp just to get its attention and its head jerked up. "Dumd stupid thing." With that she ran at it. It went down easily but when she got up to her feet she wasn't at the hotel anymore. Again in the dark real she was and the group she say in the distant. SHe hear them panic. All but Seth.

She turned to the monster as itself got back to its feet. It was hunched over as though it was having a bit of truble. She smiled smugly. "Where's your pupet master, pupet?" She asked. There was something weird beihind this. The pupet smiled widly at her and it dissapeared in one huge blow of smoke. She tryed to get it away but it was gravitating twards her. It surounded her.

"Good girl. You know when people are messing," She hear in her ear. Cold arms wrapped around her and her blood froze in her veins as her breath caught in her lungs. It was him again. She didn't turn as his arms started to get tighter around her. She was looking. Looking for a way out of this. She hated the fact that she knew this beast. He was human to a degree. SHe turned again, in his arms.

"Aye!" the boy turned intofront of her. "Don't I know you?" SHe gave his dark figure a smile. He looked down on her with intrest. She was bold but didn't put it all out on the line.

"No I don't think so." He smiled back at her with his dark eyes and set jaw.

"Aw darn." SHe gave frown and out of the corner of her eye she lookedat him. He stared down at her with interest. "Well-" SHe turned. "-I better be going then."

"Wait." He grabbed her arm. "You care to stick with me?" He swapped his free arm out showing her his car. It was huge. He was slightly older than her she guessed. She gave a smile and let him keep his hand on her arm. He walked her to his car and she willingly go tin. He ended up taking her to a break in two builings. SHe got out and looked around.

"Where are we?" She asked as she looked down an allyway. The boy smiled and took her arm.

"Not there yet." He said as he pushed her up against a wall. They fell through to somewhere and she jumped up. The boy had dissapeared and she was alone in a slightly familiar place. She smiled as she got up. Her dress was partly ripped at a seam and she payed no mind. She looked around as a picture from the ally dissapeared behind her. A figure of blue rushed past her as she looked back at the lessening picture. No going back now. "Sweet cheeks." She heard from behind her. She turned and was flung into a black wall. She got up tentitivly. She had been in this kind of mess all her life and she never got tired of it. It was her survivial. She was used to it. Knowing something since toodler years was somethig that grew with time. The reach it had now was too much almost.


She looked up as the boy ghosted above the darkly lit relm. He was nearly a darkness himself. He was near his death switch he could so easily make. He perfered though to stay the way he was. He was a distant friend. He'd disapeared many years ago. This is what he'd become of himself. She needed to get out of this part. Lossing people to the dark relm she wa suposed to get used to that after lossing ererything already to it. Why would this be anydiffrent. Whell... he didn't remeber her was one fact.

She was still in a distance when the boy shock her. She blinked and looked up into his dark brwon eyes. They were almost black now. He looked at her with concern. Was it him? She dared to lift her hand to touch his face. HIs skin turned smoth nder her caressing hand. He jerked away. He turned to his new self once more. She had nearly had him. He saw her happynessin her eyes and threw her. The smoke was gone now and the distant group queted as she strugled to get up. The boy lifted her by the colur and held her up against the wall. "I'm sorry, friend. Dametri." She slimped and her dead weight made him let her down. He hunched over her uncouniance body.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Seth

Although unsure what was going on with Maria, he felt he should try and help her.
"Jared" he started "Stay here with the girls and I'll go see what's happening"
Jared nodded silently and looked around at the darkness that surrounded them all.
"Wait!" Sara ran to Seth "I'm not losing you again. I'm coming with you"
Seth sighed "Look, it's safer if you stay with Jared, please," he implored.
"No, I don't care the danger, I'm coming with you"
"Fine" Seth didn't like the idea but there wasn't time to (and he didn't want to) argue with Sara.

As they wondered through the darkness they caught sight of a boy hunched over an unconcious girl. It was Sara who realised who the girl was - Maria.
The boy hadn't noticed them so they crept closer.

*sorry, not sure where they are at the moment :s*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Maria:

Her eyes parted slightly as Damitri gave a frown. He was atention on Seth and Sara. Why'd Sara have to come over here? Damitri's frwon turned into a scowl as he looked past her. He was somoning something. Was any of his tricks never going to end? "Seth...!" She croaked. She gave enough energy to show the urgency. Seth worled around grasping Sara's arm to a monster.

