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OK! geeze i was bored! I'm gonna fix it! ignore my last post and Bellas (Bella's goes along with mine :)


Sara shot awake, launching herself so far forward she almost hit the dash board. The dream was so vivid, so real. She had half a mind to go break Peter's neck. She knew she had to get Alexx away from him as soon as she could.

"Sara are you okay?"

Sara paused and shook the bad dream out of her head, "yeah I'm fine but we've gotta go talk to Peter or something."

"Why?"

"Because I think somethings going to happen with him, but I don't know when. We may have to get Alexx out of there like soon."

"What about your boss?"

"We can go talk to him later, but if we don't do something soon there may not be a later."

"OK then." Greg did a majorly illegal u-turn (they were on a one way road.) and sped back towards Peter's house. "Sara, what the hell is going on?"

"Peter's going to go psycho or something like that. Maybe possessed, but he's going to kill like an entire mall full of people!"

"Like what those dudes tried to do in Odd Thomas?"

"Worse, he's not going to be shooting people, he's going to start blowing people up and throwing them everywhere and... really bad!" She couldn't bring herself to say how she had seen Peter lift a random guy off of the ground and snaps his back without even touching him. She shuddered at the memory.

"Alright then should we just go get Alexx out there right away or what?"

"No, we'll talk to Peter first."

"Are you sure that's a good idea?"

Sara pulled the dagger out of her boot. "Doesn't matter, if it comes to it... we'll kill him."

"Okay." Greg skidded to a halt in front of Peter's house. Calmly Sara and Greg walked up to the front porch. Sara turned the door handle and it jammed. It was locked. Sara sighed and kicked the door open. The old lock gave way quite easily to her kick.

"Sara, you really should stop doing stuff like that!" Greg said annoyed.

Sara shrugged as she walked into the house. Greg groaned and walked in after her. He was tempted to grab her arm and walk her out but how easily she could physically injure him stopped him.

Sara was small but she was still stronger than Greg. Whatever that vampire did to her made her stronger than any guy either of them had ever met.

Greg sat down on the couch and Sara plopped down next to him. Peter's couch felt a lot like the couch that Greg had in collage. Sara felt safe there. In her profession she could never feel safe anywheres. She had seen murder attempts in the strangest places.

Greg put his arm around Sara and she leaned against him.

"Sara, can I ask you a question?"

"Duh."

"Do you promise that you wont get mad and run out?"

"Depends."

Greg sighed, he'd take his chances; "Sara why did you run out so long ago?"

Sara mused for a second, "I don't remember... I think I was just...Well, I felt like I was damsel in distress; even back then that was something that I couldn't handle. But its good to feel protected every once in a while."

A wave of weariness swept over them and they fell asleep. Strangely Sara didn't dream in her sleep, but Greg did.

Greg dreamed of a chaotic street, even though nobody was running the streets were littered with bodies. Only two still stood. One was in extreme pain and the other was causing the pain.

He saw Sara wither in pain and Peter laughing manically. Greg woke with a start launching himself forward. He grabbed onto Sara so she wouldn't fall and leaned back.

He closed his eyes and tried to remember who was on the street. No where was he or Alexx. If Peter was going to go totally mass murderous on someplace he wouldn't bring Alexx. But he wondered where he was, he wouldn't just be standing there. That concerned him.
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Thanks for the warning...

What ever was going to happen was very bad for the Powers to force sleep on them. He podered whether or not to wake Sara. Peter didn't seem to be around, nor did Alexx but he'd had trouble sensing people before.

Pain shot through Gregs head. A voice rang out within it, The Doth come our child. Please hurry. Time hat grown short. His scream woke Sara up.

"Greg! What's wrong?"

"Come on, We have to find Peter now!"
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Adam not nice! good post and all but i dont know what happens next! somebody else post!
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This would be a good spot for Bella or Mad to post I think.
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They can't get on til like monday or somethin!
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Bah! Here I go!

Greg dragged Sara to the car. He startted sweeping the city with his mind. He had to be here. Where was Alexx. They had to get to her first.

