God of mindlessness OOC

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Honestly, it was SOO GOOD! Great job! :D




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Thanks, @Ilium417!
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Hey all. I wrote there. I am extremely sorry for posting late. I had been too busy with my project. Whatever, do let me know how it is and what can I change to make it better??




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It's totally fine @ForeverYoung299! You did a great job! Also, who is going to write next? Maybe @Ilium417 or @SpunkyKitty?
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Probably not this week for me. I made a country at my school (long story XD) and I'm working on digitizing that in the form of a website and that'll take awhile. If I can though, I'll work on the God of Mindlessness thing!




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@MapleWay @Ilium417 is the evil friend and @spunkykitty is a person who joins the adventure. But before that, we need to talk a bit about the storyline. What will happen next? Maybe they will watch the news and see that the scientists also can't find any reasons for the cold and wind. Um... I have a confusion with the next part. Can it be like her powers faded away for sometime. This, turning the world to it's original state. Or it will remain like that? Pls let me know




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@ForeverYoung299 maybe she begins thinking about what it will be like when it is all over and suddenly it stops. She is excited but still a wee bit suspicious.
Last edited by MapleWay on Wed Mar 24, 2021 2:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
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@MapleWay that's a great idea. Then shall I continue??




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Sure! @ForeverYoung299!
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ForeverYoung299 wrote:@MapleWay @Ilium417 is the evil friend and @spunkykitty is a person who joins the adventure. But before that, we need to talk a bit about the storyline. What will happen next? Maybe they will watch the news and see that the scientists also can't find any reasons for the cold and wind. Um... I have a confusion with the next part. Can it be like her powers faded away for sometime. This, turning the world to it's original state. Or it will remain like that? Pls let me know


Maybe it can be that Myr will think that it’s getting really boring and she would wish it would stop, and then suddenly it does. So she and her family go out and the whole place is a wreck. She starts picturing a hurricane in her mind and a minute later she and all the characters are swept up by a hurricane. She starts getting suspicious. Suddenly she is in the clouds where people made of clouds are going about there business, and suddenly she is asked to enter a large castle made of what looked like raindrops. She starts wishing she could be back in her house, and then the same hurricane com- oops, sorry :P got ahead of myself.




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Sounds great @rida! What do you think @ForeverYoung299?
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@rida that sounds great! But... I think we should exclude the part where she enters the castle because it's not her power. Isn't it??




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ForeverYoung299 wrote:@rida that sounds great! But... I think we should exclude the part where she enters the castle because it's not her power. Isn't it??

Ummm. Like, there must be a source of her power, right? Like, a history behind it.... but it’s completely your choice.....




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Umm..... Can I go next?



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