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I'm losing it..... I'm hearing her voice but it cant be her...can it?

Greg flew over the rural Kansas town. Not many children but enough to help in his endevours.

Greg snatched five souls from the town. His body and mind were begining to warp.
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Greg walked over to the house. He regretted having to do this...He flung open the door. The young teenage girl was sitting on the couch.
"AHHH!! Wwwww-who are you?" Greg flung her down.
"I"m sorry..." He closed his eyes preparing for the scream...but it never came. Greg looked down. Their was no girl. "where did you go?"
"Over here!" A force of pure energy struck Greg in the gut.
"You're...you're..."
"Yep. A power. You should have known who you were messing-" The girl grunted.
"What?" The girl fell over, dead. The person behind her was...no..it couldn't be.
"Owen?"
"Greg?"
"What the hell are you doing here."
"The same reason you're here."
"To save Sara?"
"No...someone else..."
"You wouldn't...Why are you bringing him back?"
"I have to...You're gonna bring him back anyway."
"What do you mean?"
"100 souls equal two redeemed, and no, 50 doesn't bring back one."
"But that doesn't explain why."
"Um...Alexx is...pregnant. Peter will kill her for that and I just had to make that deal with him."
"WHAT DEAL?!?"
"I have to kill the fifty you won't kill." He raised his hand.
"NO OWEN!"
"YES GREG."
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"Owen, you're crazy!" Alexx cried when she realized it. "You know I can read your mind now, and you know what you're doing is wrong. He can't kill me if he can't come back anyway."
"But look at greg," greg looked up at the sound of his name. He was sitting in a small wooden chair, Alexx was curled up in a tight protective ball on the bed as she was still small enough to do that, and Owen was pacing."do you really think he's going to leave Sara in Limbo?"
"No, but there has to be another way. I don't know how, but we have to think of something. I don't want to bring a baby into a world with...Him here. What about abortion; he's gonna kill me for having a baby, so we eliminate the baby."
"I don't want to get rid of our baby. Besides, half-vampire babies look kinda wierd during the stage where they do abortion. the doctor would flip out."
"Dammit, there must be a way."
"There has to be another way."
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Sara sat in her favorite tree, the only place she forgot about Peter, Alexx, Owen, Matthius, and even though it saddened her... Greg. Those few moments of peace and the feeling that none of it had happened made her feel almost... happy.

But today her tree offered no sancuary, no refuge from everything. She couldn't get Greg's voice out of her head. She tried contacting him.

"Greg?"

Sara? Oh my God I wasn't even trying that time.

"I know, it's me this time."

oh

"Greg..."

hold on, i've got something for you. Maybe I can send it, if it's really you and not me just being insane.

Sara didn't think it would work but it did. Suddenly in front of her was a nice looking box. She opened it to find a green claddagh ring.

"Greg it's beautiful!"

i thought you'd like it, put it on your left ring finger with the crown facing towards you.

Sara knew what he was doing, he was proposing to her. But she was in limbo!

"Greg..."

just be at the gates of limbo in four days. I'll be ready by then.

"Ready for what?"

He didn't respond, she wished he would stop doing that. She wished that they could just talk forever, or as close to forever as they could get. But even as forever ends, there is something else and she couldn't take that lonliness.
And neither could he. It would be best if they curbed their conversations, when they stopped it would be best if she hadn't grown so used to his voice again.

Throughly pissed off she jumped out of her tree and walked off to find Peter. She was going to do her best to send him to Hell.
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Peter smiled. He enjoyed Sara's little plan to kill him. Too bad she didn't know something came back...his powers. Oh he loved these things like himself. He saw Sara a little ways off. "Showtime.."

Sara didn't see Peter but she knew he would show up soon. She was ready. Why had Peter gone to the dark side she would never know. He was one of the original Powers with a seat in the Council. But then he killed that one man-
"Boo" Peter dropped down from a tree.
"PETER!" She shot something at him but it stopped in mid-air. "How...did you do that? Your powers are..."
"Wrongamundo sucker." He shot a blast of green flame at her. She ducked but the shock wave that it caused knocked her over.
"Ah...I love that feeling. Know who's going to Hell?"
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Sara smirked, "you are." she stood up and sent a blast of energy at him. Wow, she didn't know she could still do that. "Mine came back too."

