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Azila · 2008-03-24T16:27:39Z

Hullo, all! At popular Skins's demand, I'm re-vamping this thread. You probably know the drill: if you want a critique, tell me so here -- just make sure to post the link, so I can find it. Some things about my reviews: 1. I especially like to review Other Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Science Fiction. I will critique other things too (including Art & Photography) but I might not feel as comfortable with it. 2. I don't generally do poetry, and my reason why is nicely summarized by this Bob Dylan quote: "Don't criticize what you can't understand." However, if you really want me to look at your poem I'll do my best. 3. Please don't give me anything rated 18+ unless the content isn't too explicit. 4. I don't want to review novels unless it's the first chapter/prologue. I really don't want to review "chapter 35, part 8 out of eleven." 5. Here are a few examples of my critiques: Can You See Me? , The Unicorn . By the way, I'm not going to reply to this after each review anymore. If I've already gotten to a request then I'll "Like" that comment. Also, I give very in-depth reviews that generally take me about an hour to write (from the time I start reading) so if I have a lot of critiques lined up you may have to wait a bit, but I will try to get back to you within a day. Warning: I can be harsh. a

Kagi

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Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:13 pm

Kagi says... · Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:13 pm

Hey you.

Here you go.
I warn you, it ain't the prettiest thing around but you know,
It may be horrible but that's what you're for right?

*Feeble moan*
Right.

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Attolia

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:52 am

Attolia says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 9:52 am

Hey Azila, I'm Attolia. Borntobeawriter recommended I come to you for a prose-centered review, and I checked out some of your reviews and liked them. Can you review this piece for me please?

viewtopic.php?t=78854

Thanks

ehte92

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:49 pm

ehte92 says... · Wed Apr 13, 2011 2:49 pm

Hello there, Bugzile. XD
Sorry for the name if you do not like it. :smt003

Could you please review this for me?

Thank you.

*Ehte*

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carbonCore

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Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:53 pm

carbonCore says... · Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:53 pm

Azila-- I would like a review on Stains of Red, my newest work. I think it's very much an Azila piece!

Danke sehr!

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Mon Mar 11, 2024 6:05 am

DreamyAlice says... · Mon Mar 11, 2024 6:05 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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