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Hello Everyone ^_^

This is from the video game Assassin's Creed. This is during after the original master of the Assassin's in Masyaf betrayal and death. As you know and for those who don't a new leader is needed so My character is one other the people who stepped up to lead. My name is Adilah.

Everyone is free to join anytime. Male or Female. Any rank, from novice to master or even student. You can even be a Bureau leader or the Bureau's personal assassins.There are near by cities called Acre- a European city, Damascus- a Muslim city and Jerusalem- the holy city both Muslims and Christians(Europeans) dwell here. This is during the Crusades around 1119 ish.

Rules!!!
1. no killing any ones character without their permission
2.Every assassin must check with a leader before beginning an assassination
3. I will assign assassinations once and a while for people
4. No racism or making fun of religion
5. no godly characters who are all powerful with no weaknesses
6. NO!!! Gross sex scenes! please
7. you are free to use any character from the game or make up your own
8. There are only going to be 3 leaders, besides me( first to claim them get the spot)
9. just because you are a leader doesn't mean you can't do assassination missions

Ranks:
Student
Novice
Average
Warrior
knight
Master


Here is my character

name: Adilah-means "one who deals justly" in Muslim

gender: Female

age: 25

Rank: Master

Appearance: She is tall and slender, with black hair and hazel eyes. She is wearing the normal white cloak with a hood. Brown boots, and black pants with a brown shirt. Her skin is tan and clean.
http://www.elfwood.com/art/l/a/laurac/l ... w.jpg.html

History: She was a student when Altair Ibn La-Ahad, she took responsibility along with 3 others to help lead the brother hood that their once master had betrayed and almost destroyed. She is dedicated to the brother hood and her brothers.

Personality: She is strong and noble, she is strong leader and very intelligent. Adilah is very loyal and trust worthy, also she is wise in the ways of peace and justice.

weapons: She has the basic sword ,short sword ,throwing knives and hidden blades.



Alright and if there are any questions feel free to ask them :D


Also thier are 3 main rules that all of the brother hood must follow
1. never stain your blade with the blood of an inoccent
2. Hide in plain sight
3. Never compromise the brother hood


here is what Altair looks like with and without his hood.

http://evil-siren.deviantart.com/art/As ... s-76545532
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Sounds interesting. I know all about the crusades, but not this video game, however...

name: Cleo

gender: Female

age: 20

Rank: Warrior

Appearance: She is tall and slim, but curvy, with blonde hair and blue-gray eyes. She is wearing brown pants, brown boots, and a brown vest with a black undershirt. Her skin is faintly tan and scarred.

History: She is the only daughter of an Irish man and French woman, but has two brothers. Both are off to war, and she has decided to sneak off to fight, as well. She came across the brotherhood and has pledged allegience to them.

Personality: She is strong and noble, and very intelligent (a strategy genius, according to her family). Cleo is very loyal and trust worthy, but has a quick temper.

weapons: She has the basic sword, recurve bow, and throwing knives.
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(I'll post tomorrow, I don't have time now...sorry!)
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Name: Adalia (Noble)

Nickname: Dali

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Rank: Knight

Apparence: She is average highth and very slim, with all the right curves. Hazel eyes and short brown hair. Wears a lot of black to hide her true figure.

History: Secretive. Doesn't share unless she knows you very well.

Personality: Outgoing. Reserved around strangeers. A perfectionist. Enjoys excelling.

Weapons: Sword, throwing knifes, concealed weapons, seduction, poisonous needles, other herbs that can be poisonous.



Name: Alexander (Defender)

Nickname: Alex

Gender: Male

Rank: master

Age: 20

Apperance: Tall. Blond hair with grey blue eyes.

Personality: Sweet and charming. Sweeps girls off their feet. A gentleman in every way, even though he is an excellent fighter. Layed back. Enjoys his line of work. Is shy sometimes around girls, but is very diplomatic is normally chosen for major jobs.

History: His father was part of the brotherhood. He was born into it and work his entire life to become a master. His mother died when he was young and so he was raised primarily by his father to obey every form of manners.

Weapons: Throwing knives, two swords hidden on his back, concealed weapons.
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Can I claim Alex for Velna?????? Maybe???? If not it’s all good.

Name: Ryder, I like that name today :D

Gender: Male

Age: 24

Rank: Master (Goes on missions**

Appearance: http://sinlinn.deviantart.com/art/hokage-39868544

History: He was orphaned as a child and raised his baby sister. When he was old enough he got an assassin job to bring in money to take care of his little sister.

Personality: Protective of his little sister. He will kill anyone that hurts her. He has already killed one assassin for trying to hurt her. He isn’t a big talker, but if he trusts someone he will do anything to protect them.

Weapons: Knives, and guns. Doesn’t matter what kind.

Other: Up for love, Velna’s brother



Name: Velna

Gender: Female

Age: 18

Rank: Warrior

Appearance:
Eyes: http://musclemuseum.deviantart.com/art/eye-30824489 people seem to get lost in her eyes and it makes her kills easier because they struggle less when they are lost.

Her: http://sinlinn.deviantart.com/art/Shuna-39898082 (Change the eyes to those though ^)

History: All she can remember is being an assassin, she was one of the youngest ones and often went on missions with her brother. She blended in easily and could easily get people to trust her.

Personality: Calm, quiet, doesn’t like getting close to people.

Weapons: Seduction, (innocent looking. :D ). Knives, she loves knives and carries all sorts, in her hair, on holsters under her clothes, in her boots.

