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Assasin's Creed

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Adilah-

I was in the library with Master Altair. That is when it hit me. The sence of wrong was here and I had to stop it.




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*Sorry I've been gone for a while. Sick*


Adilah-

I ran out of the library and headed towards city. Smoke could be seen rising past the horizon.

"Shit, this can't be good." I whispered.
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*sorry*

Alex:

He was shocked. "Why don't we go find the other master. He'll know what to do." Alex suggested. He looked at the little girl and was heartbroken. No telling how old she was. He always had a soft spot for people who were hurting.

She can't be older than I was when I joined. he thought.

"Are you hungry?" He asked softly, afraid the girl would be scared of him.

He looked at Velna, at a loss of what to do with the girl and her family.




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Adilah-

As I ran a group of my fellow brothers stopped me.

"Master Adilah!" One of them shouted.

"Yes what is it?" I asked.

"Master Altair and the peice of Edin are gone!" THe other one reported.

I gasped." What? How can that be?"

I ran towards the library- ALtait was always there, but today he was gone.

"What does this mean?" I wondered.

I sent for a messanger." Send word to all the masters still in Masyaf! I wish to hold a meeting in the library."
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Velna:

I woke up grogily. I wasn't used to get that much sleep, thanks to Alex. It was nice to finally be able to sleep in. I smiled as I remembered the arms surrounding me. They were nice.Comforting. But, it was time to get up and get ready. I tried to move, but he wouldn't let me. I groaned and kissed him.

"I need to get up!" I complained.




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Velna:

I woke up grogily. I wasn't used to get that much sleep, thanks to Alex. It was nice to finally be able to sleep in. I smiled as I remembered the arms surrounding me. They were nice.Comforting. But, it was time to get up and get ready. I tried to move, but he wouldn't let me. I groaned and kissed him.

"I need to get up!" I complained.




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********I thought I was Velna and they are with the little girl. I"m lost!!!!!!*8******
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I'm so used to ur character, I used the wrong name! I meant Dali! Because Dali and Ryder are still sleeping! I'm sorry! The post after the one with Alex was supposed to be dali!




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I'm so used to ur character, I used the wrong name! I meant Dali! Because Dali and Ryder are still sleeping! I'm sorry! The post after the one with Alex was supposed to be dali!




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****Can you fix them, cause they have ALex in them too!!!!! I is still kinda lost*****
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*Yeah*

Dali:

I woke up grogily. It was about time to get up. I knew that. But I was comfortable in Ryder's arms. I smiled and kissed him passionately.

"I have to get up!" I complained. It didn't seem to help, he still wouldn't budge. I groaned. He tightened his grip. I saw a smile tickling his lips. He was playing with me. I frowned.

"Evil!" I complained. "Let met me go!"

"You don't really want me to do that, do you?" He teased.

I groaned.

Alex:

He was filled with compassion for the child. He felt so bad for her. He always did. It was inborn into him. But he had no idea what to do! He wanted to help, but he had no idea what he was suppose to do!

He looked helplessly at Velna. "Are you okay?" He asked the child softly, trying not to scare it away.

He looked into Velna's eyes, getting lost again, hoping she would know what to do.

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Velna---

Velna smiled at Alex and then looked at the little girl. "How about we go and find something for you to eat. Huh?" She said gently, she grabbed Alex's hand for support and walked out of the room pulling him with her.

"I-Is he y-your husband?" The girl asked looking at Alex. Velna laughed softly and looked at Alex.

I wish sweetie, I wish. She thought.


Ryder--

"But if you get up I have to." He laughed pulling her close covering her face with gentle kisses.

"That is the point, dummy. Please." She looked at him putting the cutest face on he ahd ever seen. He sighed,

"I can't say no to that." He laughed, "But! You have to do something first." He grinned,

"What?" She moaned, he pulled her face to his and kissed her lips holding her close.

"That." He smiled pulling away.
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