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The Whining Arrow

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You promised, Robin reminded himself.

"Now what?" Robin asked aloud, looking into Ben's unseeing eyes. Caius had helped him to find the man... for all the good it would do him. He had made a promise to serve this man in order to repay a debt, but now that Ben was dead his debt was settled.

Or was it?

Robin's head pounded, every muscle in his body screaming for rest. But Aeodmir was already shouting orders: they had to move on quickly, before the enemy had a chance to regroup.

He had the will to move, but his body was beyond responding to the command to stand. Robin had lost too much blood, his constant movement had kept the slash in his arm open. He bit his lip, knowing he'd have to try it. Ben had been loyal to Aedomir, had given his life to following him. Somehow, Robin knew Ben would have asked him to take his place. He would do it, because he he could have chosen to help Ben, and hadn't. He felt no guilt, Ben had been doing fine. But he did feel a sadness, because Ben had been kind.

He lifted his heavy arms, twining his fingers together before him as if in prayer. Though his physical reserves of energy were gone, his magical reserves were untouched--as they'd been for years.

He called upon that power now, feeling his mind open up as the cool energy flowed through him and the pain receded. His skin glowed a soft blue light as his healing gift went to work. At first, he felt only that healing sensation, but in the next moment the secondary aspect of his power awakened. His eyes snapped open and he felt the cold touch of death wrapping it's hands around his heart.

Panic broke his concentration, and the light vanished, breaking the connection. His hand covered his mouth as a sob escaped his lips. His brother was not dead, he refused to believe it. "He promised," he reminded himself. His brother would never break his promise. Never.

Robin grabbed his sword and got to his feet, numbly stumbling to where he could be useful.
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Aedomir

A battle horn raged from the distant forest. Aedomir span round to meet a host of cold eyes glaring back at him in apprehension. "Everybody! Follow me!"

The team leapt to the ready, heaving their weak bodies with them. They wearily amde their way over to Aedomir, who stood with a sheathed sword fingering his hair.

"Hurry! Through the forest!"
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((Eep, they're leaving me in the middle of a fight! Granted, that helps Ari and I with our plan. :wink: ))

Bella--good

Our leader was calling us through.

My people were retreating.

I, being mid-battle, would be left behind.

Cursing, I dodged another blow from Thyme, and turned to follow the troop.

As I turned, I ran into someone else -- a goblin. I stabbed him through the chest, and spun around again. Thyme grabbed me, holding me tightly as one of his charges began tying my arms.

Turning, I looked toward where my troop should have been.

They were long gone.
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OOC: So, tell me again, how many troops for Aedomir have now? Just the PCs? And if not, a number of how many random NPCs are still with the group will help with my visualization. =P

IC - Robin

Robin followed Aedomir, too tired to be afraid. The healing had left him numb, chilled. He felt a yawning emptiness waiting to swallow him up. But these thoughts he drove away, instead focussing on keeping up. There weren't many of them left, he wondered what they would do now.

(sorry it's short =P)
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Thyme

The goblin finished tying Bella's arms. I walked around to face her, smiling darkly.

"I told you i wouldn't kill you, but i never said I'd let you off freely." i said. Turning, i gestured to her, staring at the goblins.

"Take her away."



Caius

I followed behind Aedomir, keeping close to Robin. I stumbled and fell more than once over the bumpy terrain, coldness stinging every exposed inch of my shivering body.

Where were we going? Running through the dense, snow-covered skeletons of trees, i could see very little. Our camp was not this way, and that was all i knew.

Looking around at the rest of our small troop, i realized that if we kept at this for much longer without rest or proper shelter, some of us would not make it.
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Orain - Bad

Orain slammed his staff into one of the last outlaws. The unfortunate man dropped to his knees, gasping for breath. The sorcerer bent over him, touching his hand to the soldier's forehead and muttering a few words. He could feel the soldier's mind fighting back, but it was only a moment before Orain was in control. Another soul for our cause

He turned to see Thyme having another of the outlaws bound, narrowing his eyes in suspicion for a moment. His face brightened a little as he addressed the other sorcerer, "I see you've caught yourself a girl, Thyme! Funny, I'd thought you'd said you were going to stay out of this fight."
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Wide-eyed stupid.

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Bella

As the goblins dragged me away, I did not fight, nor did I scream. I watched as Thyme picked my sword up off the ground.

My troop had left me for dead. I didn't know what to think, how to react. We were supposed to be there for each other, and they just left me for dead.

