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Sara couldn't plott in her head, she made a sweeping motion twice with her hand and a pen and paper appeared in the air where she caught it. She sat down on an extention to the couch, crossed her legs and clicked the pen.

"Okay, what do we do?"

Matt paced up and down the room while the others saw fit to sit down. All of them in thinking mode.

"I've got it!" Matt said at last. All of them looked up at him. "We need to know how to kill Peter right? Who else would know better than him!"

Sara gave him a skeptical look, "and how exactly would we get this information?"

"You."

"Me?!"

"Yes you, you look like Hannah. You can get Peter to tell you anything!"

"Thats brillant! I love it." Sara rose to her feet as she spoke, she began pacing with Matt. "The only problem is Hannah. I'll need help to get rid of her, even temporairally."

"Thats where we come in," Owen said. He looked over to Alexx, "Alexx can lure her away or something."

"Wait why me?"

"Because Hannah knows what I knew when we were sharing a body, so she knows that you are very important to this, putting you in the open with her around will draw her out," Sara explained. "We can be hiding near by to protect you."

Omg what if the only important thing about Alexx is the fact that they dont know what's important about her. The actual important thing is just her being the bait, but Hannah not knowing this keeps going after her? thoughts and comments required.

"I like it," Matt said, "this is going to work!"

Sara turned to Greg who had been silent this entire time, "Greg, what do you think?"

Greg closed his eyes, "I don't like it, way too much room for error. But i suppose we have no other choice." He stood, "we've got to pick the places."
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"Ahhhh! Sweet raw power!" Peter laughed as he shot every power imaginable through his arms towards the lifelss bodies of his former "army". Moments before he had let out a storm of red electricity that had landed on all of his men. He had then killed them and taken there powers. Levitation, flying, water, fire, just to name a few. Hi favorite...the ability to see the future.
"What was that?" Hannah asked as she came out of a box in which now held Haylen's lifeless body.
"I just used my powers. Got a problem?" He glared at her, power radiating crazily off of him. He had really gone off the deep end. Hannah loved it when he did that, Suddenly a red film went over his eyes. Then after awhile it dissapeared.
"What happened?" Hannah knew had just seen the future, but what he had seen she didn't know.
"I saw a boy...his name was like...Oliver, no...Owen."
"What about him?"
"I saw him...dead."
"You?"
"No...a girl...Alexx, my sister. But soon Greg will be at my house. I want to greet him. Hold my hand." Hannah grabbed it and they dissapeared into a grey mist.

Elsewhere

Alexx stood up. Where was she? She looked around. She was on a deserted street. Bodies laid all around.
"Alexx?" A voice asked. She whirled around. Greg, no..it couldn't be. He was dirty...and...and..OLD!
"You might not like this Alexx, but you've just been sent to the future, a future run by Supreme Dictator Peter, Lord of Chaos. A future where evil rules and regular humans are rounded up and killed. Where you can be killed for hiding humans. Where Owen, Sara, Matthius, Your parents, and you are all...dead. Peter is invincible and has every power in the world...even mine."
"What?!?!?" Alexx fell back.
"Our plan failed and you, Owen, Matthius, and Sara all died. I lost my powers that day too. And unfourtunatley, you can't go back. Peter pulled you here..forever."
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Wait everyone! Don't be mad. NO i didn't srew it up. I just made it harder. See, Alexx is stuck in the future and to get back she has to kill the messed up Peter. But no one else died back in our time because that day hasn't arrived. I know you may be confuzzled but bear with me. So Alexx can still get back to save the rest of your characters.

Bella and Alice-I am writing this in Computer class

Adam-Notice i saved your character. I don't want another person to want me dead....

The rest of you-idk
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Mad did the thought ever occur to you that you should be afraid of me and Bella? I mean come on Adam can't really kill you, but WE can. And you will pay for killing Sara! But it was also a good idea, cuz this was ending a little too fast, so this made


"Whoa, what the hell?" Sara said. She stood up in shock and stared at the spot where Alexx had dissappeared from.

"What is it Sara?" Greg shouted from the next room.

"Alexx! She's like fricken gone!"

"What?!!!" Owen, Matthius, and Greg ran back into the room.

"Oh holy hell!" Matthius shouted. "Damn it Peter."

"What did Peter do?" Owen asked ticked off.

"Peter took her to the future! Damn it we've got to get her back!"

Sara closed her eyes and focused. She looked year by year into the future, every year getting worse. Twelve years into the future she took on the body of herself.

She walked down the hall veering her head around every door corner. She couldn't control what her body did. She saw Greg lying on the ground, alive but in pain. She couldn't go help him. She just kept walking through the run down apartment building. Looking for something.

