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Assasin's Creed

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Alex:

He ground his teeth. "Well, we don't really have a choice if we ever want to feel them in our arms again." He grumbled. "This is what we're going to do. We're going to SEEM as if we're perfect friends in front of them. When their not around, we can go back to loathing each other! Agreed? I really don't want to spend a minute away from Velna."

Dali:

I sighed. "I'm really going to miss Ryder."

Velna nodded. "I hope they make up soon..."




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Ryder---


"Alright, but when they found out that is what we did and they want to kill us I'm tellin them it was your idea." He said frowning. "Now what do we do?"



VElna--

Velna looked at Dali and nodded. "I think this is going to be harder on us then them." She sighed, "Alot harder."
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Alex:

"How am I supposed to know?" he took a deep breath to calm down. "Try to get along I suppose, seeming as how that's the only way we get the girls back."

Dali:

"I agree. But I was so sick and tired of watching them glare at each other and then use us as protection! What are they, five?" I sighed. "I miss Ryder allready. That's terrible. I'm weak." I teased.

We waited by out horses for everyone else to join us so that we could go find our missing ally.




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Velna--

"I am too." Velna laughed, "It's like I've forced myself to take away half of me."



Ryder--

"We better focus on the mission and hope we don't get anyone killed." Ryder said walking towards the stables.


**Srry, my brain doesn't want to work.**
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Adilah-

It was done. I headed towards the front castle balcony. It had been days since I really looked at Masyof.Where are you Altair? Without him I begame the head master of the brother hood.

I rested my head on the rail. Watching the castle guards hard at work. But I didn't see the arrow flying towards my shoulder. But that didn't mean I did not feel when it peirced my flesh.

"AHHH!" I screamed.

I fell off the balcony and towards earth. Then I only saw darkness.
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Dali:

"Yeah...I know." I stealed myself from running up go Ryder and throwing myself in his arms as I saw him and Alex both walk out together.

Please hurry! I begged mentally.

Alex:

He sighed as he saw Velna and Dali. Velna looked gorgeous, and he missed her already.

"Maybe we are being stupid." it took effort to say, but at least he got it out. "I mean, we're only acting like this because we love our sisters, right?"




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Adilah- 3rd person now!

She lied thier on the ground, bleeding. Her head was cracked open and the arrow shattered her shoulder bone.

A sirian Horn was blowed. To warn all assassins and villagers that a master was injured and the attacker it somewhere in Masyaf.



*Oh no Adilah got hurt, badly and the attacker is still on the loose!*
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Velna--

Velna was going to reply when she heard the horn. "WE gotta go!" She said pushing her horse into a gallop.


Ryder---

"I agree, maybed we just should stay close just incase." He said pushing his horse towards wher ethe girls had gone.
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Dali:

We raced as fast as we could to the stop where the horn had sounded from.

"There!" I yelled. Adilah was laying on the ground bleeding. "We have to help her!"
I heard two horses behind us. I knew it was the boys. I was glad to see they were getting along. Suddenly I felt an arrow in my shoulder. I fell out of my saddle as I lost conciousness.

Alex:

He kept his eyes on Velna the whole time, afraid something would happen to her. He heard a scream. He felt Ryder stiffen besides him. Then he saw Dali fall off her horse and land besides the other master. Ryder was already racing toward her. But Alex hung back and looked for the person who had sent the arrow flying. He didn't want the same thing to happen to Velna.




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Velna--

Velan looked around really fast and then looked at Dali, Ryder and dove down by her side and was sheilding her. Velna looked around and frowned,

"Alex, I don't see him anywhere." She called gently. She saw an arrow fly and she dove away feelign it graze across her shoulder. "Far building, black outfit."
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Alex:

He looked at Velna and pushed bis hose closer to her.

"You alright?" he asked, concerned. He knew that Ryder would take care of Dali, so all he was concerned was with Velna. he took a deep breath and threw his knife into the shrub. The scream told him he had hit his mark.

Dali:

I groaned. "My shoulder..." I gasped. I wasn't even aware of what was going on. All I knew was that someone was ontop of me. "Alex? Ryder?" I asked, hoping it was the latter and definitely not the enemy. I gasped. My shoulder was blazing. I wanted to scream, but I held back.




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Ryder---

"It's ok, just stay still and it wont hurt so bad." He said looking at the wound. He looked up at Velna, "You ok?" SHe nodded and he picked Dali up. "Get Adilah!" He yelled running towards cover.


Velna---


Velna bit back a scream, her arm hurt really bad, not that she was going to tell anyone. She ran to Adilah and helped pick her up. They ran for cover in case there were more attackers.

"Are you ok?" Alex asked as they laid Adilah down.

"Just fine, go check your sister."
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Alex:

He looked worridly at her arm. It didn't look good. "Not unless you can swear to me that you are in perfect condition!"

Dali:

I groaned again and tried to stay still. I felt hands lift me and carry me hurridly to a big shrub. I bit back another scream. I hated making this about me when someone else was probably in far worse condition, but it hurt! A stinging sensation climbed up my arm. I shut my eyes and tried to block out the screaming in my head. I had a massive headache and I hurt terribly.

"Ryder?!" I begged. I wanted him near me. I wanted to feel safe.




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Ryder---

"I'm right here. Don't worry, your going to be fine. THis is going to hurt, but I have to get the arrow out." He said, he gave her a peice of leather to bite on and then he carefully got the arrow out.


Velna---

"I'm f-" Suddenly everything started to go black. "A-ALex!"
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Adilah-

The voices of Ryder and Dali taling woke me up. I pushed myself off the ground. I grunted." Ugh... what happened?" I asked.

Dali screamed. I looked over to see a blurry picture of Ryder holding an arrow, and Dali lying on the ground- bleeding.

"Adilah you shouldn't move. If you do you'll bleed to death. "Ryder warned me.

I nodded and colasped back on the ground. The world was spinning around me.
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