Other: Ryder’s little sister, up for love :D
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(sure, I don't mind. Only if I get Ryder! XD)
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**Alright, you got it. Though could she be kinda hard to get. Cause all girls flock easily to him. She wont though. I should probably PM you about this. I'll go do that and tell you my ideaish. :D**
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(Okay. XD)
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wow... a lot of people want to be assasins. ^_^ Thanks.

Well I shall wait 1 more day and then we will begin!



Also there is only 1 master spot left so first come first serve. :D
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I stood their watching my brothers and sisters’ cheer and shout. Today was the day the Brother hood of the assassins finally went back into business. Many months had past since our first master Al Mualin betrayed us all, and now our grand city of Masyaf is back to its former glory. Its people are now able to be happy again.
I walked closer to the wooden rail looking over the courtyard. I could not help but smile.

"Brothers! Sisters! All those who follow the Creed! Many seasons have past since the betrayal of our former master, but now we are stronger then ever in our beliefs. Today is the start of beginning towards our efforts to end the War, and one day bring peace in all forms." I announced.
The other masters watched me as I spoke; probably out of all the other masters I gave the most encouraging words.
"Everyone! Once again the assassins shall bring justice and truth to the holy land! Bringing happiness and prosperity to its people. But also soon our peace shall rain down upon the rest of god's world!"

The cheers gave the other masters and I more pride then ever before.

"Today we shall give missions of every kind. From information retrieval, rescues, and target eliminations!"
I turned to face Altair. He was holding a bag filled with scrolls; each containing instructions for missions.

"All of the assassins shall each take a scroll from our Grand Assassin, Altair." I finished.

And slowly my brothers and sisters walked up the steps and towards their new missions, to bring peace- in all forms.


*Well, so it begins. Oh yes I forgot to mention that Altair is the Grand Assassin. He was the one who saved everyone from being brain washed by Al Mualin.*




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Velna-

Velna followed Ryder up to steps keeping close to him. Everyone kept their distance from each other leaving a proper and curtious gap from the people they didn't know so as to keep from worrying anyone. In a group of assassins you never knew if someone would betray you and this was the curtious way of letting other know you meant them no harm. She took a scroll as did her brother. They walked back to the court yard and plopped down on the grass. Ryder leaned against a tree and stuck his scroll in his pocket. She scanned her's quickly, rolled it up, and put it in her cloak.


Ryder-

Ryder scanned the area, looking at everyone's faces. IT was a great feelign knowing they were back to the normal way of life and Velna was safe, well safe from Al Mualin now. He didn't care if there was no immediate threat to her or not, there was still the threat from the master.
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EVERYONE!! Al Mualin is dead thanks to Altair!!!


thought you guys should know this, just in cause. ^_^



also if anyone is curious about the game go to youtube and search Assasin's Creed trailor or something. The game was created using much historical facts possible.




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Alex:

He scanned the crowd as he and his "sister", Dali, walked up and grabbed scrolls, rushing off. Suddenly, Alex stopped, entranced by the beautiful girl he saw. He thought he knew her brother. After all, they had trained together. But...her...he gasped. Those gorgeous blue eyes were impossible to resist. He stared as she rushed after her brother wondering if he'd ever get to see her again.

Dali:

I watched as Alex stood there, stupified.

"Alex? Alex!" I shouted.

"What?!" he asked annoyed and embarrassed.

"Is everything okay?"

"Yeah...I was...distracted. Let's go." He started walking at a brisk pace away from the courtyard. I knew he didn't like all these people and he couldn't wait to get back to that wonderful book he left. I smiled and followed after him, after all, he was the only one who knew who I truly was...
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**So are they all going on the same mission or what? I'm confused, do they go secretly and then come back, what?**

Ryder-

Ryder watched as two figures headed away from the court yard. One of them took his notice, a girl, she wore black clothing, but it was her face. He had only seen it for a split second, but it was beautiful.

"Ryder?" Velna's voice popped into his mind, he looked up at her. "Are we going to train, you said we would today."

He smiled, "Of course, how soon do you think you have to go on your mission?" He asked,

"I should probably head out tomorrow." She replied giving him a hand up. He nodded and followed her out towards where they stayed. He was walking in front of her when he suddenly spun around fist clenched, she ducked dropped to her hands and spun her feet around nearly knocking him off his own. He jumped back as she jumped up. She was more lean then him and was able to do a few more tricks, but he was stronger and faster. They only practiced with their fists and ran alot, but it helped in the end.


Velna-

Velna jumped up quickly shoving her foot at Ryder who moved his head, she yanked it back catching him in the head. She landed on the ground and spun around again hitting him in the gut with her other foot. His hand shot out and he grabbed her leg spinning it around. SHe jumped and spinned with it throwing her other foot at his head. He caught it and yanked her up throwing her in the air. He caught her before she hit the ground and smiled.

"You need to work on that a tad more." He laughed setting her down. She nodded,

"Ya, that isn't one I will be using." She laughed, she sat down outside the house and he walked inside. He had always said that she was better at the undercover assassinations, where she actually confronted the person while looking like a normal person. It didn't go against the brother hood, who said to hide in plain site, but it was better because she got her person and could get away with out having to kill anyone else, especially innocents that got courageous and wanted to get the assassin.
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Alright each assasin get's his/her own mission to perform. Its your choice what it should be, but if you don't know what do to for a mission I could tell you what mission to do ^_^



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