The Twelve Muses

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You are absolutely Rocking this theme! Love the different personalities your are pulling out of the poetry and the images you're choosing. I love how you are also pulling from a variety of poetry styles / forms too - between dialogue poems, rhymed poems and different line and stanza lengths. It makes it very engaging to read! My favorites so far are probably the Hades + Apollo one, but they're all a treat to read!

how my heart grows roots
and my fingertips blossom with passion
whenever i lay eyes on her.


Ah! Beautiful!

Looking forward to reading more!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return




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Thank you! It means a lot <3
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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Aphrodite and Dionysus both came out great! Such great imagery, and so vivid in detail ~
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~ "Believe only half of what you see, and nothing that you hear." ~

- Edgar Allan Poe




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The Path of Distrust

Hermes


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To you, traveler,
I pen these words, a glimpse of my essence.

I am the messenger, the trickster's grin,
Wings (soft as thoughts), eyes (keen as stars.)

Do not mistake my (laughter for unseriousness),
Nor my (tricks for malice), for I am but a mirror,
Reflecting the shades of your world,
(The light and dark intertwined.)

I am the wanderer of realms unseen,
(The echo of laughter in forgotten halls.)
For I am but a prism, mirroring the hues of existence,
The bridge between worlds.

From mountain tops where eagles soar,
I traverse realms both near and far,
(In banter shared underneath moonlit skies.)

So if you ever (doubt) the path ahead,
Take the right one,
And know that in every moment of uncertainty,
(You are not alone.)
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

Ley, she/her
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Ahh, I love the colors so much!!
Reflecting the shades of your world,
(The light and dark intertwined.)

My favorite lines hands down!! Beautiful!!
They/he

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint




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This is a reference poem based on Josephine and Ares relationship in my novel: The Daughter of War. Tagging Amaya because she inspired me to use some novel references :3 @AmayaStatham


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Weak Hands

Ares


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* Rating 16+ Tw: Minor Abuse*

its unlike you to be upset,
yet somehow i feel like it's all you are.
and when i breathe,
i can feel you judging me,
so much so that i feel claustrophobic,
dreading every moment that could evolve into,
a sudden outburst.

and i hide more often than i live,
because to you,
living is not breathing,
and breathing is not enough,
so i hold my breath,
and wait for you to tell me to release.

and i know im just a woman,
but my hands work just as good as yours,
and did you forget, that we share the same blood,
or that we have the same nose?
of course you did,
because if you didn't then maybe,
you'd be the father i thought you'd be.

because to you, my hands are not hands,
they are liabilities wrapped in false dreams,
sheathed by desperation and a need to feel seen,
but behind closed doors,
you don't see the scars you so maliciously carved into my skin,
or the anxiety you drilled into my brain.

but i still sit here,
grinding my own bones because to you,
that is strength.

but maybe i should start healing myself,
and instead of grinding my bones i could slowly,
piece them back together.

would you just watch?
or would you help, and come to terms with what i am?
im sorry for asking, but what's the harm in that?
i am your daughter after all,
not just a pair of weak hands.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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Amazing <3333
Who's to say that my light is better than your darkness? Who's to say death is better than your darkness? Who am I to say?

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and is now EllieMae :)




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Thanks for the tag. I love Ares his poem! <333 It's so beautiful and pure, I can just feel Josephine's cry for help and accept. You're doing great with NaPo Leya! Keep it up ^^




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Love the Daughter Of War reference in this one! Nicely done! :D
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Based off of The Daughter of War: Persephone's relationship with her mother, Demeter.


11.

Turn Me Into a Waterfall

Demeter


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I'm sorry you feel this way.
although, am I really?
How could I be sorry for the way you feel?
'You are to stay hidden'.
From what?
Is the world really that menacing?

You say that waterfalls are made of false dreams,
and broken vows.
But I've read about waterfalls,
and they're made of my tears,
conjoined currents that break free at the thought of you.

You say that soil is made from grinded bones,
and lost promises.
But I've seen your garden,
and to me, it's made of my blood,
drowned in rain without a second thought.

