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Seda-

He was walking out of the market when he saw a girl rush down an alley. Curious Seda followed and peered into the alley he only caught one sentence.

"Show me your true form."
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

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After Eating I Go and start target practest with targets he set up long ago.
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The boy didnt ponder on how she looked but instead invited her to stay a while..."No t5hans I really should go..." the girl said rushing back out the door...He caught her b the arm."Just remember, Ve."the boy said and the girl scurryed away and out to the rain that had drenched every thing...

She hoped on her horse and took off lighting fast...
*she is still to scared of a few people...*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Collin-

Shifting winds brought the smell of others drifting past my nose. Others like me. I turned my head towards the strongest and closest scent; a fox and a wolf.

How long had it been since I'd met those who shared the same ability as I did? Too long now, I would like to think. Despite the nagging pull in my head warning me that I would soon regret it, I set off in the direction the scent came from, keeping a wary distance of strangers. When I entered the square, filled to the brim with travelers, merchants, beggars, and a whole odd assortment of people, I slipped to the side and into one of the dark alleyways that littered the town. A quick glance over my shoulder told me I had not been followed, or even noticed. Good.

Turning again to face the dark street ahead, I noted, for the first time, the two silhouettes near the end. One was small, standing next to something that looked startlingly like a cage. The other was more human, standing roughly my height, a hood concealing the facial features. But I could tell from the stance that it was female.

The scent of other soul animals was amazingly strong here. Stronger than in the square. Keeping my two ears carefully concealed by my hair, I advanced slowly. They hadn't noticed me yet.

They were the two I had smelled earlier, of that I was sure now. The animal was the fox, the human was the wolf.

The winds picked up, blowing through the alley from the square. My scent was caught up and carried past the two. But on the wind I caught the scent of another soul animal, standing farther back up the alley. I turned my head slightly and caught sight of another human, smelling strongly of panther, watching curiously.

I was trapped.
Be the cartoon heart. Light a fire, light a spark. Light a fire, flame in my heart. We'll run wild, we'll be glowing in the dark.




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The hourse traveled as fast as its legs would go untill it tumbled on something in the woods and hazil went flying through the air......
The hourse got up and left...
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Something move In the the Bushes.Then A Creature that look a lot like a Wolf but the Flesh On him Roted away. It Like A soul animal was Croruped or Tortured.
"Who are?" The Creature Growled and the Jump torwed me. I started to Run the Moster chased after.
I Ran up a Tree then sit up on it and shot an arrow at the Beast. It didnt seem to Hurt It then It jump and Nearly hit me. I Jump down and Kick the Beast Jaw.
It Stop for a second, enough time for me to run away.
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She landed with a hard thud and got up to dust her self off she had been having trubles the whole day and now it was worse withthe hourse gone....She ran after it untill soon she ran strat past a boy as he ran the other way>She froze to look back and so did he. The wolf chaught up and gralled at her as she turned around to see it in all its gloory..She froze...
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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Sora-

She turned into a tall red haired blue eyed girl. Sora bowed to Sam. "Thank you, for saving me Sam."

Sam stared at her. "How do you know me?"

Sora smiled. " You are more famous than you relize."
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*Maki chan wich other storybooks are you in?*
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We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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"Ran Its a Moster!!!" Shoots an arrow at the Creature hit In the Head It didnt stop it.
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He angered it even more and it bared its teeth at the both of them."Hey don't put away your weon mabe that will calm it."hazil said holing a hand up to sstop him any further...
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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*I'm in a lot of others I'll name a few- War of Gods, The Coven, The Invation, Hitsguaya, and more.*
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*Im guessing were done for the day in the bleach one...killl the zombie is sleepin on the floor...*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet




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"I think It was a Soul animal Once" Aiming the Bow at the Beast.
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Sam~

Sam smiled softly. "Ah, well, if you know me it's only right that I know you," she bowed in return.

"Sora. Saora the Fox," the girl replied.

"Ah, okay. You might want to put this on," she handed Sora a black cloak to hide her ears. "It's my back-up just in case anything happens to this one." The blade on her back suddenly shifted and shook angrily. Sam sighed and turned, facing two other humans that were Soul Animals.

"Well, as you all know, I'm Samantha the Wolf. Will. You, introduce yourselves?" She asked, smiling.
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