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Paradise

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myfreindsavamp
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:40 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:40 pm
She ran at another after she nocked one out."Ha!" she said coming up to meet him at full speed and they jumpd back as he swong a sword.

"Ow.You cut my hair."she wined looking down at a peice of hair on the ground.

The man took the chance and swong again....

*She says help!*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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sylverdawn
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:57 pm
sylverdawn says... · Tue Apr 15, 2008 5:57 pm
Seda-

He twisted around and shifted into his jaguar form, kicking back with his hind legs he sent Ran crashing into the noble attacking Hazil, he twisted around and stalked towards the other nobles, claws extended and teeth bared.

**agh!!! writer's block.**
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

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myfreindsavamp
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Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:34 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:34 pm
*wow!*

Hazil flinched for a moment and when she opened her eyes the man was gone...
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
~William Shakespeare, The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet
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