Wolf Eye Stages + Wolf Sword + Fire And Water

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Looks interesting. I can see how they are wolf eyes, but I can also see potential of them going into a demons head to. I ain't no expert in art but those really look like great eyes (better than what I do, but I only to snake eyes). I wouldn't mind seeing them put on a wolf. PM me when you got the full picture done. And I think red would be a good color.
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Colour: Dark blue with a hint of red
Yellow orange and then grey at the sides
Purple and silver combined
Hazel
Misty green
black and red
pink and red
silver

Don't do gold, I can't see it there.
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Okay! Thanks for you opinion! :D
I am currently searching for my paper... Grr! I really hope that I did not loose it. But at school today I began to draw some other wolf related things I will make a new topic and post it up once I have finished!




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Gold.

You could keep it all on this same thread. ^_^

Gold.

Amber.

Yellow.

Wolf's eyes look bewitching enough without adding any unnatural colouring.
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M'kay! I shall!
Yah... I kinda want the eyes to stand out from the black fur. But I don't really like gold. Unless I find a really awesome one!




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Here... I am not done colouring in her skin. Its not my favourite. But I would like some critics done and maybe I can improve it!
Here it comes!
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I like it but if I didn't know the topic, I'd think she were part cat not wolf. Maybe if you move the slit higher up and have the beginning of an ear that would help? Or move it down and draw part of the snout? Also, maybe make the fur a little less neat so that she looks a bit wild.

As for the rest, I think the lips could be improved and the noses could be aligned better but I love the girl's hair, that's a gorgeous colour!
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i think these are very good for a start,

you have the symetrical balance between them. that is very important. i always start with the eyes, if they dont work, the rest is wasted. you want the eyes to be the first thing a person focus's on.

i like the icy blue color. any shade of fur will match with it. put dark blue around the edges to make them stand out more. and touch with a little white, and your eyes will jump off the page.

you are awesome at drawing. please finish this, i cant wait to see it completed.

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That's really good!
Everyone else said it already, so I haven't got much else to add, expect; the sword, compared to the rest of the drawing, looks bland. Maybe you should colour it silver [or whatever colour it is] and/or add a line down the middle? You know, just to give it more substance.
But as for the rest, AWESOME!
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Thanks.
I will finish it soon!




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Hey, one question; what's the blue things in her hair? It looks cool but when I looked at it I wondered what it was.
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Oh! Cool 8)
Anyways, it looks really good! One more question though; what's that black thing on her forehead? It looks cool but it's a teensy bit out of alignement with the rest...it goes under the air on the right side and over it on the left.
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Well that's a little black diamond that hangs from a thing around her forehead. I kinda made a boo boo on that... I meant to put it all under the hair. But the pen smudged! Grr...



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