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Hullo, all!

At popular Skins's demand, I'm re-vamping this thread. You probably know the drill: if you want a critique, tell me so here -- just make sure to post the link, so I can find it.

Some things about my reviews:
1. I especially like to review Other Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Science Fiction. I will critique other things too (including Art & Photography) but I might not feel as comfortable with it.
2. I don't generally do poetry, and my reason why is nicely summarized by this Bob Dylan quote: "Don't criticize what you can't understand." However, if you really want me to look at your poem I'll do my best.
3. Please don't give me anything rated 18+ unless the content isn't too explicit.
4. I don't want to review novels unless it's the first chapter/prologue. I really don't want to review "chapter 35, part 8 out of eleven."
5. Here are a few examples of my critiques: Can You See Me?, The Unicorn.

By the way, I'm not going to reply to this after each review anymore. If I've already gotten to a request then I'll "Like" that comment.

Also, I give very in-depth reviews that generally take me about an hour to write (from the time I start reading) so if I have a lot of critiques lined up you may have to wait a bit, but I will try to get back to you within a day. Warning: I can be harsh.
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heya I'd appreciate a critique of this =] :

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This is rated PG-13.

It's an series of stories, but they stand apart alone mainly, so you don't need to read the others to understand what is going on. It is also in 'Fantasy Fiction'

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I only need less than twenty more crits in order to get another star!

...so, who wants a review? They're free.

~Azila~

I'd love one on my new story! It's three parts, and here are the two I have up:

Part One: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

Part Two: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28953.html

Do whatever you can! Thanks a million! (And let me know if you want one in my 'want a critique?' thread! I need another star, too.)

~JFW1415

Will you critique what I have of The Gate of Glendon, my new novel? The prologue and first four chapters and sitting in my portfolio, just wishing they could be ripped to pieces by critiquers.

So sorry, but I've gotten to the point where I depend upon you for reviews! DX! So here's chapter one of "Yarn". You so graciously reviewed the prologue, and it'd help a ton for a review on this one! Please? THANKYOU!

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Hey, I'd appreciate a critique of my story:
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Could you also tell a couple of other people about it maybe? I haven't gotten any critiques yet! Thanks!

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There are three parts, and it's due soon. Can you look at them quickly/relook at them? (I can't remember if you read it before I edited...)

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Hello!


I thought I would ask something in return...? It's in the romance section, hope that is alright? I don't neccessarily need a critique on the first part, but the others are neglected of love, but you would have to read the first part to understand the other parts. @_@ So I will just link you to the first part.

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I will say that I have part three rated as R but only for some adult language so if you don't feel comfortable with that, I understand, and you don't have to look at it at all. ^_^


I love you, Zila!

Hi! You and your reviews are so awesome-possum! ^_^ If you could maybe...?

The Dragon, the dog, and the Dove.

It's classified in Action/Adventure, but I debated whether to put it in Other anyway. Hopefully it's alright. ^^ If you don't think you can help, though, don't worry about it.

~ Jabber ~

Hey! I would really love feedback on "Intuition" if you get a chance. It's a story separated into five sections... If you do look at it, bear in mind that it's meant to be read in one go. Thanks!

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Oh, I should also mention, that though it isn't rated on there it IS somewhat freaky... maybe PG-13 if you're being conservative. So, if you don't want to look at it, totally understandable.

in my portfolio under Canaby Witches chapters 0ne - Five
i would really appreciate it!

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I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?