She rounded a corner and was met face to face with her counterpart, Hannah.

"Hello Sara."

"Hello Hannah. You've aged quite a bit I see."

"I wasn't blessed as you are, but with age comes knowledge."

"Physical aging means nothing, mental aging is where the knowledge comes in."

"Oh shut up Sara." Hannah shot a bolt of lightning out of her hand and shot Sara in the gut.



Sara stumbled back and fell to the ground.

"Sara!" Greg yelled.

"Ow, Greg that was really loud." Sara stood up and rubbed her butt. "That hurt."

"What did you see?" Owen said.

"Everyone was dead," She put her palms on her temples trying to get the pain to go away, "except Greg. But barely. Oh God." She sat down and covered her face with her palms. Greg sat next to her and wrapped his arms around her. He pressed his forehead against hers and watched what she saw.

He jolted back when the vision ended, "we've got to do something."
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Greg fumbled through the knowlege he'd gained. There was so much. So many possible solutions, so many flaws.

"Dammit!" yelled Greg. He'd been Searching his brain for over an hour with nothing to show for it.

"What's wrong?" asked Sara.

"We dont have the power to go and get her." Greg sighed. He didn't know what to do. She was everything. Without Alexx everything would crumble. And with the future they were seeing it already was.

Owen had fallen asleep on the couch. He mimbled every now and then but nothing coherent.

Greg wandered outside. They were screwed. Completely screwed. Why dont you do something? He thought to the others. Greg was able to maintain constant contact with the Ancients now. But they hardly ever responded.

Owen bolted upright, "I've got it!"
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Hey Alice and Bella. I'm in computer class again. so yeah. And look, I didn't screw it up, I just added some extra stuff


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Peter laughed as he saw the little human scwerm under his grasp. He enjoyed when they did that."Bye bye..."
"Peter!" Hannah rushed in.
"What my love?" He asked.
"They're trying to reach us!!" She quietly said.
"WHAT? She reached us but never came to us? WHAT??"
"Greg saved her. He's in the old death camp you built for the humans." Peter pondered what to do.
"Send Them." He laughed. Alexx would be his...even if it meant killing her.
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Holy crap! I feel so alone. But I have an ingenius idea!!! Yay me!

"So my brother has taken over the world? But peter would never..." Alexx was in complete and utter shock.
"The old peter wouldn't. Hannah used him, and tortured you in front of him. She killed you. After that he went kind of...insane. He stopped caring about anyone's life...even his own." Greg was explaining this in a low voice, as to not be overheard. "She made him act so rash as to send you here, but it's actually helping us all. The only problem is..."
"Is what?" Alexx asked worriedly.
"You'll have to kill him for any of this to work. I think that if he sees you again, he will be overcome with grief. Then all you have to do is stick this," Greg pulled out a dagger and tossed it to her. She caught it by the handle carefully. "In his back. THat should unravel the time thread YOU live in far enough back that you will go back to the old times. Then you can fix the plan. "
"But what went wrong with our plan?"
"I don't know. I have been trying and trying to figure it out," Greg sighed heavily. "But I just don't know."
BANG BANG BANG. "Open up in there!" a voice called from outside the door.
"It's the police. Let them take you. You will go straight to Peter that way. But only if they try to take you. Struggle a little so it seems realistic." he opened the door.
"Alexx!" a voice exclaimed from behind the two men who were hitting the door. It was Peter.

"Peter!" Alexx ran into his arms, but he threw her back. He was...twitching. "Peter?"
"Alexx...I...Missed...you..." his voice was choppy, as if he coulnd't decide what to say. His face was a twisted look of both horror and cruelty. "Kill her!" He shouted suddenly, and the men ran at her. "No! Don't listen to me!" He shouted a second order and the men stopped, all looking rather confused.
"Peter?" Alexx asked worriedly. She was crying.
"Alexx, I think Hannah is in Peter. That means you're the last hope." Greg explained.
"Wait...why am I the last hope?"
"That's part of the reason why we failed, as far as I can tell. You weren't there, and Hannah managed to control us all. Only you can get Hannah out of Peter. If she's out of Peter, she's more vulnerable. THen you can kill her." Peter was on the floor, fighting with himself and ripping his hair out in large tufts. It was a terrifying sight. Alexx sat down a little ways away and cried. Greg stood among the chaos, straight faced, not saying a word.
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"Fool. This isn't Hannah. This is good ole' Peter. Well...more like evil ole' Peter. My evil is so great I no longer love or care. But I should have taken care of you along time ago!" He shot out a ray of green fire that hit Greg in the chest. He slouched over.
"Why Peter? He was your friend!" Alexx spat at him. He smacked her across the face.
"Shut UP you brat! I never wanted you...unless wanting you dead counts."
"But Why??"
"Because your the savior of the Powers, and I'm the RUINER of the Powers. In the prophecy it says to rule in evil you must kill the savior and so I did. I also had you kill all who you loved. I'm invincible! The only person that could kill me...would be ME!"
"Oh really?" Peter said.
"HUH?" Alexx said.
"What? You! Past me!" Peter yelled as a blast of mental strength hit the future Peter in the head. He flew back.
"Peter? How did-" She knew how."You killed them.."
"I had to...for you." The future-Peter got up.
"That's why you fail so much. You have feelings. Lose them and live!" Peter reasoned when another blast smacked him into the wall.
"I'll leave you..but I WILL NEVER TURN INTO YOU!" Peter yelled as he grabbed Alexx and teleported away. Future-Peter wiped blood from his lip as it healed.
"You can't change it Peter. You can't change your destiny."
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Yeah i've got no idea about Owen's idea, so... yeah i'm gonna do somethin else :D

