Mythical Creatures of Sada

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"Where are you going?" Syden hissed, struggling to keep up with her. she didn't answer, though, and he found himself following her into the dark alley.
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A middle aged woman stepped in front of Nicarga.

"I wouldn't do that, if i were you."

"Who are you?" Nicarga asked, backing away some.

The woman let out a laugh.

"Don't you reconize me?" the woman asked.

Nicarga shook her head.

The woman smiled, but it was not a wicked smile, but more amused. All of the sudden the womans hands were claws and a wing sprouted out of her shirt.

"Reconize me now?" she asked.

'Raiana!" Lethero hissed. "What are you doing here?"

"Oh, i dont know. i just thought you could use my help, thats all. And did i mention that i know the wereabouts of the mythical creatures AND the priest that wants us killed."

"What?" Lethero asked. "She is not here, and we know where the creatures are. They're in the monostary."

"Wrong, and wrong again." Raiana replied. "She IS here and no, they arent in the monostary. But, if you want to go there and get caught in the humans trap, by all means, go right ahead."

Nicarga stepped forward. "Where are the creatures, and where is the priest."

"Well, lets see. Syden did a good job of slowing them down, but the humans are probably carting the creatures up the mountain. Priest is in the monostary."
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"We cant just not help that girl though." Nicarga hissed,

"She is fine." Raiana said, Nicarga heard a faint whimper.

"No she isn't, and i'm gonna help her." Nicarga said stepping past Raiana.

"Syden, tell her we have to go." Raiana said,
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Syden raised his hands. "Sorry, but i don't argue with dragons."
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Nicarga saw two men walking towards te alley so she finnally agreed to follow the others, if they didn't help the girl then she would figure out what to do.
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Syden smiled and slipped into the alley. Riana had put her guard down when he had said he didn't argue with dragons, which made this so much easier. He could help the human girl and get out before he was missed.
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Nicarga looked for Syden but he wasn't there, he would show up, he always did. She waited a few minutes before he showed up smiling. He ran along side here.

"Where did you go?" She whispered just loud enough for him to hear.
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He nodded his head in the direction of the alley, where the young girl, only slightly bruised and cut, came out of the darkness, giving Syden a bewildered look. "There are two priests in there, all in interestingly-shaped pieces." the smile faded as he thought about it. "I wonder what they wanted with her..."
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"Lets ask her then, i'm sure we can sneak a way for a little bit and talk to her." She smiled

"You just want to get in trouble." Syden groaned.

"no, i want to figure out what htey wanted with her."
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"Then you find out<" Syden said. "I don't want to stay in one place for too long." then, As Nicarga shrugged and started towards the alley, he sighed and followed her anyway.
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Nicarga walked up behind the girl and tapped her shoulder. The girl spun around a knife coming out of her skirt.

"Whoa, watch it." Nicarga almost screached jumping back.

"Sorry, i'm a bit jumpy." The girl wispered.

"Its ok, what did those priest want with you?" She asked. The girl looked surprised.

"Come with me, we need to get out of the street." She said hurrying off towards a house.
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Amist all the argueing Georgia slipped away, Lethero would probably kill her for it later but she had to check on him!

She walked down the street avoiding people's gazes. She was good at that, the glory of being a shapeshifter. It took her a while but she found it, an old house pushed back away from the others.

Walking lightly she held the hem of her skirts up so they wouldn't snag on the bushes. She came up on the house and knocked on the door. She heard the click of a shot gun at the window and jumpped.

"James?" she asked leaning towards him.

"What do you want?"

"Don't you reconize me? James its Georgia!"

"Georgia?" he lowered the shot gun and she took another step towards him, he raised it at her again. "I don't know any Georgia, leave here now!"

"Not until you talk to me!"

"Go away!"

She took another step and he fired the gun. She fell back and hit her head. "Oh no," he said and opened the door. He lifted her up and carried her into the house. There was no gun shot wound, he had missed.
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Syden glanced over his shoulder, where the others had dissappeared, but he sighed and followed Nicarga and the girl.
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Nicarga followed the girl inside and they sat down in chairs.

"ok, so what did they want with you?" she asked

"I am the priests neice, i know more then i am supposed to. I know where he keeps the creatures if you will and what he plans on doin with them." the girl said.
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Syden raised an eyebrow. "Who's side are you on?"

"Side?" The girl looked bewildered. "if i beleived the preists, would they attack me?"
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