The Critique Boutique

Hey Suz!
Do you mind reviewing this?
It's a short part to a two piece little romance story, like, 700 words. But I could really use an opinion on the flow of things and on the general tone...pwease.

Hello!

Would you critique topic63912.html? Under historical finction, part one of two of a short story.

Thanks in advance

Hello could you please reveiw the first chapter of my novel, Darkest Moments?
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pretty please?
-Jackle

can you review my story?

here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic64143.html

thanks in advance!

Poor Conrad. His piece has been stuck with just 1 review for so long.

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Hey! Could you please do post707464.html#p707464 for me!

Thanks
~Kim~

Note to Kyllorac (and everyone else):

(I guess I should put this rule on my main page)

I will not give reviews to someone who is not requesting it for themselves. So, essentially, you cannot request that I give reviews to another person; they should come ask me for the review themselves.

Besides, I already discussed that poem with Conrad via IM and in great detail. We're buds like that.

Suz m'dear!

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Thanks so so much! (it's a poem)

O Suz, I would be most humbled if you could rip apart this poem which I wrote for Rosey's contest.

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Hey, Suzanne.
Could you take a look at this for me? It is historical fiction and somewhat romantic as well. This is only the first chapter. Thanks so much, in advance.

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p.s. If the link does not work right, I'm sorry. I don't know how to post just the topicnumber as the link.

Hey Suzanne I realize this is under fantasy but it's very dark and unlike high fantasy it just in a made up land with treachery and turmoil ect.

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Hey there. Would you mind critiquing this for me? Thanks a bunch in advance.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65349.html

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Hey could you take a look at this poem for me? Please and thank you.