help a starving girl out?

Hey! It's Dae, and I'm accepting review requests.

What I review: Poetry, Novel Chapters(Please no more than 3 chapters at a time), really anything

What I don't review: Satire/Political pieces and Horror

Cost: Reviews are technically free, but all donations are appreciated! *hint hint wink wink*

How I review: The first thing I look for is grammar. If you have grammatical mistakes, expect those to be pointed out. And yes, I nitpick. The second thing I look for is pacing. If you're requesting a poem, i'm going to look at your meter. If not, I'm going to look at how you paced your piece. The rest is really dependent on the piece and how its written and where its focus is.

If you'd like a review, just link your piece down below and I'll get to it ASAP!

I reserve the right to reject any and all pieces for review.

You could review my Danser series. There are three parts as of now.

Here's the first one: "Danser" Pt. 1

Title of Piece: Ballerinas Out of the Wings
Type of Piece: Halfway between a short story and flash fiction
Any other comments: I am trying to make it fairly psychological so it would be great if you could mention your own personal emotional reaction if you want.

Hey can you review my prison escape introduction and chapter 1 please?
Thank you
The Running Man Introduction and Chapter 1

Hi Daenyss!
Title: Honey and Sunshine
Link: Honey and Sunshine
Type of Literature: slam poetry
Other Information (requests): pls help me its for a competition

Will you review this poem please?

Eyes

Hey there, Daenyss! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!