Young Writers Society

**Ugh...Zombie. Will you please not say; Tears a peace of clothing off and wraps it around arm. Just say; He tore a peace of clothing and wrapped it around his arm...it is really annoying...I'm sorry but I'm serious when it comes to people writing like that**

Sam~

Sam growled at the girl. "If you want to get to Paradise you'd better follow me," she threatened. She'd promised that she'd bring back all the soul animals to her 'grandma'. "Now c'mon," she growled, walking back towards town.

"What about my hourse!?"she wined as she picked the boy up off the ground....

Sam~

Sam hissed through her teeth but instantly found herself calming down. "What about it? If you're going to Paradise you won't need one. If you want one that badly then I'll buy you another. Now please come. I must get all the Soul Animals in this down and leave before dusk.

"Why?"she asked in persistence as she helped the boy follow behin...
*Got 2 go bye...*

Sam~

"Well, I've already got the Nobels on my tail from the other town. The ones here will start suspecting something with all of us in cloaks." Sam laughed lightly.

*my character wears a hat*

Seda-

He looked at the other two. "Well we heard Sora introduce herself to that Sam girl earlier. But I'm Seda." The three turned and began walking towards the inn together. "But anyways I wonder what caught that girls attention?"

*Who are u refering to?*

The girl hid her face as the boy strugled alng.....

Geez I can't keep up with this! I regret it but I'll have to drop out =( Sorry! See ya'll later.

Sora-

"I think it was another one of us." Sora answered.

*is it all right if Seda's brother is with the nobles chasing them?*

"So whats Paradise?" Confused By them talking.

*?*
were trying to get there...I don't understand some of this but its kinda fun...*

*my charater doesnt know what it is*

*oh...um then ask the q like "Am I in paridise?If so why do i still feel pain?...*

*is it too late to join?*

*begs*