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30 Minutes in heaven

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Kurimi-
Kurimi was going to do it.
No one wanted to stop him...
It would all end in front of the building where a big party was going on.
He had kept a gun in his pocket incase he had needed to use it...
This is it...
He Held the gun up to his head.
Hopefully someone in the building saw this and went to stop him. Other wise it was over for him....




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Sam~

Sam stood back up, tossing Gretched a balled up number. "We are," she smiled, soon frowning as Clarissa swung her legs over Tyler, and kissed him. Oh shit! She saw Genna smile wickedly and swing her legs over his other leg. Ty turned his head and Genna kissed him again, wrapping her arms around his neck. Dammit! I was hoping to avoid this kind of stuff! Sam thought quickly, grabbing the karaoke mic and sticking it to her mouth.

"If there is a fight everyone included in that fight will be stripped and thrown into the pool!" Sam yelled quickly.
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
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Kurimi loaded the gun and held the trigger.
His time was nearing...




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Gretchen-

"Oh God, Genna, what kind of shift are you running?" Gretchen asked, as she wandered through the house. She grabbed the gun off the guy.

"You're an idiot," she said. "What, some girl wouldn't play the game with you?"

He stared. She knew why. Gretchen never, ever showed her sensitive side to a guy she didn't fancy.

She rolled her eyes, picked up the gun and threw it out the window. He was still staring.

"I'm not going to kiss you, if that's what you want."
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I was disgusted at Genna. Tyler had reacted to my flirting but he had also reacted to Genna. I wanted to spit in her face, but I didn't want to be thrown in the pool naked.
I wonder if they'd really do it. If they did I'd probably be the only one thrown in. Sam would naver do that do Genna. I hated thinking she would do it to me but it was possible.
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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"no" Kurimi said.
"You don't understand."
"All my life I've been alone...abused..." He said...
For the first time in his life Kurimi shed a tear.




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Tyler---

Tyler was having a blast. Both girls were pretty good kissers and both were hott. He didn't know which he would pick, he was never good at that. When Genna let him go she smiled and he returned the smile. He found Sam's annoucement pretty funny too. A fight, over him? HA!


***Will post of Sinra when my mom grrrr***

Sinra---

Sinra smiled at him. "Hi."
Last edited by TNCowgirl on Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:41 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Im getting sick of Kurimi so Im gonna introduce...



Name: Kyle
Appearance: Gothic, flipped hair, about 5"6 tall and black hair.
age: 16
Background: Laid back lover, loves to kiss.
History: ...
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Kyle-
Kyle ran into the building.
"Holy shit! im so late!" Kyle said...




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Caleb:

I blushed. "So...um...are we supposed to kiss?" I asked shyly. I wanted to run and hide. I didn't know what I was doing here. I sighed and leaned back against the wall, trying to get comfortable.




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Kyle~~~~~
Kyle ran up to Genna.
"So uh, What exactly is going on here?" Kyle said.
"What did I miss?"




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Sinra--

Sinra laughed, "Let me guess, you've never done this before?" He shook his head. "Neither have I. But I think that is the jest of it." She smiled and walked towards him. "Wanna?"


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**TN, Trent? Did you change his name?**

Kyle bust through the door. He looked disoriented. Kyle and me are really good friends but I wasn't giving up to Genna so easily. I stayed where I was.
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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Sam~

Sam laughed as Kyle ran in. "Kyle!" She called and he whipped around. "We're playin' thirty minutes in heaven," she tossed him a balled up number, "If you just talk or don't do anything you will be stripped and tossed in the pool."

"Not this again!" He complained but Sam just nodded and walked over to Genna.

"My head hurts, kay?" She whispered into her ears. Genna just nodded and focused back on Tyler. Sam smiled and shook her head, running up the stairs. She walked into her room and flipped the lights off, collapsing on the bed and rubbing her temples. Pain. Annoyance. Ignorance. Hate. Love. Fakers. Emo. Prep. Punk. Jocks. She thought as she massaged her head. God I hate highschool and these stupid games.

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***No, typo, sorry***

Tyler---

Tyler looked down at Clari when she seemed to look at the door. He watched as a guy walked in. He leaned down so his mouth was by her ear.

"Know him?" He asked softly.
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Kyle looked at the balled up paper in his hand that Sam had thrown him.
"Ahh i see." Kyle said.
"Hmm thrown into a pool naked." Kyle said under his breath.
... "Finding someone shouldn't be to hard.." He said.



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