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30 Minutes in heaven

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Sam~

Sam snickered and walked over to the radio in the corner of the room. She flipped it on to a mixed station and walked back in between the closets, listening to all the things that were going on. This is all sick. I can't believe Genna calls it my party every weekend! She tries to get me with a guy but I purposly pick an unused number. God I hate her sometimes! She thought, taking a safety clip out of her pocket and clipping her shirt back together. I'll have to sew that back before tomorrow. She leaned her head back against the wall, the three speakers surrounding her.
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
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*This stinks, no one wants to interact with Shiro- so I'm out*
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Izm sooo lost! Can someone bring me in?




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****Luna how many closets are in use, I can't pull Caleb in until number seven. :'(******
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***Jamie, Johnathan is right in front of my character, Bella. She was teasing him, trying to find out what number he had. She's got her arms around him....hell, I'll just copy the post for you, k?

By the way, I'm grounded, but I'll try to get on at school on a daily basis. So on the weekends I'm pretty much screwed. Keep my character going a bit, please?***

Bella--

I smirked, watching the guys run at Genna. Tyler amused me to no end. Especially because Genna just let him do that! It was hilarious.

Johnathan had stopped when Tyler took over. Not looking at all concerned, he turned and looked at me.

I raised an eyebrow, watching him. "What'd you get?" I asked. He chuckled, rolling his eyes at me.

"Guess you'll have to wait and see," he said, grinning.

"Aww, come on," I smiled playfully as he took a step toward me. I put my arms around his neck, my fingers playing with his hair. "Please tell me?" I whispered, my lips moments away from his.

Some of the others watched me with disgust. I was enjoying myself, so I ignored them.

**There ya go Dr. Jamie.**
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**Three and we're on number four...but remember...IT IS A HOUSE AND A PARTY! THERE ARE MORE THAN JUST THREE LIL' CLOSETS haha**
"When other girls wanted to be Ballerinas, I kind of wanted to be a Vampire." ~Me
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*My chaacters up for anyone to interact with...*

"Um...It lookes like we're playing that game again.Ug.We're playing thit again?We did this last time."she grumbled as Sam shuved a number into her hand.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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***Amber, the first round isn't over.****

Sinra----

Sinra looked at her paper again, seven. Her favorite number. Hopefully she would get stuck with a cute guy.

"Ok, Seven in this closet." Sam smiled. She stood up and slipped in the closet waiting to see who else walked in.



***There DR, Caleb can go in if you want***
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*what do you mean round theres more than one?*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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****I don't know, there could be.*****
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*uo...*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Kurimi was getting bored, and lonely.
He was very lonely his whole life, and even though he was surrounded by all these people, he was very lonely.
Kurimi ran out of the building and stood in the darkness....
He had no more reason to live...
He wanted to kill himself...




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Tyler put his arm around me. The feeling was bitter sweet though because ha had his other arm aroung Genna. I'd never shared a guy and I wasn't about to start now. But I didn't know if he liked me in that way... What to do, what to do.
I decided I'd flirt and if he didn't respond i'd just let Genna have him.
In one quick move I swung my legs onto his so That I was sitting sideways facing him. He turned his head to look at me and I kissed him.
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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*sorry, I have't been on... Gretchen's about to make a dramatic entrance*

Gretchen-

She tossed her hair back. It was straight down her back. Her miniskirt was pale denim, and she was going commando. Her heels were black and sparkly, matching her haltertop which hung down at the back. Her make up was done perfectly.

She walked confidently into the room. "Sorry I'm late," she said, sitting down and crossing her legs. "Are we playing the game?" she asked Genna. "I'm bored already."

*haha, who shall she victimize? I'm a little lost, so someone can you bring her in?*
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Johnathon:

I laughed at Gena. "Only for a price, gorgeous." I said teasingly.

"What price is that?"

I leaned down and frenched her. "That one. and, by the way, my number is 9." I grinned and walked away.

Caleb:

I turned red as my number was called. I walked into the closet to see a gorgeous girl standing there. "Um...hey." I said shyly. I ddn't know what to do. I was such an idiot!



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