Lost and Found

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((((What is he supposed to do, do you know?? Maybe you could talk Trinity. :P, I don't know. I'm not even supposed to be on. If I disappear you know why. :P))))
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(No clue >.< Make something up)
I just lost the game.




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***Ok, skipping a few days***

Colt---

Colt barely left Inez's side. Trinity would slip food in for him, but other hten that she didn't come close to the lean=to. He had moved her to one of the sick ones and Trinity was under strickt rule not to go to any of hte other lean-tos. She listened too, to scared to go to them.

"Come on, love, please pull through." He said as he put the wet cloth to her lips so she wouldn't be dehydrated. He had done that every day several times keeping her tounge and mouth moist.
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Inez

She felt moisture in her mouth again. Liquid in her slowly dehidrating mouth. She tried to murmer a thank you and only managed a grown. She rolled over, her head landing on his lap.
I just lost the game.




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Colt--

Colt stroked Inez head. "It's ok, just sleep."He said softly.

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Inez

I did, and I slept for God know's how long and when I woke, it was to more water dripping down my throat, and the prospect of food. My stomach roiled at the thought.
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*Um...tryign to get her to eat and failing?*
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Colt---

Colt tried to get Inez to eat some soup that Trinity had brought, but she wouldn't eat it. He got more water in her mouth and sighed. "Come on honey, you need to eat."
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Inez

Her stomach roiled at the thought of food, it roiled at the water sliding down her throat. With a gasp she rolled over and threw up blood on the floor.
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Colt--

Colt looked at the blood, "Inez, what do I do to help you?" He asked hoping she could tell him. He held her up as she throw up more blood.
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Inez

Right after she was done Inez collapsed, concious, but weak and unsteady. She would have landed face first in the vomit if Colt hadn't caught her.

"Honey," he said gently, "can you hear me?"

She nodded slightly.

"How do I help you?"
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Colt--

"I-it'll h-hvae to pass." She said weakly. He stroked her hair holding her tight.

"THere is nothign I can do?" He asked, she shook her head and he sighed. "Alright.


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Inez

He kissed her forehead, "I need to wash," she said.

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Colt--

Colt picked her up. "I'll carry you down there and sit facing camp, but if anythign happens I'll be able to help." he said walking towards the stream.
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