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Karana

I lay there, pretending to be asleep. I heard Ilum get up and move his matress, but I didn't want to give away my own restlessness.

Apparently Luke was still sitting outside, for soon Ilum had begun talking to someone. Luke more than likely by the sound of their voices. I had so many questions for Luke, but would they be appropriate in his view? Would he answer? Would he even stop long enough to listen to me, a "child" in his opinion?

I scoffed to myself, scowling. A child indeed. I would be seventeen in less than six months, and he had the nerve to call me a child! But then again, that's what I would still be labeled as on elfin terms, thus giving him the right to call me that...

I had half fallen asleep when Ilum reentered the room, shutting the door quietly. I finally sat up.

"What's wrong?" I asked quietly, trying not to wake the others.

"You're still awake?" he asked, seeming a little stunned by the fact he just stated.

"Yeah. But what about you? Are you...okay?"

"Yeah. I just...can't sleep."

"Want to talk about it? Is there a reason?"
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Ilum sighed, "Not really." He looked into her eyes, she was worried. "I'll say this, my elder brother was killed by the Dark Knight. Don't worry so much. It'll be okay."

He sat down next to her and she laid her head on his shoulder, "Just promise you won't do anything stupid."

"I promise.'
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Raven

I slept surprisingly well and woke in the morning to find that I was the first up. Glancing around the room, I smiled to myself. Warren was sprawled in one corner and I hated to think how uncomfortable that position must be while Ilum and Karana were near the door, the latter with her head upon the former. Naturally I didn't wish to wake them so I made myself useful and gently turned Warren over onto his side and moved his right leg out from under him. I need not have been so quiet - he was completely out of it. Clearly not used to early mornings, especially after a few drinks. Then I began to tidy away the blankets and mattresses that weren't being used. What would Luke think if he walked in to find the room in this state?

"What are you doing?" Karana asked when I was almost finished.

"Just tidying up a bit," I replied. "Sleep well?" I turned to see her raising her head and as our eyes met she blushed.

"I...I was upset last night," She offered by way of explanation. The poor girl seemed much more embarrassed than she had need to be so I nodded and let the subject drop.
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Karana

Raven nodded, but I knew she understood why I had said that. I felt my face grow hot with the blush, which was an instant giveaway.

I couldn't help that I'd taken a liking to Ilum. He was a nice guy, a little attractive, and easy to talk to. Not to mention he was a wonderful teammate and a good fighter!

I rose as gently and silently as I could, trying not to wake him. The least I could do was help Raven clean up the room before everyone else woke.

The whole time I aided in orginizing, my mind wandered. What happened? What could have been so bad as to result in the death of his brother? Why is Ilum here, anyway? Is he seeking revenge, or is just his way of forgetting? I have to find that out...it may not be my business, but I feel that I need to understand. After all, friends listen to each other, no matter the pain or cost. Then I swallowed. We are friends, aren't we?
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The door opened and Luke walked into the room. Everyone was still half-asleep so it caught them off guard. "We're leaving in a few minutes, so get ready."

(Sorry, that's all I can think of right now. I just want the story to keep going.)
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Raven

"I'll meet you outside," Luke decided, already hurrying from the room but as he went he cast one last glance back. His eyes spoke a question as they passed across our faces - he was wondering if we would indeed follow him to hell.

"Come on," Ilum stopped rubbing his head that had been jarred slightly by the sudden opening of the door and sprang to his feet. I crossed the room and shook Warren gently. The mumbled response wasn't quite what I was looking for so I shook him a little harder and pulled him to his feet.

"Got a headache," he protested groggily.

"Tough," I replied.

"Can't you heal it?" Karana asked.
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Karana

She just scoffed at my question. "He got drunk, let him deal with the hangover."

I snorted when Warren moaned and sat back down, head in his hands. It didn't look like it was too pleasant, but him having a hangover...he brought it upon himself.

We finished tidying up the room and gathered our belongings. Warren took his time, moving extra slowly, which only put the rest of us - more Luke than anybody - in a very bad, impatient mood.

"Where do you think he's taking us?" I whispered to Ilum as Luke continued to pace. Warren was only just leaving the spare room.
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"I'm not sure," said Ilum strapping his sword onto his back. "You sleep well?"

Karana's eyes diverted, "Yes, thanks for asking." Ilum gave her which made her blush. Before he could say anything else Luke stopped and faced the group.

"We need to split up from here. Ilum, take Karana and head east. Raven, Warren, and I will circle around and come at the cave from the north."

"What, why. is splitting up a good idea?" Asked Karana worriedly.