She slashed at him from every direction, anger and hate filling up in her. She was vaguely glad that she couldn't kill him. It gave her more time to attack him.

He slashed back, sending a incredibully searing pain in her shoulder. She fell back. He walked over to her.

"Time to go Sara," he said grabbing her arm. He opened the gates of hell and prepared to throw her in.

She fought back, breaking out of his grip and running towards the gate between earth and limbo. Peter's energy blast knocked her out as she fell beyond the now opening gate.
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"oh my god it's sara!" Alexx exclaimed as Sara fell out. "Quick close the gate!" she exclaimed. they had it all planned out, get sara out and close the gate as fast as possible. Greg, Alexx and Owen pooled their magic together and began pulling the gate shut, but Peter was running towards the gate at an incredible speed. Sare jumped in before he could get to them and shot him back with an energy blast. The gate closed.
"Are...we...safe?" Owen panted as he sat down on the grass.
"I think so," Sara replied before falling into Greg's arms.
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Greg held Sara. She was free at last and Peter was locked away forever. Theycould finally live their lives.

The Ancient Urn pulsed. It was incomplete. Greg had done terrible things. His mind was not what it used to be. He was immune to the loss of innocence.

"Let's go," said Greg. His face was old. Unnaturally warped from his acts of darkness.

"Yeah...." Sara gazed into his eyes. They were different.

"We've got a rom for ya at our place," said Alexx, "Actually it's a couch, but you can stay there, with us."

They walked off a moment before flying into the sky. Alxx and Owen leading the way.

The urn pulsed again. A crack formed and it shattered releaseing all the souls. The vanished before getting away.

A Dimensional tear formed sending a shock through the ground. Peter stepped out.

"Such pure souls, I didn't even need all fifty." Peter laughed. He was free to take his revenge.....on the world.
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Sara held onto Greg tight, re-memorizing his smell. She missed him, but he looked different now. A story was written on his face that he wouldn't share, and she didn't want to know.

She knew that things would change fast, whatever had happened to Greg would change things quick. She decided to take what she could get now.
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"So we're completely safe?" Alexx asked worriedly as they settled down in her apartment for the night. Greg and Sara were on the fold out couch.
"Yes, love, completely," Owen replied as he laid down in bed. Alexx was calm for hte first time in a very long time.
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Sara and Greg faced eachother on the couch.

"I know this is a dream," Greg said, "but I'm going to make the best of it."

"Greg, this isn't a dream."

"But-"

Before he could finish Sara kissed him. "Still think this is a dream?"

"Sorta, I've had nothing but dreams since you've left thats all I know."

"Me too sweetie," Sara buried her head in his chest listening to his heartbeat.

"I love you Sara."

"I love you too." Slowly the two drifted off to sleep. But their dreams weren't of eachother for the first time in a long time.

Peter floated over the seas, laughing minically. He killed people at random left and right.

Their eyes shot open at the same time, "he's back. So much for being safe."

"Damnit," Sara said, "they couldn't even give me one day of happiness could they?"

"Who?"

"The powers."

"I know they're ass-holes."

"I thought you work for them."

"Past tense."

"What?"

"When they wouldn't help me, I quit."

"Politely I hope."

"Not really."

Sara kissed him anyways. "We've got to do something." Greg grabbed her left hand and kissed it.

"Lets do this first," he turned her hand so she could see the claddagh ring.