It was Sara's turn to look again now. Owen couldn't say his plan outloud, it all came out in a rushed babble. She laid down on the couch and closed her eyes.

Nothing came to her at first. But when she became aware of the fact that she had fallen asleep it all became way too clear. I love doin the visions of the future so much better than going there

She was no longer in her future body, but what seemed like a transulcent one that she could control. The room was in minature chaos. Peter lay twitching on the ground, Alexx was crying a few feet away, and Greg stood in the middle of the room just staring at the wall blankly.

"Greg!" knowing her words would make no sound she ran over to study his face.

"Sara?" Gregs eyes widened. He could see her, but how could that be? She was only a persence. But he could, everyone could. "I- how? Never mind I don't care." Greg wrapped his arms around her resting his chin on the top of her head. "I thought I lost you forever."

She pulled away, hopefully this could be avoided. "What's going on?"

"Alexx has to kill Peter and everything will be fixed."

"That's it? Peter just has to die? Hell I'm tangeable enough to do that." She turned and picked up the dagger off of the floor.

"No!" Greg wrapped his arms around her. "If he is killed by anyone but Alexx it won't work and you'll be stuck here forever!"

"Well what can I do then?"

"Wait for either Alexx to kill Peter, or Hannah to show up."

"Can I go back to tell everyone?"

"I don't think so but you can try." Sara closed her eyes again and faded away from Gregs arms. He dropped his head and sighed, he let her slip through his fingers yet again. But it didn't matter, he'd get his shot at Hannah before the night was over.
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Well I'm a bit confused but here goes.

Owen's plan as crazy but it had to be done. It was all they had left. Sara was sleeping, twitching a little but nothing alarming.

"So if we infuse our powers into an object and store it away, the Alexx in the future should be able to use it and get back here?" asked Matthius.

"Yep," replied Owen, "If it works then when she uses it in the future she'll come back to here and we'll never have to do it at all."

"This is confusing."

"It's Temporal Physics," said Greg, "Something we should know nothing about but we do. But what Item should we use to store our powers?"

Cue for Alice! Wake up and tell them to use the dagger you saw!
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Sorry Adam, Mad has a different Idea

Sara floated somewhere out in limbo, trapped between times. She wanted to go back and kill Peter, regardless of what happened, but she had to go tell everyone else what happened. She couldn't move either direction.

"DAMN IT!" she screamed and fought against the gravity holding her there.


Oh shoot gotta go, i'll finish in a bit tho =)
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What the hell was she going to do? She was trapped in limbo, an unpleasent limbo.

Her twitching grew more violent she shook from side to side, trying to fight her way out of limbo. Greg looked over at her, "shit! Sara!" Sara, he whispered through his mind; which she could hear in limbo.

Greg?!"

"Oh thank God, where are you?"

"Limbo, I'm stuck."

"What do you mean stuck?"

"Meaning I can't move. I'll figure it out you figure out what to do with Alexx."

"Fine. Hurry up though."

"Okay I will."


She was still screwed, and could only think to do something else. She focused on a different time, slightly in the future but not too far that she'd mess anything up.

Things were worse than where Alexx and older Greg were. It was a mall, keyword was. The ceiling was gone and the stairs were on fire.

Peter had gone off of the deep end was killing everyone. Sara was able to spot herself putting pressure on a spot on Greg's shoulder. A stray ray of power ran over the only semi tangeable Sara's head. "Okay I want to go back now," she said and vanished.

