And !! thank you! :3 Really appreciate your encouragement, Snoink! ^-^
7/18/24
Points today: 12
Total: 163/300
CM and DD stuffs! Plus sketches
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Worked some more on class tracks for CM. 1 point.

Made sketches of some alien creatures for CM! 3 points.

Tried writing different possible beginnings for CM. 5 points.

Sketched some flora and fauna for DD. :> 3 points.
7/19/24
Points today: 17
Total: 180/300
Did a lotttttt of plotting for CM. *gasp* Will this finally be mint not pantsing a novel?? XD
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Fun fact… the notes app thinks my handwriting is either Russian or gibberish…
Transcription is in the 7/20 update lol.
850ish words, so 17 points.
7/20/24
Points today: 2
Total: 182/300
No original plotting today, but hey, transcribing >850 words took a lot of work. Also, I have names for the main charries of CM now, whoo! Velera, Tazanen, and Lytral.
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Beginning
Arrive at the academy
Investigation
Inspection
Vigilantes
Climax
Denouement
- Velera spying on Tazanen’s compartment in Aerial (bit of explanation why), testing camouflage nanobots (probs not) or little robot(s) (is on standby in case it explodes). left friends in their compartment
- hears disturbance one car over, makes eye contact w Taz as Taz also looks out of compartment
- non-mage and mage in dispute (non-mages forced to wear indication of status to get a job?), non-mage attacks mage, Vel sends fleet to buzz around. pretends power is insect control, breaks apart the fight, but tensions still high
- Taz arrives, uses diplomacy
- Vel’s friends (2, guy and a girl) get there just in time to watch both Vel and Taz
- news anchor at the beginning of every chapter?
- this time, magic disappearing, or expedition sent to surface?
Arrive at the academy
- setting desc
- Vel’s friends spread stories abt both Vel and Taz
- history class– powerful mage once a generation? same tratu that bonds w Lytral
- Vel unhappy about sharing the spotlight. tries to outshine Taz
- isle begins to drift, on collision course w other isle
- Vel helps w robots, commended
- Taz uses connections to get specialized mages there pronto. they put fixes in place. (magic disappearing–less mages being born– but most influential fam can still call mages whenever)
- bit of info on how drifting happening lately, Worthless must not be doing their job of keeping emeralds clean (overhear convo, maybe Vel’s own opinion as well)
- in aftermath, Vel keeps glaring at Taz, Taz walks over and is like, why do you hate me so much? Vel is like, because you’re you
- after Taz leaves, Lytral pops up w smth funny
Investigation
- news anchor, floating isles?
- Taz wants to do smth spectacular for a school proj, plans to ask dean/headmistress if he can use labs for longer or smth
- Vel overhears bit of same convo w robots. headmistress talking w clairvoyant, mentions secret weapon somewhere (headmistress’s quarters cuz she’s a non-mage, next to clairvoyant’s quarters)
- both Vel and Taz investigate, find kyto (magic hunter). they’re both like, why are you here??
- Ly shows up (sensed minds), threatens to tell on them unless they all form a team. Ly’s dreamed of adventures w friends like in stories
- Taz and Vel reluctantly agree to temp alliance
- as they leave, Vel feels smth, like a connection to the kyto
- Taz has an idea, magic scientist, needs to bring along smth interesting. a bit reluctantly, Ly says they can sense minds
- sneak out of academy, pass by Worthless dwellings, see smth suspicious?, find magic researcher’s place, using Vel’s bots as scouts. can also pick the lock with them
- researcher not happy to be woken up, but intrigued by Ly
- learn magic caused by symbiosis w smth, other creatures, researcher wants them to bring kyto, but Taz says no
Inspection
- news anchor
- researcher disguised in inspector group
- yearly thing for academies
- top students prepared to show abilities and knowledge, older ones may be recruited
- kyto stolen, Vel feels it before discovery by clairvoyant or headmistress
- Vel wants to get it back. sends insect to follow (eventually caught by gov and found to be tech)
- Taz’s friends sneak in w inspectors too?? or some other way. teleport? somehow find truth of school? Ly tries to wipe memory, eventually fails.
- Vel and Taz’s actions combine to threaten existence of school later
Vigilantes
- news anchor
- Vel, Taz, and Ly sneak out a few days later to check on friends, memory wipe, seems ok but should check again in a few days
- see Worthless. Ly has the most empathy for them (has never fit in). Vel thinks they aren’t doing enough to improve their situation unlike her and her parents while Taz has grown up to just think of them as different
- some academy stuff
- Vel levels up tech, nanobots maybe, or like Big Hero 6. Taz starts to learn abt illusions, Dusk stuff
- Ly sneaks off to help Worthless. Vel goes to investigate, doesn’t tell Taz bc still doesn’t fully trust Taz. Vel hears kyto
- Ly hears of riot plans, also mention # of Worthless increasing here, at upcoming Emerald Enchantress celebration. large statue of her in main part of city? (on diff isle)
Climax
- news anchor– smth more, knows more than what saying
- academy found out, inspection team sent to confirm and close it down
- riots, Worthless disrupt celebration, go on strike
- kyto escapes
- Emerald Enchantress hologram turns on, informing of probs they may be facing? nah, no psychohistory. maybe some things wrong, some right?
- Vel bonds w the kyto, steals magic from inspection team w/o them knowing what happened
- mage silences statue, gov does damage control, but public in turmoil
- isles start to drift, Vel uses robots, Taz organizes mages, Ly chases statue and hears rest of what it says, including where engines??
Denouement
- Vel joins team learning abt engines (gov keeps quiet, clairvoyant and headmistress protect Vel by simply saying they can remove magic w/o saying how)
- Ly, Vel, and Taz convince school to start taking in Worthless and mages, more than previously– just related to alumni or hand-picked by talent/intelligence
- kyto warns of aliens coming? first time it speaks?
- expedition team sent to surface returns?









