God of mindlessness OOC

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ForeverYoung299
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 11:36 am
ForeverYoung299 says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 11:36 am
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Myr, a 15 year old innocent girl was wondering what would have happened if the world turns upside down? She knows the answer– she will be in a place where the temperature rarely rises above 6degree celsius. She is so much fond of coldness that no human tounge can render any account of. But, who could have thought that it would become the reality!

Can this be the beginning of the roleplay? I need everyone's consent. Please let me know where can I edit this one to make it better? @MapleWay @hannah0528 @Ilium417 @rida @spunkykitty
By the way, have you all subscribed to this? If yes, then I won't tag you any longer cuz you will receive the notifications.
Last edited by ForeverYoung299 on Fri Mar 12, 2021 4:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 2:39 pm
rida says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 2:39 pm
Myr is your character, so I think you should decide the beginning of her message. But, if you want our suggestions then I think you could begin with Myr doing her everyday routine and then that thought suddenly comes into her head and then her mother does the dialogue.
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 2:39 pm
rida says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 2:39 pm
Ok. I’ll be the mother then.
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:45 pm
junipers says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:45 pm
Yes of course!
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MapleWay
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:46 pm
MapleWay says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 3:46 pm
@ForeverYoung299 I'm subscribed and that looks like a good start! The only thing I would change is in the end, use one ! instead of two. I feel a simple period would be just as effective as well. I'll leave the final decision up to you though!
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 4:24 pm
ForeverYoung299 says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 4:24 pm
MapleWay wrote:@ForeverYoung299 I'm subscribed and that looks like a good start! The only thing I would change is in the end, use one ! instead of two. I feel a simple period would be just as effective as well. I'll leave the final decision up to you though!

Thanks. I changed it
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Ilium417
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Fri Mar 12, 2021 10:16 pm
Ilium417 says... · Fri Mar 12, 2021 10:16 pm
Good job! And thanks for the reminder, I'm subscribed now XD
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 9:39 am
rida says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 9:39 am
So..... when will we start?
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ForeverYoung299
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 10:19 am
ForeverYoung299 says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 10:19 am
um.. have the other prepared their charactrs?
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 12:46 pm
ForeverYoung299 says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 12:46 pm
Hello. I have written there in the roleplay. Please see that
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MapleWay
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 3:11 pm
MapleWay says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 3:11 pm
Um, before we start I would like to ask a couple of questions. 1, how do we know who's turn it is? 2, should we post our thing here before we post it on the main one? 3, the role of my part I that I don't believe in magical occurrences and tend to get mad when someone talks about them. Right?
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:39 pm
ForeverYoung299 says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:39 pm
1) um... We can ask it here.
2) You can post it here or you can post it there only...you can edit that there.
3)you are playing the role of the father, right? You don't believe in magic, you get a bit angry when someone talks about that. Your character is a bold.
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MapleWay
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:49 pm
MapleWay says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 4:49 pm
Ok, thank you! And yes, I am the father
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Sat Mar 13, 2021 5:34 pm
Ilium417 says... · Sat Mar 13, 2021 5:34 pm
So I'm the friend that helps her but secretly wants to hurt her right? I think I have that prepared, yeah XD
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Sun Mar 14, 2021 5:43 am
ForeverYoung299 says... · Sun Mar 14, 2021 5:43 am
@Ilium417 you are. Can you pls show us what you have prepared?
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