She shot up in Mattius's cabin and said right away, "holy hell this isn't good."
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I know that was prolly confusing but much better than killing Sara off, i didn't want to create a new character and i chickened out. :D
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Peter looked around. He was covered in blood. Not his own...Peter laughed. He had killed 13 Powers this week and taken their powers. He recent power was the power to become one with liquid. He had just become one with this man's blood and killed him from the inside out. It was fun. He kept reminding himself that he had done it for Alexx...but it was just too hard. He wanted ALL of the powers.

Peter flew out the window. He knew what to do. To protect someone against death...you have to kill that person. He could pretty much tell where she was. At Greg's house.

He slammed through his wall. He knew what to do. Greg looked up.

"PETER!" Greg shot a bolt of water at him. Peter grabbed it and threw it back."How did you-"
"I can do a lot of things Greg. Things that are very evil." Peter shot a bolt of green flame at Greg. "Tell me where Alexx is!" Peter shot another bolt of green.
"No she isn't here!" Greg pulled all of the water at in the house as a wave at Peter. Greg saw it wash over him."Good. He's dead" Greg smiled.
"No I'm not." He saw the water raise it the form of Peter...only he was clear and had no color on him what so ever.
"How did you-" Peter slashed him with a solid bast of water. He went up his nose."Die Greg, die" He felt Greg's lungs as he slowly filled them.
"STOP!" Peter's eyes whipped around.
"Where are you?" He slid out of Greg's lungs. Greg wasn't dead, but wasn't going anywhere for awhile.
"I'm right here Peter." Peter looked and saw Alexx standing on the couch.
"Ah...Fool. You're gonna die now." He shot a blast at her. But it didn't hit. Instead it stopped, froze, and fell to the ground.
"You sound like you from the future." She sounded scared.
"Ah...Peter from the future killed you because he hated you. I'm killing you out of love." He raised his hand and pointed. The floor ripped up and started to swril around.
"No Peter...please!" She yelled as two smaller chunks smashed through her arms and pinned her to the wall.
"I"m sorry." the chunks flew straight at her. She waited for the pain of the floor hitting her all over. Instead she felt nothing. She looked up. Time had stopped. The chunks just inches from her head, Greg laying in pain on the grounnd, and Peter, still half in his water form.
"I will show you compassion when you showed me none." She left him and grabbed Greg. She ran, carrying him on her back.


When she started time again she could here the yell of Peter as he realized what happened to Alexx."I WILL FIND YOU YOU LITTLE BRAT!" He screamed as he shot all sorts of energies threw his hands.
"You saved me." Greg said as he came to.
"I had to. I know who I am know. I'm the Savior of the Powers. And Peter...He's the Anti-christ."
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Wow...heroes much? I"m kinda confuzzled, but here ya go:

Alexx grabbed a dagger that she found lying on the ground. Everything went white...

"Woah..." Alexx looked around. "What the helck?" She was standing in the middle of Matthius's cabin.
"Apparently you found the dagger," Greg (the younger one) said. "Who's that?"
"This is...you," Alexx answered hesitantly, placing the body on the couch.

Just so ya know, how that worked was Alexx went back, and popped into the room right as Sara is waking up. So she's back in the regular time. Mad is telling me that it's stupid...I don't care.

"Wait...me?"
"Yeah. Peter...the future one I think...tried to kill me. But so did the one from this time...I'm not really sure. Either way my brother is trying to kill me...what the helck???!!!??" She sat down in a chair, and Owen put his arm around her. Sara was staring.
"You do know who Peter is, right?" Sara asked quietly from where she was pacing.
"Um...my brother?" Alexx guessed, standing back up.
"The anti-christ." Alexx fainted. Luckily, Owen caught her.

"I'll get you, you dirty little witch." The voice was everywhere, bouncing off the clear white walls. Alexx spun around, trying to find the source of the voice. "Look up." She did so. Owen's body was on the ceiling, and a single drop of blood landing on her cheek. A dagger was sticking out of his chest and his eyes were gouged out..
"NOO!!! Peter, come out here and fight me! I won't let you do this!"
"What are you going to do?" Peter asked, stepping out of the shadows. Alexx glared at him, and felt a slight tingling in her fingers. She looked at her hands, and a bright flare of red light shot out. She moved her hand, aiming at Peter. He fell backwards screaming.
"Kill you. Brother or no, you killed Owen. You will die." she moved her other hand and shot another blast at Peter. He screamed again, not moving to stop her. His body was slowly desinigrating, disappearing. Blood began pouring out of his eye sockets, followed by his mouth and ears. He screamed again and...


"Alexx!" She opened her eyes.
"Holy shnap!" she cried when she saw where she was. She was no longer lying down, but floating a few yards above the ground.
"Dude, fire just shot out of your freaking fingers..." Owen exclaimed. Alexx fell to the floor because her consentration was broken.
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