Felistia's Novel & Short Story Reviews

What I Review:

Novels: I love reading a novel from start to finish. If you're looking for long term novel reviews look no further. You may request me to review a novel that is no longer in the green room too. I'll review novels finished or still in progress.

Chapters: I will review individual chapters from novels, but realize that if I haven't read the whole story I won't be able to give the best review.

Short Stories: I love read short stories so let me have them.



I Might Review, but May Turn Down:

Poetry: I'm not the best at writing poetry and so I'm not the most skilled at review poetry. However I do enjoy reading some poetry. You can request, but I may turn it down.


What I Won't Review:

Essays

Art

Articles

Lyrics

Scripts




Genres I love reviewing:

Fantasy

Action\adventure

Dramatic

Science Fiction

Mystery and suspense

Humor



Genres I won't review:

Horror

Politics

Spiritual

Supernatural / Heavily Magical Stories




Other notes:

Please no works that are 16,18 rated, have swearing or nudity.

Please note that I may turn down an offer if I'm not comfortable review it.


Please leave a link to the work you want reviewed and I'll get to it as soon as possible. No more that three requests at a time please. I'll catch up on those first and make a post then please request more.

Could you review my short story? Its fine if you don't want to. It's not in the green room anymore. The Sock That Picked Favorites

Sure. I'll do it as soon as I can.

All done. Ready for the next request.

Hi! If you have time, could you review my novel? Here's the url to the first chapter
Corrupted Courage Chapter 1

if you don't have time to read the whole thing, chapters 3 and 4 have no reviews, so could you focus on those?

I would review the chapter @Vita, but I've said in my will not review section that I can't review works that are 16 and above and that have swearing. Sorry about that.

Oh, I'm sorry! I must have missed that part in your original post, I didn't realize there was an age restriction.

Hey are you still doing review requests?

Could you please review the two chapters of my story.

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 1

The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 2

Chapter two is the one I'd like one the most for.

Sure. I'll have a look at it.

@HarryHardy I'll review the first two chapters, but I'm afraid I'm not going to be able to follow the whole story. I don't tend to read stories that have a lot of magic. It tends to make me uncomfortable. Is there anything else I could read that you've written instead?

@felistia

That's okay. And no I don't have anything else at the moment. There is a new one coming soon though. It is going to be a post apocalyptic storyline with no magic at all. How does that sound?

@HarryHardy That story line sounds exciting. I love that style of story.

Ohh!! I better speed up my work on that then.

Hi,
Please give me a very, very honest review on my short story (the link is given below). And yes, you can take your time. There's no need to rush.

Positive reviews encourage you to go on while negative reviews helps you to find out and overcome your weaknesses. So, I need both. But I need the negative reviews more than the positive ones.

Thank you.

Ayna - The Mirror

Hey there, felistia! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!