She smiled, "I could live with that.
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Peter smiled as the man in front of him screamed. "I thought...I thought."
"That I was dead? Well, that's jut to bad for you...dad." Peter finally had his demon of a father right where he wanted.
"I'm sorry Pete...I never wanted to divorce your mother-" He was cut short by Peter grabbing his neck.
"This isn't about mom. This is about what you did to me. You turned me into this."
"I didn't know that that would...happen."
"Yes you did dad. The council even told you that your power and mom's power would create my power."
"i didn't.."
"You didn't what? All I want to know dad is if you really knew?" Tears of fire streamed down Peter's face.
"I didn't.."
"TELL ME!" He sent a shock of pure fire down his father's body.
"Yes...I did know..." The man started to cry as well, "I'm so sorry Pete..It's just...I wanted to see if it was really possible." He instantly regretted saying this.
"WHAT? All I am to you is a experiment? A freak experiment?" He used his mental powers to pull a skate off a sled. He moved it towards his father's chest.
"No son. I love you."
"No you don't. You beat me. You said I was a freak, a monster. You twisted your little "experiment's" mind. Do you know that? It's was your evil little gag that cursed me with these powers. It's time for you to pay."
"NO PETE-" The skate went right through his body. "Why...?"
"You know why dad. Too bad you can't die." The man spit up blood but yet didn't die,"And too bad for you I can't take it. Your going to have to die forever now." He laughed as he pulled his father off the wall, leaving the blade in his chest.
"Please Peter.."
"No dad."
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Sara knocked on Alexx and Owens door. Greg's eyes wnet foggy and he hit the floor. He stood before the council.

"What the hell do you guys want?"

"This is your fault! You have released Peter back onto Earth!" screamed one of the elders.

"I already know that!"

"You dont get it!" We set it up so Sara and Peter would get sucked into limbo. She would have escaped in 10 years but you interfered and now not only is she free ahead of scehdule but Peter is free again."

"Why the hell didn't you tell me that to start with!?"

"We cant tell you more than is permitted."

"Dont give me that crap! If you would stop sitting on that damn high horse and help me out we could avoid these "End of the World" situations." Greg's powers flared up. He wanted to strike them.

"Look! It is all we can do to keep Peter from Ascending. He is too powerful to hold off much longer. If he ascends it will be the end of everything."

"What do you want from me then!?"

A map of Antartica appeared, "We hid a weapon hear long ago. It might be the only thing that can stop Peter. Find it before Peter finds you."

Greg's eyes returned to normal. Alexx, Owen and Sara were hovering over him.
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Peter sat on the rooftop of Alexx's bar. He father was tied in green pulsating rope. "Stupid Elders. Saying stuff before they should be said. I don't want to find them, I already have. And after I kill you I'll find that weapon myself." He smashed through the roof.
"Peter!" Alexx screamed.
"Alexx!" Peter acted as if he was shocked to see her too.
"How did you get here!" The Elder said.
"A little bird told me." Peter laughed as he pointed at Owen.
"Owen? How...how could you."
"I had no choice. He was going to kill you."
"But poor Owen gave me your address and his soul!" Peter laughed.
"What?"
"He owe's me his life so I won't kill you!" Peter enjoyed this.
"Is this true Owen?" An Elder asked.
"Yes..."
"Then there is nothing we can do for you. You are Peter's." The Elder shook with fear.
"Nothing? Is that all you can do?" Greg was mad.
"Yes. A deal of the soul is unbreakable until it is paid by the soul of the debted one." They hung there heads in shame. Alexx was crying.
"C'mon Owen we have a weapon to get."
"The weapon?" Sara asked,"You don't have the map!"
"Then I'll melt all of Antarctica until I get it!" He grabbed Owen."Say goodbye!" He ripped out his heart.
"NO!" Alexx screamed at the top of her lungs. Owen's dead body fell to the floor.
"Owen..." Sara hung her head.
"Please bring him back elder!"
"We can't or the debt will return and he will die again." The Elder said. Peter waved goodbye and flew off.
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Sara looked at Greg sadly for a half a second before tearing Alexx's eyes off of Owen.

"We cannot bring back a debted soul, but a soul murdered in cold blood we can," an Elder waved his hand in front of a door, the curtians parted and Hannah walked out.

"So what has become of my power?" She asked, similar to Barbossa in the second pirates of the carribean.

"Peter has it, I assume," Sara said coldly.

"Ah, so the bastard did kill me."

"Not that I blame him, I'd love to do that."

"Ah dear sister you wouldn't do that to me would you?"

"You're not my sister."

"You're probably right, I'm more like... you."

That was the last straw Sara marched across the room towards Hannah. Greg caught her arm first.

"Sara," Greg cautioned, "not now. We should get Alexx out of here."

"Defiently."
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