He turned over the car and sped off. Not sure where he was going.

"Greg," said Sara concerned, "What is going on? What made you scream?"

"I got a message. Things are way worse than we thought. If the Powers are willing to send me messages during the day while im awake....I dont want to think about it."

Sara felt a wave come over her. She could see all the possible routes to take to find Peter. Each shorter than the last. "Go left!"

Greg obeyed. She said another direction and greg followed that too. Where were they going?
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"Owen?" Alexx asked as she opened the door. Of course he would be in his house during the day...although she had never been to his house. "Hello?" She didn't see anything, and figured he was in his room. SHe decided to check upstairs first.
She opened a door and looked in. There he was, asleep on his bed. "Owen?" she whispered, shaking him awake. He sat straight up, his teeth bared, and reached out towards her. "Ahhh!" Alexx went to jump back but he grabbed her shoulders. "Ouch! Owen, it's me! it's Alexx!" She cried. His grip relaxed and she calmed down. "Your teeth..." she said suddenly. His teeth were abnormally large...they were fangs.
"It's nothing, honestly," he promised. THey had relocated to the kitchen, and were drinking coffee again.
"You have fangs. That's definitely something. What are you?"
"Honestly? A vampire." Alexx stood up and stepped back.
"A what?"
"Vampire, but I'm not evil, promise. I don't even hurt people, unless they are endangering someone else." He walked towards her swiftly, before she could react, and pulled her to him.
"Get off me!" she snapped.
"Alexx, have I ever hurt you?"
"No..." she was holding back tears.
"Your brother knows. He trusts me, and has since you were born." he continued. He looked Alexx in the eyes and kissed her. Her legs turned to Jell-O involuntarily and she collapsed. He lifted her into his arms and laid her on the couch, where she fell asleep...(not good).

Sorry I didn't post for so long! My dad grounded me. I almost replied 2 days ago, but I was gonna be late if i didn't leave.
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"Right!" Sara said.

Greg turned right

"Left!"

Greg turned left.

"Sara where are we going?"

"To find Peter. Left!" Greg made a sharp left and sped up.

"Sara do you know where you're going?"

"Yes, one more left and we'll find him."

Greg made a quick left and found himself in the alley where he had saved Sara. The memory of that night hit Sara hard. She breathed in deeply before shaking the memory out. She had more important things to deal with.

"Greg stop!" Sara cried. Greg stompped on the breaks and skidded to a stop only a few feet away from Peter.


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Peter never flinched, he simply stood there glareing at Greg and Sara. He was emitting power unlike anything Greg had ever felt.

"Get out of the car," Greg said to Sara, never loseing eye contact with Peter.

"I wont leave you!" she protested. Greg Took his eyes from Peter and kissed her. She submitted to it quickly. Something Greg had wanted to do for years.

"Go find Alexx. Protect her." A rain drop hit the windshield of the car. And the rain doth come, thought Greg. Sara slipped out of the car. Her Vampire speed carried her into the alley and away from the car and Peter.

Peter's eyes flashed red, the car exploded with Greg in it. Torrents of water shot from the darkened sky, aiming for Peter. He lept to the top of a building where Greg was already waiting.

"You couldn't just die could you," said Peter. His eyes were glowing a constant red now.

"What kind of Ancient would I be if I let you do that?" asked Greg mockingly. His eyes had started to glow blue.

Water came from Greg's hands as dire did from Peter's. A stalemate.
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Adam, your my new best friend

Sara searched the city mentally. She was finding it hard to focus. Half of her wanted to go back and help Greg, and the other half couldn't focus. She didn't have much time, as soon as the fact that Greg had kissed her sunk in her head wouldn't stop spinning. She'd need to get to Alexx first.

She scanned the city through to the suburbs. That's where she found her. Just on the edge of the suburb headed into town. She listened for who else was in the house, only one other person Owen.

As she pictured his face the a painful memory hit her. Bella don't kill me for this.It's not as bad as it seems, really it gets better Seven years ago that same man pulled her behind a club and attempted to kill her, or do something else.