This is what happens when you're the only woman in the troop.

More than once during the walk Thyme would lock eyes with me. Everytime he seemed a slight bit sympathetic -- but he did not speak.
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Thyme

I gazed at Orain steadily. "So i did, but it seems that my original plan changed."

I began to walk off in the direction our camp that was. I caught up easily with the rest of the remaining troops, along with Bella. I glanced at her every once in a while, to make sure that she was not making an escape attempt. She seemed satisfied with simply glaring at the rest of us, particularly me.
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Bella

I stared at Thyme pointedly as I was led through camp.

**Sorry, I ran out of ideas**
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Orain - Bad

I took Thyme aside, not wanting the prisoner, or any of the goblins, for that matter, to hear their conversation, "You should've killed her."

"Why?"

"Because now she is a burden on us, obviously."

"And your new pet?"

"Is decidedly useful, given that I can use him in battle now." I replied, gritting my teeth, "Besides, what use is the prisoner?"

The other sorcerer gave me a stony look, "Information."

My eyes lit up, my face transforming into a sickening mask of glee, "Can I interrogate her, then?"

Thyme recoiled with a look of horror, "No! I mean, no - I don't want you brainwashing my prisoner."

I glared at him, "I see. You want to keep all the credit for yourself."

"And you want to use her for some sick experiment!" He hissed at me. Thyme had never liked my methods of dealing with prisoners.

"You always were weak like that, Thyme."
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Can I still join? If not disregard this post.

Name: Lunatheris (Female)

Age: 15

Race: Elf

Class: Not sure what she is...but on the good side

Specific Skills: Magic, Transforming, great swordsmanship.

Skills: Uses a glowing blue sword, great spy/hider

Personallity: Sly, shy, outgoing, loyal, fun, humorous.

Appearance: White. short-cropped hair, sharp blue eyes, 5'9.
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(luna, you are always free to join, and billy, to put colour in your name... <color=blue>TEXT HERE</color> but replace the < with [ and the > with ])

Aedomir

Aedomir ran through the tree-clad mountainside, casting glances back at his weary men, who were losing distance. Suddenly, he stopped and turned to Robin. "You take the men to Orchis, its a small fortress about 2 leagues away. Don't worry, they'll be glad for the additional people, just don't tell them we're exiles!"

"It's too far away, the men will never make it!"

"I will hold the goblins, I think some of ours were taken by them."

Robin went to protest, but just nodded and called "Everybody, follow me!"

Aedomir turned on the spot and hurried backwards along the path, barely concious of how tired he was.
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~Lunatheris~

Lu silently hid amongst the trees, watching the large group carry the girl, Bella, into the camp. One wrong move could be the end of her. Lu dashed out from behind a tree and into a bush, that was closer to the camp.
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Aedomir

"Ya!" Aedomir swipe his sword round, blindly sweeping a goblin head clean off. He couldn't see anymore, just a line of them hurrying away. He sheathed hsi sword and hurried across the dirt track. He felt cold, so very cold.

For a few minutes, he silently followed the vanguard as it scurried in motion down the mountaisde. He couldn't see any obvious prisoners, but guessed there would be a few towards the forward ranks.

Suddenly, he skidded to a break and bumped into another person. Leashing his sword, he saw Lu kneeling by a bush, gazing at a huge Goblin base...
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Here's my baddie! ^_^

Name: Jamie

Age: 19

Race: Vampire (undead ex human) - If this doesn't work, he's a lich

Class: Sorcerer

Personality: Jamie rarely show any expression, his personality as cold as his skin. He isn't very forthcoming, usually only speaking on sentence at a time, and is possible not speaking to others at all. If he enjoys his work, he shows no sign of it--though he has an almost scientific interest in the dead.

Specific skills: Jamie has the ability to inflict suffering--be it mental or physical. IN life he was a strong empathic healer, in death what power once did good not does harm. He is also a vampire, thus his abilities are better than those of a normal human. He can also somehow move around without making any noise, an interesting feat considering he wear armor.

Possessions: A wicked blade and armor--he needs nothing more. He could kill you with his bare hands, after all.

Description: http://www.strategyfirst.ca/downloads/w ... 40x480.jpg (except minus the pointy ears) Jamie looks--to those of you on the good side--exactly like Robin.
I'm like that song stuck in your head; I come and I go, but never truly dissapear.

And apparently I also write a blog.



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