Ilum put his hand on her shoulder, "Don't worry, I'll protect you with my life. You'll be fine." She nodded and the others seemed content. the Cave was most likely guarded and approaching from two directions would be a good idea.

(Hope that's okay. Also, can we enter battles, because i have a cool idea for one?)
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Raven

I followed Warren and Luke around the cave or rather I followed Luke and Warren brought up the rear, dragging his feet across the ground. With a sigh I waited for him to catch up and placed my hand upon his arm.

"Can't have you stumbling or moving too slow in battle, can we?" I asked gently as I eased his pain away. He smiled gratefully and we hurried after Luke. A few minutes later he held out his arm and we paused, finding ourselves at the North entrance of the cave.

"Be careful," Luke cautioned as he led the way inside, pressing his body against the wall so as to be mostly hidden and creeping ever so quietly. I followed his lead and could feel Warren at my back as we journeyed further and further from the light of the entrance.
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(Sure, you can enter battles if you want. I'll still hand out skills after the battles. Also, I can't think of anything to write right now.)
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(Alrighty then. Bare with me, this may be long.)

Ilum and Karana reached the east entrance about twenty minutes after splitting up from the group. It would take them longer to reach their destination so they proceeded with caution. They walked inside and came to a large room lite with torches.

Karana motioned to continue, but Ilum stopped her. He brought his hand to the hilt of his sword and looked around. He had a bad feeling about something. Something he couldn't shake.

Finally looking up he realized he was right. Three war machines fell from the ceiling right at the pair. They leaped out of the way just in time. Ilum already had his sword drawn. There were two regular sized droids, but the other one was larger.

Karana quickly dispatched the two smaller ones with her lightning, but when she attacked the larger one it didn't seem to do anything. She was hit and flung against the wall.

Ilum cursed under his breathe. Leaping he slashed over the monsters head and landed in front of Karana. He cursed again remembering they were immune to regular attacks. Still, he had to get it away from Karana.

Dashing forward he slashed at the monster and continued to run past it. As he planed it fallowed. Turning Ilum threw ice shards at it but it had no effect. The machine lunged at him, but just missing. That flew Ilum off balance and it side swiped him sending him back about twenty feet.

He slowly got to his feet, his sword in hand. Slowly the blade became covered in ice until it had doubled in length. Again Ilum charged at the metal beast with all his strength. he brought the sword down as hard as he could, but it just blocked it with its arms.

"I'm not done!" The sword of ice grew teeth. Pulling back with all his might the droids arms were cut off, but the teeth were shattered.

It jumped and hovered in mid-air. It's stomach opened and arrows began to fly out. Ilum had no time to Dodge, so he created a wall of ice in front of him. The arrows couldn't get through. the arrows stopped for a second, then one flew out with a tag on it.

"An explosive tag." Ilum jumped away just in time before the arrow exploded and the ice wall was destroyed.

Stumbling the machine bolted down and rammed him sending him flying into the wall. It followed up with another body slam pushing Ilum further in. He slid to the ground, but stayed on his hands and knees. It kicked him out towards Karana.

Before Ilum could recover the metal monster had its foot atop his chest slowly crushing him. he yelled out in agony as he was slowly flattened. Then a bolt of lightning hit the beast distracting it. Ilum took this chance and put his palm onto the ground. Suddenly pillars of ice shot out of the ground impaling the machine finishing it off.

(Was it a good battle scene?)
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(Sure was.)


Ilum gained Level 3 Ice!
Karana gained Level 3 Lightning!

Current Abilities:

Ilum:
Level 3 Ice

Karana:
Level 1 Fire
Level 3 Lightning

Raven:
Level 2 Healing

Warren:
Level 1 Wind
Level 1 Lightning

Luke:
Level 2 Lightning
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Karana

"Ilum!" I ran to his side. It worried me to see him so shaky and slow about sitting up.

"Ilum? Are you okay?" I knelt beside him, putting an arm behind him to support him.

He nodded, breathing heavily. "Just...give me a minute..."

I shifted so that he could lean back and against me as he recovered from the battle. I didn't know how bad his injuries were, so I tried to be careful about not causing him more pain; his chest, in particular, seemed to be hurting him. He didn't lie, I know that much. It could've killed him! I trembled as I realized that. If only I knew healing magic!

"Are you okay?" He asked after a while. He still looked a little shaken.

"Yeah," I smiled briefly. "You just take it easy for a while."

Did I hear him scoff, even if humoredly (sp?) ?


(Nice battle, Mann! But, what did you give me that made me blush? You left that out...)
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(Sorry, Eye contact and a warm thoughtful smile.)
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(Ah, okay. Thanks for clarifying that!)
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