Shit, She thought frantically. Whatever was going to cloud her mind a moment ago was gone. She was focused now. She had to get to Alexx.

Using her vampiric speed she was able to get there within a few moments. Stopping outside the door to collect herself for a moment she blocked out all memory of that night. If she went in there with that memory she'd lose control of herself and lose the battle.

She opened the door and walked inside. She knew that Owen wasn't in the living room, he was in the kitchen making coffee. Her only shot at getting out of here safely would be to just kidnap Alexx who was sleeping on the couch.

Just as she leaned over to pick her up she heard Owen's voice from the doorway, "Hello Sara." That would be a great cliff hanger but alas i have more that i must tell

Sara sighed and turned to look at him, "hello Owen, long time no see huh?"

"What are you doing here Sara."

"Do you not know? You're losing your touch." Owen closed his eyes briefly and opened them again.

"You cannot take her."

"Why? Would I spoil your dinner?"

"NO! I would never hurt her. I promised."

"A promise? You promised me-"

"That was different Sara."

"Really?" wow, this is taking longer to get there than i had intended, oh well

"Yes, I never promised anything to you Sara. And besides I didn't hurt you did I?"

Yes he had, the pain she had endured that night had been worse than anything she had ever felt. The memory of that pain unleashed the memory of the entire night. Rage flooded through her and it took all she had to control herself.

"Yes you did, that night was the most painful night of my life. Now if you'll excuse me I've got to get her out of here."

"I can take care of her, I give you my word that I won't let any harm come to her. And my word means a lot more now than it did seven years ago. Right now you need to go help Greg."

Sara closed her eyes and listened for Greg. He needed help. It sounded like he was dying, she seeped into his head looking at his thoughts. He replayed the moment when he had kissed Sara. Something Sara thought only a dying man would do in his spot. She had to get to him.

"Alright, but Owen if Peter comes back here you get her the hell out of dodge!" She cast him a threatening look that even he was terrified of.

"Okay."

Sara ran back to the alley.

Muhahahahahaha!
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dude for a second i thougt i lost the entire thing!
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It was all Greg could do to hold Peter off. Even with the rain Peter was growing in strength.

Water balls pelted from Greg at Peter. They turned to steam before ever touching him. The rain formed a shell around Greg. The fire sliced through it and into Greg. He screamed and hit the ground. His arm seared in pain.

"Fire Dragon!" cried Peter. A long serpent like beast of flame appeared around him. It lunged forward strikeing Greg and sending him into the nearest building. The wall cracked from impact and Gregs smouldering form crumpled to the ground.

All he could see anymore was Sara. It didn't really matter. He figured he'd die here anyway but at least he could remeber her.

"Come now," said Peter, "dont tell me you're done already. We just started. I had so many techniques to try out." He leaned into Greg's ear, "I was holding back too." He took a whiff of the air, "You're Whore is here."

Sara lunged from the shadows of the alley. Peter had his hand around her throat and against the wall before she could strike. She struggled, rage and tears filling her eyes as she loked at Greg.

"Watch Greg, Watch as I kill you're slut, watch as I throttle the life from her lungs and turn her to dust," his grip increased. Sara was gasping now.

"No....No....NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!" The rain stopped, each drop held in place. Peter lost his grip on Sara and she fell to the ground, barely concious. "I will not allow you to hurt her." Greg was on his feet. Eyes burning white. Each word spouting brilliant light.

Peter made a move but he was pinned to the wall by a wave of Greg's hand. Such raw power, it was burning his insides. His body wouldn't be able to survive it much longer.

"Death is to easy a punishment for you, Peter, but it will have to do." The final strike was ready. Now Peter would die.

INCHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHCCCCHHHHCHHHHHCCCCC

Greg lost his focus. His mind was splitting. The power vanished but it was neough to run Peter off. He fled from them as fast as possible. Something big seemed to be happening and he had no desire to meet it.

