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Black
Blackness overwhelms
Light
Light does not come
Blue
Blue where are you?
Pink
I hate pink
Black
Blackness overwhelms

* curtains close *




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OMG! THIS IS LIKE THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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Well, the point system seems to be in order here.




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I'm proud of this poem. Moved from 'Other Poetry' to 'Randomness.'




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I suppose the points just hate me :(

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.....indeed...
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I'm so confused right now.
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Nate, stop spamming! I know you're excited about your poem, but honestly... Four posts in a row is a bit much, don't you think? ;)
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Wow... she pwned you. XD
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this is so cool!!!!!!! grate job nate, ur relly gud!!!!!!
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Haha, Brad has been watching Charlie the unicorn, lol.
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I hate pink too...
It's not easy having a good time. Even smiling makes my face ache.




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I adore charlie the unicorn.
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I just saw Charlie the unicorn for the first time yesterday... *finally gets everything*
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The German dub of the "Candy Mountain" one is a scream. XD "Oh mein Gott, what is vas?" XD

Nice poem, by da way, Nate ;)
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