30 Minutes in heaven

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Johnathon:

I was so excited! Tonight was going to be amazing. Girls were so much fun to mess with. I smiled and got ready for the party.

Caleb:

"But..but...dad you can't be serious! These parties can get wild you knoww"

"And that would be nice for once! Caleb...you need to act like a teenager every now and then. Your mother and I worry about you. Do this for me."

I nodded and went upstairs, changed and nervously drove to the party.




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Sinra----

Samantha was sitting on 'her' bed rocking back and forth listening to her music. The phone rang, she ignored it, it was never for her. never did anyone call to talk to her.

"GET THE PHONE Sinra!" Her foster parent yelled. She rolled her eyes and grabbed the phone that was in her room.

"Hello?" She answered.

"Sinra?" A girl's voice asked,

"Yea." She wanted to groan, was she being sent to another home.

"This is Genna, your invited to Samantha Evans party, you gonna come?"

"When?" She asked switching the phone to her other ear and standing up moving to the dresser looking at her reflection.

"Today."

"Sure, what time."
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Sam~

Sam walked back downstairs just as Genna said, "Five to midnight." Sam rolled her eyes and yanked out a few small tables, pouring chips into random bowls and putting soda cans on the tables.
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Caleb:

I knocked timidly on the door. I was early. I sighed. why had I come? I was an idiot! I groaned inwardly as the door was yanked opened.




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Sinra---

Sinra hung the phone up then pulled on a halter top, then a pair of pants. She started walking towards where Samantha Evans lived wondering why she was even going. It didn't make any sense to her at all. She just sighed and kept going. She got to the house just as a guy was knocking on the door.
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Sam~

Sam heard Genna rip open the door and greet people. She walked over to the closets that were going to be used and quickly cleaned them out, just as two people walked into the house.
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**I never found a proper picture, so I'll put some good description in here.

Bella--

I examined my reflection.

My brown hair was long, hanging down to my hips. I had put in a few wash out black and purple highlights before getting dressed. My jean miniskirt had a frayed bottom, and ended about half way down my palms when my arms were straight at my sides. My purple and black striped stockings were thigh highs, and looked amazingly excentric to me. I wore a black button up the front t-shirt, nothing under it, unbuttoned dangerously low, with a purple ribbon tied around my waist.

Slut my mind screamed. I laughed, knowing I would get that reaction a lot tonight.

It wasn't my fault that this style of clothing had already been claimed as "slut" clothing. I liked it, and that's all there was to it.

"Mom!" I called as I ran down the stairs. I slipped on my high-heel boots and grabbed the keys to our black mercedes that was parked in the garage.

"Yeah?" My mom came out of her room, wearing an outfit that would be considered 'slutty' as well.

"Can I take the mercedes? Please?" I pleaded.

"Where are you going?"

"Party at Sam's." My mother rolled her eyes and sighed.

"There are gonna be guys, aren't there?"

"No, I'm dressed up for the hell of it," I replied, rolling my eyes back.

"Turn," she said, examining me. She had me bend over, making sure my ass didn't hang out, and making sure my underwear weren't sticking out the top of my skirt. Once she was done she kissed my forehead. "Have fun."

"Thanks mom." I ran out the door.
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He didn't know how he got dragged into this. Going to a party at Sam's house. A girl he barely new. But the only reason he come was because he older sister said it would be fun for him to make friends.
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*Sorry if this is too late. I've just never done one of these... Sounded fun!*





Name: Clarissa Yatting [y-at-ing]

Age:16

Personality: She's kind of a dork. She is ALWAYS reading. She has lots of friends, from every group there is. Well maybe that's exagerating but whatever. Basically she's not picky with her friends. Shy. Looking for love.

History: Her mom died When she was 11 and her dad is a book critic. She has 2 older brothers and 1 older sister. She's the "baby"

Apperance: She has aquamarine eyes and long, dark lashes. Her hair is blue black. She's has pale skin. And she's small and pixie like.
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Johnathon:

I arrived a little late. I saw a girl getting out of a mercedes with a reaveling shirt. MM...scrumptious. I thought, starring at her. "Hello, gorgeous, my name's Johnathon. What's yours?"




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Sinra---

Sinra walked in the door and looked around the room. She ran a hang through her hair that was hanging down draped over her neck.
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Bella

I grinned, raising my eyebrows at the boy who had greeted me.

[i]Asshole[/b] my mind triggered, sniggering. He quite obviously noticed my shirt before anything else. His eyes scanned my body, as would any other boys eyes, lingering on my breasts, and then my lips, and finally meeting my eyes.

"Bella," I replied, moving to walk in front of him. I made sure I was swaying my hips as I walked, knowing he would be watching.
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I was running down towards the phone in the den by the second ring. I was just about to grab it when my evil brother, Kevin, pushed me out of the way. God, my house was crazy.
"Oh, here it's for you." he said tossing the phone to me. It hit my chest and then fell to my hands.
"Gee, thanks. Hello?" I didn't recognize the number on the caller ID.
"Hey, is this Clarissa?" it was a girl's voice.
"Yes, who's this?"
"This is Genna, I'm inviting you to Samantha's party tonight."
"Oh, hey Genna. What time does it start?"
"five o' clock to midnight."
"Okay, I'll be there." i hung up the phone and looked down. Short shorts and a wife beater was not the proper attire for a party. I looked at the clock it read four thirty. Shit, why did people do things so last minuet?

She was in her room going through her closet and found a cute black with off-the-shoulder sleeves and a mini skirt. She put leggins on under the skirt because the skirt was way to short for her to feel comfortable without them. She found her moms old sparkly ballet flats and put them on wiping a tear away from her eye. She missed her a lot but she couldn't cry anymore.

When I got to the party I saw Johnothan hitting on Bella. She was very confident and most of the time I liked her but some other girls didn't because of the way the guys stared at her. Bella walked past him and I followed. Johnothan and I were friends but we didn't talk much. Guess that would make us aquaintances really. Bella knocked on the door and Genna answered letting us in.

I saw a few people there. Caleb, he was really cute. I'd had a crush on him a while but to scared to do anything. I went to sit on the couch he was on.


*Jamie, can Caleb and Clarissa get together?*
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Samantha~

Genna grabbed Sam's arm and pulled her aside, shoving two hats filled with folded pieces of paper in her direction. "God! What are you wearing?!" She almost shouted and ripped Sam's shirt to where it was alot more releaving.

"Slut," Sam laughed as she looked at Genna, whom wore a tight tank and a mini skirt on. Sam turned back towards the group, quickly handing out numbers.
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