Greg hit the ground screaming, the rain continued to fall efore greg was unconcious and twitching.

Perhaps a bit much?
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Peter woke up in a dark room. "Great." Greg had made it. He could feel the power radidating from his hands.
"Hello Peter." A voice said. A voice all too familiar.
"I hate you." He spat at the dark image. It was James Harding, Proffesor of Psychic arts. More like torture. A bright light shined in his eyes.
"Well I hate you too. I detected your power, what have you been doing? Being evil?" he took out a needle and jammed it into Peter's leg.
"AHHHH!!!!!!!!" Screamed Peter. Suddenly his eyes glowed red. His skin turned a black. Fangs came out of his mouth."you will pay for this!" He leaped up and grabbed the man.
"NO! PLEASE-" He was cut of by the sound of his rib cage cracking. A hand shot through his chest.

Peter let the body fall. He sent a puslastion that would kill all humans in the building. He knew he wasn't the only one. He mind called every one of the power figures in the building. "Join me or die. The doors are unlocked." He did this over and over."I will let out a power that will tell you where I am located." He laughed. They would make up his merry men that he would take to free Haylen. They arrived and turned on the lights. Some had the powers of Fire, others the power of multiplication( of their body) He laughed.
"The Humans have mocked us, "tested" on us, and even killed us! I have found the legendary Peacemaker of the Ancients! We will take her and make her our own and claim what is ours!" Those in the crowds roared in agreement."Now to free our brother, Haylen!" they roared at that. Who couldn't know Haylen. He killed over 3,000 humans and weakling Ancients at once. He was a legend, but was caught. "The time is now!" He let out an unearthly shierk that could be heard for miles. They blew through the wall and marched out into the city.

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Adam if that was too much I may have to kill Bella. THAT WAS AWESOME! thats like one of those parts in books where you get there and then you like cant stop! Perhaps your too good for your own good. Beware.

Sara recovered quickly and heard Greg screaming. She scrambled the few feet over to him.

"Greg! Greg! Can you hear me?" Through his twitching spasums Sara caught a nod. She took him by the shoulders and felt the awesome power trying to break free of him.

Greg's eyes showed incredible pain as he stared into her eyes.

"Sara, run."

"No!" she threw her arms around him. "I'm not leaving you again."

"Sara you must, go." Greg tried to push her away but she wouldn't budge. "Sara please, a dying man's last request."

"No, Greg you're not going to die. I'll figure something out." Sara closed her eyes to mask a tear. Greg reached up to wipe it away and as his thum touched her cheek Sara felt a surge of power flow through her. She knew what to do now.

She adjusted herself so she was lying down next to him. She could hardly stand to look into his eyes, so full of pain.

"Sara you've got to go."

"No, not without you." Before he could protest she pressed her lips to his and felt the power he had inside him flow through her. She watched as the pain left his eyes. The power that now flowed through her made her heart race and her head throb.

When Greg pulled away Sara's head spun out of control. She had to lay her head down on the pavement.

"Sara? Sara can you hear me?" Sara nodded. Greg lifted up her head and put his arm under it. Slowly the throbbing and spinning subsided, but she still felt the awesome power flow through her. "Sara are you alright?"

"I'm better than alright." Sara's eyes glowed red, the sign of an evil vampire.
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Whoa! Peter thought. A sudden image of evil spread through his mind. A real evil chick! Just what he wanted.
"Master!" Grog, his new 2nd in command person, said. Grog could simply touch a wall and it would crumble.
"Yes?"
"A person is approaching!" He looked. It was her!
"You stay here." He ran over. The woman held a head in her hands. "Shoot." It was just a figure from the future, a possible future. "Is that Sara? Is that GREG'S head?" he looked. why did these things that he see become real to everyone else?

'Peter!" Sara called out to him.
"What?" He looked at her. She had blood down her arms and shirt.
"I will join you. But first bring Haylen to the mall you were heading to." She began to fade away.
"Why?" He called out but she already was gone. Haylen it was. He would be a perfect sacrifice.
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