You say that stars are souls of the tarnished,
and forgotten enemies.
But I've talked to the stars,
and they're nicer than you'd ever be.

You say that love is for mortals,
and peasants.
But I've seen love,
and how it heals even the deepest wounds.

You say that I could never fit in,
but how would you know that?
Being as you've hidden, too,
so what are you really saying?

Are you saying I'm different?
How could I be,
when you made me?
What was the point?

Was the point simply to,
turn me into a waterfall or,
soil or,
the stars?

Because if so,
I'd be the most beautiful waterfall,
flowing so gently that it travels away,
far from you.

Because if I was soil,
I'd be so soft and damp,
that I'd grow Poppies with no sun.

And if I were the stars,
I'd blind even the strongest gods,
with my elastic heart and glowing aura.

So, turn me into a waterfall.
Turn me into soil.
Let me become a star.
Maybe then, I'd be happy.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

Ley, she/her
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Breathtaking, Deadly, and Brilliant

Athena


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born of a king's mind,
yet as wise as a prophet.
growing pains,
the parietal lobe elongates,
and demonstrates nothing but potential.

pools of ancient wisdom,
longing for longevity,
like the vast oceans that never die,
nimble, poised, rhythmic.

as breathtaking as the luminous stars,
as deadly as the sharpened knife,
and as brilliant as the unblemished diamond.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

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Another DoW reference, this time a flashback to Jase asking his mother, Hecate, questions. This may also be a spoiler for TSoTN (The Son of the Night, Jase's spin-off series pre-trials) but eh. I made it more poetic XD


13.

Where Do I Come From?

Hecate


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"Where do I come from?"
"You come from the artery that connects to my heart."


"Who is my father?"
"Oh, my little bird. You do not have a father."


"But, how? I am made of skin and bones, and I don't have your nose."
"Just because you may have his hair, and his nose, that doesn't mean he is your father."


"So what is he, then?"
Hecate looks at her son, eyes soft as night, "For he is merely a whisper. He is nothing."


"He is something to me, mother."
"And what would that be?"


"He is my blood."
"Define blood, child."


"A bond you share with family."
"Is that all?"


"I think so, mother."
Hecate leans forward and whispers, "Blood doesn't mean much, here. What about your soul? Do you feel him?"


"No."
"That's because he is not compatible with the kindness that you've demonstrated from the depths of your soul. He is not worthy of you, my duckling."


"Is he a bad man?"
"He is unique among gods. A traitor to women."


"Have I ever seen him?"
Hecate smiles faintly and brushes her thumb on her toddler's cheek, "My darling, you see him everyday. In the waves, in the skies during a rain shower, deep in your heart. But please remember, that doesn't make him your father. He is simply a fragment of our history. A mistake. And you... you, my dark king, will be great one day. And maybe, you'll avenge us both."
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

Ley, she/her
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Inspired by @KateHardy's epic quote: "The Twelve Makeovers of Haircules is the stuff of legend. He defeated the Erymanthian Beard. One could say it was a hair raising adventure." --KateHardy

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Haircules

Heracles


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Beard made of courage,
as the young ones say.
Eyes made of lavish insecurities,
brushed by hair product and braiding rituals.

Is he a hero?
Haircules, slayer of men,
the Erymanthian Beard stood no chance,
slain by he who uses hair gel.

Hair as long as the Nile,
he is the demigod of L'Oréal,
a cosmetology legend of Greek myth.

Even Aphrodite is swoon by his,
ability to rapidly grow the most,
luminous and healthy hair.
Yet beneath the showcase,
is a god of power,
as strong as Axe Body Spray.
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

Ley, she/her
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PFFT Ley i love it so much XDD
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I’m glad xD It’s definitely… different from the rest of the ones I’ve posted so far! Lol
“Ley moves and I am a couple feet behind, waiting.” - winterwolf0100
“Ley you will be fine because we all have magic powers that will protect you.” - WeepingWisteria

Ley, she/her
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