*care to do the honors?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Seth

The monster was revolting. It's skin looked too big for it's body and so most of it hung off the monster like sacks. The same skin that didn't fit it was covered in pus-filled sores which frewquently burst, oozed and then sealed up again ready to repeat the whole, disgusting cycle again.
It's jaws were massive and globules of drool constantly dripped from their open chasm that looked ready to swallow Sara whole. It had four thin, brittle arms which all ended in massive hands, each with seven fingers.
The first thing Seth did, upon conjuring the sword, was to cut off the huge, clawed hand which was clasped around Sara's arm. It continued to grip to her arm for a few seconds after its separation from the creatures body, before suddenly going rigid and open and falling onto the floor, where it faded into dust.
As Sara fell away screaming, Seth moved into a firm fighting stance and faced the monster down. Better finish this quickly he thought, Maria might not have long left.

The creature gave out a gutteral roar and Seth was drenched in spittle. The monster lashed out with one of its remaining hands and Seth dodged out of the way, cutting the hand off in the progress. And then there were two.
The monster snarled and gnashed its jaws as Seth went in for another slash. Sadly this one missed its mark and the monster let out a victorious roar, covering Seth in more spittle.
The monster made another swipe at Seth. He dodged it, but immediately afterwards the beast struck again, and again. Seth had to duck and dodge feverently to stop himself getting taken out by one of its massive claws.
Seth was tired out by this fight (and all of the ones before it) and so had to pause for a second. The monster noticed this and changed its tactics.As the monster raised both of its remaining "hands" ready to deal a critical blow, Seth jumped into action and, diving forward, sliced off its lower jaw.
The monster let out a disgruntled choking noise and clutched at where its jaw had been. The great hooked lower jaw fell gracefully through the air and, just as it hit the ground, dissolved into dust just as the hand had done.

It was at this point that Damitri realised that this boy might be more of a nucsance than he originally thought. He turned around to the fight, dropping Maria in the process.
Some help would be nice about now Seth thought, glancing at Maria - she was shocked, but apart from that she looked ok to Seth.

*to quote Seth...some help please?*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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Maria:

She got up to her feet as the disgusting monster disapeared and Damitri andvanced on Seth. She put her finger up to quite him. She didn't want to blow her cover. She needed surprise with Damitri or he would kill her before trying to kill Seth. She crept up in the dimness and pilled out the yellowing paper. It was a darker yellow than before. It was going to disinagrate. The silver hand formed and she gave a frown. She was going to have to chock Damitri?

SHe pulled out a strip of cloth from her pocket. Damitri went for a hit on Seth and it was blocked. The cloth misted as as something cept up her hand. Something clamped onto the strap of her dress and she crouched to jump. "Hey! What's she doing?" She could hear Hannah say a bit too out loud. Damitri turned quickly as Maria started into her jump.

He caught her and slamed her up agains the black wall. Seth planted a blow and he got a kick in the face. He went flying back and Sara rushed after. "You can't stop me," Damitri breathed into her face. She turned her head away and he grabed a fist full of her hair, janking her back to see him. A hiss eminated from her shoulder and he glanced down at a scorpian, poised for attack. He gave a slight chuckle and smiled at her. "You think that can stop me?" He laughed a light, humored laugh.

The scorpian stung his hand and he didn't flinch. "You're the only reason I came here. You're the reason every thing is the way it is. Do you understand?" She did. She was the reason everything started. Her eyes gave into tears as her face changed to a mask of unfeeling.

*She is the end of the horror Kobain. If she dies all the other's lives will go back to normal.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Maria:

She watched Sara cry over Seth's uncouncience form. (no he's not dead.) Maria turned to Damitri. "You're gonna go down too you know that?" She looked into his eyes. They resembled sadness now and then he reganed his hold.

"Yes, I know. I need to take you down though. Everyone is suffering because of you. You're the evil in the hotel. You've always been." His voice cracked.

"I am?" He nodded. She gave one last tear it's escape and she nodded. He let og over her and she lay down against the dark floor. "See you all in hell," She mumbled. Damitri chuckled one as a few tears droed from his face. She was good at that part. He lay down beside her and managed to dig his hand into the floor. Within a few seconds they were ingulfed and everyone was back in the hotel.

"What happened?" Sara asked.

"I have a good feeling..." Seth started. He was rubing his head.

"What?"

"Nothing."

*All done. It's time for me to vamanus!* See ya!*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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can i get the info please
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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read it. It's too long for me to explain but the ghosts and crap are gone. (pardon my language)
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Sara was shocked by what had happened, she had come to get Seth and then shes in this hell hole. ''Seth, are you alright?'' her tears landed on his face.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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Seth

"I'm fine really" he replied, "[more importantly] Are you ok?"

*sorry, not sure what to do now....we're back in the hotel right?*
"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"




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*yes you are*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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*thanks*

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"This is my plan of attack"

"Hmmm, looks more like a pin to me"

"No, it's definitely a tac"



"Beneath this mask, there is more than flesh. Beneath this mask, there is an idea, Mr. Creedy, and ideas are bulletproof."
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