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30 Minutes in heaven

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**He'll be a lil' rude**

Tyler---

Ty looked at the guy, "Alright, it's good." He said, "Step back." He nodded. THe guy stepped back and closed the door. He looked down at the girl, "You don't care do you?"

He smiled kissing her neck softly.
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Kurimi sat next to the door he just left.
He felt horrible.
He had just intruded on someone making out with a girl.
All because of the horrible thought that came back from his father.
He suddenly felt flirty.
All of his thoughts were sucked away by the sight of a girl.
The girl was looking at him.
He didn't know what to do.
Suddenly Ty came out of the closet with the girl.
Ty looked at him with a grin.
Ty said "Looks like someone is already in love huh?"
Kurimi looked at him...
"Why are you talking to me like I didn't just intrude your privacy?"
"It's cool, I want to help..."


*Sorry, If you want the story to flow in another direction Ill delete this post or you can just play along*




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*sorry i wasn't on all night so im a little lost*

"Wow! Sorry I'm late."Nagame said bursting through the door, her hair sticking to her face with wet water.

"It's porring out there."she said shutting the door behind her as she shuck her head.The alarm went off."Crap!"she said looking to one of her frends.
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Kurimi ran up to nagame
"What the hell is going on?"




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*Sorry i had to go to school. SIC we haven't come out yet.*


Once the crazy boy left he shut the door and it was just Tyler and me again. He went back to kissing me.
"Tyler" I sighed his name as he kissed my neck. His mouth returned to mine and he inserted his tongue...I liked this feeling. My blood boiling under my skin, the way his touch sent sparks through me and made me gasp. I loved the way i felt in his arms.
A guy had never held me like this before.
But despite how good it felt I had to remember this was just a game to him. Once the time was up he'd be holding Genna like this. When that door opened he would completely forget my name. I would just be the out-of-place shy girl again.
While I'm in here I might as well make the most of it though... I became more aggresive, putting my hands on either side of his face. One hand slipped to my shirt and i pulled it up over my head. I waited for him to make the next move...
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Tyler---

Ty was surprised when she pulled her shirt off, but he didn't care. All the better for him, right? He pushed her against the wall kissing her his hands exploring her body. He kissed her neck sucking on it softly.


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Shiro-

He didn't know why he was even coming. But now he was late, just arriving at Sam's house.

ding dong

Sam opened the door to see a short white haired blue eyed boy. "hey, Shiro." Sam greeted.
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Sam~

Sam imediately pushed a number into Shiro's hands and pulled him in the house. "So, what'd you get?" Genna asked Sam as she closed the door.

"15. Why?" She asked, locking the door again.

"Jus' wondering." Genna smiled.

"FYI, there wasn't a 15 for any guys. Only twenty-eight people were invited." Sam sighed, walking over to the first closet and banging on the door.

"Hold on!" Came the reply. "We gotta get dressed!"

"Awh, that's to bad, Sam." Genna snickered and walked up to her.

"Yep," Sam growled, opening the door as the Number Ones walked out.

"Three and four!" She yelled, walking over to another clean closet and opening wide.
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I heard Sam yell for the next couples. I was enjoying myself immensely with Tyler. His hand were rubbing my torso up and down. I'd never done somthing like this. I whipped Tyler's shirt off and revealed nice abs I gasped. He chuckled and bent his head to my neck, I sank into his arms.
I knew time was almost up but I didn't want it to ever end. Tyler made me feel totally out going and like I was somebody else.
Last edited by Vampy_Girl15 on Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Shiro-

"Hmm, 15. Wonder who it'll be." Shiro wondered.
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**Maki, there isn't a 15 for guys...last # is 14 for guys...sorry! I said that in my last post..**
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**Sorry for 2Xposting but the last one was just a bit of info 4 maki**

Sam~

Sam knocked loudly on the door Ty was in. "Hey, you two! Times up! Tyler, Genna wants you back!" She laughed and Genna started yanking on the handle playfully.
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I gently pushed on Tyler's chest and stepped towards my shirt that lay crumpled on the floor. The handle jiggled and i quickly put my shirt on. I tried to hide the disappointed look on my face. Genna wanted him again. That could've been Sam just messing around but it was still probably true. He liked her and I liked him, great. This all would've been better if he was tremendously ugly but he wasn't. He was gorgeous.
I looked over to see him putting on his shirt. He smiled and the door opened. I put on a devious smile just for the heck of it and sauntered right past Genna to the couch.
"Guess you won't be trowing me naked into the pool." I told Sam. She giggled and Genna looked pissed, I was satisfied.
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Tyler—
Ty watched her walk to the couch and sit down. He wrapped his arms around Genna and kissed her neck. “Miss me?” He laughed. He had been having fun with that girl, oh what was her name. Clarissa that was it. She was pretty too. He shook his head mentally and pulled Genna to the couch plopping down between the two girls. He put his arms on the back of the couch wrapping them around both of them. He knew that would cause trouble between them, but he didn’t mind. They would be fighting over him and that wasn’t such a bad thought.

Sinra---
Sinra was getting anxious, just a few more people. Seven was going to be in a little while. She sat back on a chair and watched the people. Her eyes landed on the guy, Caleb, he was cute, well hot. She spotted Ty sitting down between two girls and she rolled her eyes. He caught her looking his way.

“I’ve got room on my lap.” He smiled,

“Sorry, I don’t go for scum.” She laughed smiling wickidly. He just smiled back. They had used to be really good friends when they were little they always teased each other to no end and rarely hung out. But he was fun to mess with. That was about it.
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